LOVE NEVER ENDS~~~~

by sonal on February 12, 2007, 09:03:05 AM
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LOVE NEVER ENDS,SO DID MY LOVE FOR UYOU EVER.
IT CONTINUED AND STILL IT IS.
BUT WHEN WOULD YOU UNDERSTAND,HOW MUCH LONG WOULD YOU MAKE ME WAIT?HOW MUCH WOULD YOU MAKE ME SUFFER AND CRY?
IT MIGHT BE HUNDRED NIGHTS THAT I SPENT THINKING ABOUT YOU.
AND IT MIGHT BE HUNDREDEN ONE TIMES YOU BROKE MY HEART.
BUT STILL I BELIEVE IN LOVE,
WHICH IS FOR YOU IN ME.
ACCEPTING FOR A DAY TO COME WHEN YOU WOULD UNDERSTAND
MY LOVE.......................WHICH STAYS FOREVER
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Tosha
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2007, 02:12:31 PM »
you definetely have strong feelings Sonal but it seems you need to read some poems by others so that you get an idea of how to put your thoughts into words.

even the look of a poem has its effect ... and so you must try and keep the lengths of the lines same.

I once again wish you all the best and hope to read some amazing work written by you.
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sonal
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2007, 08:10:35 AM »
thanx for ur advise i'll try to follow it................
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