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someone's in my heart.
whoever it is...
seems dear to me.
someone's in my heart.
whoever it is...
seems dear to me.
i await eagerly for him...
seems sometimes to me that this love...
... just like a dream.
someone's in my heart.
whoever it is...
seems dear to me.
till the time i wasn't his admirer...
i never knew what love is all about.
he started appearing in my thoughts as such...
and as such he began filling my life.
someone's in my heart.
whoever it is...
seems dear to me.
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2005, 11:22:20 AM » |
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wah sonu...bohot hi pyare jazbaat hai...aur bohot ache se likha hai!!!... somehow mujhe khud ke feelings nazar ate hai tumari is poem me!!
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2005, 12:35:34 PM » |
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wow!! sonu..how beautiful feelings you have in your write....its just fantastic.....lovely love poem...
Love Seeds
If love could be sown
In a fertile Land,
It would be seen
In every individual’s hand.
Everybody would have
Its seeds in his pockets,
Numbered as on the dockets.
Love is always nourished
In a fertile heart,
To grow and attain the position
Of a sweetheart.
When it is sown
In a barren heart,
Would be thrown
And torn apart.
Sow the love seeds
In whatever ‘He’ or ‘She’
Must be sweetened,
Like fruit ripened
On a tree.
~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*~~~~
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Sonu
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2005, 11:40:29 PM » |
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shukriya meena and harash ji
acha meena to tum keskey leyea eysi feeling rakhti ho kon hai vo mujhey nahi batowgi
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2005, 08:55:47 AM » |
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very nice sonu and harsha ji  ,excellent pieco of poetry here. |
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2005, 03:26:14 PM » |
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shukriya meena and harash ji
acha meena to tum keskey leyea eysi feeling rakhti ho kon hai vo mujhey nahi batowgi :oops: waqt ane pe bataongi :oops: |
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2005, 03:29:36 PM » |
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gud lines sonu............................................. ..............
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Sonu
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«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2005, 02:25:58 AM » |
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meena acha ji bhut sharm ah rahi hai arey sabkey samaney shram ati hai meno to meyrey kan mey ahker kheydo e-mail mey likhdo e-mail hai na tumahrye pass nahi hai to note kerlo teyreynam@yahoo.com. sharam key marey keysye laal huye padi hoo  ::::: shukriya pandit ji :::::::: |
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«Reply #8 on: July 20, 2005, 05:53:50 PM » |
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someone's in my heart.
whoever it is...
seems dear to me.
someone's in my heart.
whoever it is...
seems dear to me.
i await eagerly for him...
seems sometimes to me that this love...
... just like a dream.
someone's in my heart.
whoever it is...
seems dear to me.
till the time i wasn't his admirer...
i never knew what love is all about.
he started appearing in my thoughts as such...
and as such he began filling my life.
someone's in my heart.
whoever it is...
seems dear to me. wow wow sonu.......................superbssssssssss dost............ too goodd harsh...............  |
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Sonu
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2005, 03:31:22 AM » |
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:::::::::::::::::::::::::::: shukriya waheed ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: |
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2005, 06:56:06 PM » |
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:::::::::::::::::::::::::::: shukriya waheed ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: hmmmmmmm ur always..............welcome Sonia........... oonchi emaraton say makan mera ghir gaya kuch log mere hisay ka sooraj bhi kha gay...................................nm |
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Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2005, 02:27:21 AM » |
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uhnchi emarto sey ghar tumhara ghir gaya
mana key kuch loog ney tumharey hesey ka suraj bhi chin leya,
tum keysey insaan they jo apney hesey key leya bhi ladh na sakey
apni chudu apney ghar valu ki bhi phikar na ker sakey.
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2005, 06:26:20 PM » |
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very nice sonu.....................bahot khoob.........jhaler waali...... |
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2005, 05:24:20 AM » |
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«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2005, 05:28:42 PM » |
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ur welcome Sonu...................... ........................ |
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