love or money

by no_good_stranger on September 05, 2007, 06:06:25 PM
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is it wealth for which you yearn?
then all the money in the world for you i would earn

from dawn to dusk,from dusk till dawn
my soul to the devil would i pawn

to compliment your beauty so rare
with gold and diamonds to match your skin so fare

my back i would break
for u a palace i would make

in hell i would rest
at least i died knowing i gave you the very best

But if its love for which you want?
then you'd have no reason to hunt

my life for you would i sacrifice
for some this would suffice

your day's i'd fill with colour and joy
my love for you would never be coy

from every hill top you name i would scream
and i promise of only you will i dream

and to every soul would i declare
that i have found true love,thats very rare
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2007, 07:17:33 PM »
i love it!!
shudnt it be "skin so 'fair'" i hate pointing out such small errors which are probably typing mistakes but i only want this piece to be perfect!! Usual Smile
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2007, 03:38:22 PM »
nice work no_good_stranger G
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2007, 06:21:51 AM »
Thanks a million,Sahiba and Sanya,at times words cannot fully express the appreciation for the encouragement given.Your'll have fanned the ambers of a dying flame,I trully hope that i could produce better,and excell in fostering greater efforts with wide spread appeal.Sorry for the poor spelling,i may love words but my spelling is pythetic,also it takes me a few minutes to write,its a spur of the moment thing,and generally reflects the mood i'm in.i seldom check my spelling,but really the appreciation is really,really,really overwhelming
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2007, 02:06:34 PM »
A very good poem!! Simple words with deep ,eanings... Good job NGS!!
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