make OR break

by Geetika tewari on December 09, 2012, 06:47:55 AM
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With the lonely world around,
A silent thought surrounds..
Thinking over that though again and again,
but that thought neither reaps loss nor gain..
Just then a tear rolls down your cheek,
and then the heart says"baby don't cry it'll just make you weak"..
Don't shed them when you are sad,
though it lightens your heavy heart,yet it will make someone feel bad..
"but why should i feel bad thinking about someone,"
the heart says-cause you love that someone though you might feel now as done....
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«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2012, 10:00:39 AM »
nice
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«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2012, 12:33:26 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2012, 04:26:00 PM »
With the lonely world around,
A silent thought surrounds..
Thinking over that though again and again,
but that thought neither reaps loss nor gain..
Just then a tear rolls down your cheek,
and then the heart says"baby don't cry it'll just make you weak"..
Don't shed them when you are sad,
though it lightens your heavy heart,yet it will make someone feel bad..
"but why should i feel bad thinking about someone,"
the heart says-cause you love that someone though you might feel now as done....


to be, waaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2012, 03:58:35 AM »
tender feelings delicately expressed . Keep coming . Welcome to YO.
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2012, 09:28:27 AM »
good welcome
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2012, 09:57:34 AM »
nycccccccccccccc
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2012, 07:41:35 AM »
beautiful keep writing
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