Love's Song...............Abul Asad

by Abul Asad on July 15, 2012, 11:35:15 AM
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When you, my love, are close, close to me
 How fleeting goes by time around you'n me
 A day turns to weeks, months soon pass away
 Starts another year soon, of bliss n love's glow
 O'speeding sun and fleeing silver moon
 Grant me, this tiny wish, this yearnings boon
 
Slow the earth around you 'n linger the stars a bit
let the shine of her eyes stay sparkingly lit
 and, O' twinkling stars comb her hair,
light up her weaving waves of black
 linger on there, for a while, some more
 O'shining sun, O' graceful moon, be nice today
 Let not the day n night pass each other today
 Abul Asad
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2012, 11:58:01 AM »
very nice...second paragraph is really adorable!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2012, 12:07:11 PM »
beautiful bahut dino ke baad aaye asad
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2012, 12:17:34 PM »
very nice...second paragraph is really adorable!!

SPS ji,

Thank you very much, your appreciation is taken to heart

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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2012, 12:18:47 PM »
beautiful bahut dino ke baad aaye asad

Dr. Saheb,

Thora sa beemar hogaya tha, rest kar raha tha
phir musafir raha, Hyderabad aa pohncha hoon
aapka shukriya aapne yad kiya.. mamnun rahunga aapka

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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2012, 12:28:39 PM »
Asad bhaai
khoob kamee khalee aapkee. ummeed hai ki ab aap poori tarah se theek hai.
I remember, your earlier poems in english. Once again a good one.
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2012, 12:37:21 PM »
Asad bhaai
khoob kamee khalee aapkee. ummeed hai ki ab aap poori tarah se theek hai.
I remember, your earlier poems in english. Once again a good one.
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MkV saheb,


Aapki kami se zyada shayed hamari betaabi rahi hogi
Shukriya apka ke aapne pehle ki shayari yaad rakhi
Behad mamnun hoon aapka aur aapke hafize par naaz rahega.

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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2012, 07:14:32 PM »
woooww beautiful lines

love the way u think sir

"twinkle stars comb her hair "

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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2012, 05:06:36 AM »
woooww beautiful lines

love the way u think sir

"twinkle stars comb her hair "

Thank you very much Roy Sir,
I am thrilled that you like it soo
I am humbled to have touched your likings


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