~~~MAKE A WISH...........

by sonal on February 09, 2007, 02:52:59 PM
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TODAY IAM OUT TO MAKE A WISH,
A WISH THAT IS VERY PRECIOUS TO ME,
AND SO MY WISH IS YOU.
BUT OH!,WILL YOU BE MINE?
WILL MY THIS WISH COME TRUE,
OR WILL IT NOT?
I AM WORRIED BECAUSE I DON'T TO LOSE YOU ANYWAY,
BEACAUSE A LIFE WITHOUT YOU IS LIKE HAVING NO LIFE,
AND I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU ,ALONE,IN THIS STRANGE WORLD.
I WANT TO BE WITH YOU NOW AND FOR EVER,
TILL MY LAST BREATH........................................... .........................TILL THE TIME OF JUDGEMENT
 :D "I LOVE YOU" :wink:  :wink:  :wink:
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2007, 03:35:22 PM »
Quote from: "sonal"
TODAY IAM OUT TO MAKE A WISH,
A WISH THAT IS VERY PRECIOUS TO ME,
AND SO MY WISH IS YOU.
BUT OH!,WILL YOU BE MINE?
WILL MY THIS WISH COME TRUE,
OR WILL IT NOT?
I AM WORRIED BECAUSE I DON'T TO LOSE YOU ANYWAY,
BEACAUSE A LIFE WITHOUT YOU IS LIKE HAVING NO LIFE,
AND I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU ,ALONE,IN THIS STRANGE WORLD.
I WANT TO BE WITH YOU NOW AND FOR EVER,
TILL MY LAST BREATH........................................... .........................TILL THE TIME OF JUDGEMENT
 :D "I LOVE YOU" :wink:  :wink:  :wink:


WOW nice Composition of Words...to Show Love....waise kon hai woh Lucky...Sonal... :wink:  :wink:
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sonal
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2007, 08:54:47 AM »
waysay hum bhi nahi janthay,woooooooooooooooooh lucky person knon,huuuuuuuuum Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh???
kyuki humnay unhay nahi dayka hai,per unkay dil ko dayka hai,
humnay unsay  pyaar nahi kiya   hai,per unkay dil say pyaar  kiya hai,
unkay sasoon say mohobbath hai humay ,unkay dil kay dhadkan say mohabbath say................
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Tosha
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2007, 02:07:28 PM »
a nice thought Sonal ... touching words.

all i'll say for this one is that if you use small letters and try and rhyme the poem it will look superb!!
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sonal
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2007, 08:13:06 AM »
oh thanxs,help me to improve more & more by advising,i really love getting ur advise................anvy thanxs again
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Tosha
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2007, 08:41:19 AM »
And i hope to see some exciting poem fm you soon ... i'm waiting :D
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