M Going Insane

by Bhupinder Kaur on October 18, 2013, 06:56:16 PM
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M going insane
Falling in love again
Feeling like
Its the very first time
Everything seems
So Fresh & Alive
Jus like
Me & She meant to be One
Though the years have gone much
But still its Desire carries a
Magnetic touch
Its a beautiful phase
Though she isn’t aware of my state
& unable to understand
My unspoken words
Her Beauty also allures me
Like Waves of a sea
Hitting the shore
I wanna to be with her
Jus like the radiant rays of sun
Spreading over her Sweet Face
A Curve of her Smile
A Silky thread of her Hairs
A Shine of her Eyes
A Shyness of her Cheeks
A Shimmer of her Lips
A puffed Air of her Breathe
A Beat of her heart
A Velvety lace of her skin
A Shadow of her Soul
A Youth of her Age
I want to be her Whole
Jus like a
Candle Glowing in the Dark

I want her to know
I m needing her now
No more
I can live dis way
Yes i m Going Insane
Falling in Love again.
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2013, 06:58:07 PM »
waah waah so beautiful
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2013, 08:22:46 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2013, 10:03:41 PM »
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Just awesomeeeeeeee and beautifully prosed bhupinder ji...
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2013, 10:31:29 PM »
beautiful.....!!!

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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2013, 12:03:02 AM »
kya baat hai bahut achha Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2013, 01:19:10 AM »
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that was really awsome

 icon_flowerlove is such pure and kind feeling,
still we find it a difficult dealing,
coz we demand alot,
we expect alot,
love simply needs two people to care,
to love endlessly and and to fearlessly share...... icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2013, 03:33:58 AM »
M going insane
Falling in love again
Feeling like
Its the very first time
Everything seems
So Fresh & Alive
Jus like
Me & She meant to be One
Though the years have gone much
But still its Desire carries a
Magnetic touch
Its a beautiful phase
Though she isn’t aware of my state
& unable to understand
My unspoken words
Her Beauty also allures me
Like Waves of a sea
Hitting the shore
I wanna to be with her
Jus like the radiant rays of sun
Spreading over her Sweet Face
A Curve of her Smile
A Silky thread of her Hairs
A Shine of her Eyes
A Shyness of her Cheeks
A Shimmer of her Lips
A puffed Air of her Breathe
A Beat of her heart
A Velvety lace of her skin
A Shadow of her Soul
A Youth of her Age
I want to be her Whole
Jus like a
Candle Glowing in the Dark

I want her to know
I m needing her now
No more
I can live dis way
Yes i m Going Insane
Falling in Love again.

Kya bat hai,
Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2013, 04:05:57 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2013, 09:22:16 AM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2013, 04:58:31 PM »
That was simply beautiful Bhupinder ji ... My compliments ....
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«Reply #11 on: October 24, 2013, 07:44:58 PM »
That was simply beautiful Bhupinder ji ... My compliments ....
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Kya bat hai,
Bahut Khoob.
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that was really awsome

 icon_flowerlove is such pure and kind feeling,
still we find it a difficult dealing,
coz we demand alot,
we expect alot,
love simply needs two people to care,
to love endlessly and and to fearlessly share...... icon_flower

kya baat hai bahut achha Thumbs UP
beautiful.....!!!

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beautiful.....!!!

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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Just awesomeeeeeeee and beautifully prosed bhupinder ji...
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THANK YOU ALL, for your valuable Time & Comments
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2013, 07:45:36 PM »
waah waah so beautiful
Thank You Sirji.......
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«Reply #13 on: October 25, 2013, 01:27:08 PM »
very beautiful poem.......
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«Reply #14 on: November 03, 2013, 03:36:11 PM »
JUST BEAUTIFULLLL
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