my mom my best frd (for my Mother)

by nishita on August 01, 2004, 03:19:37 PM
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My mother is the sweetest and
Most delicate of all.
She knows more of paradise
Than angels can recall.
She's not only beautiful
But passionately young,
Playful as a kid, yet wise
As one who has lived long.

Her love is like the rush of life,
A bubbling, laughing spring
That runs through all like liquid light
And makes the mountains sing.

-- some poet

(to continue i add my own lines below)

she is my fairy tale princess
her love has no end
i'l hold the memories in my heart
my mom is my best friend!!
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sanju
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2004, 03:22:29 PM »
nice thoghts nishi....ur a true dauhter ! keep it up.!
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nishita
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2004, 03:38:53 PM »
thank u sanju
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2004, 02:34:05 AM »
My mom was,
sweet and generous
young and wise
she wasn't very playful
but she was very nice

once I came to Canada
I didn't see her much
then she passed away
and I missed her much

the most I can say is
she was a sunshine beam
wasn't very beautiful
but she was the wisdom queen!

P.S. Guys, when I wrote this poem, I just wrote it you know, but I don't think my mom was very wise because she had a very narrow outlook for most things. Ma kei liyei shaayad mujhhey aisey likhhna tha -

ma chaahey
ho kitaab adhhoori
ma ma hei
sabsey nyaari
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2004, 03:22:22 AM »
nice beena
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2004, 04:13:25 AM »
Thank you Pooja!
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nishita
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2004, 09:42:34 AM »
nice beena
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2004, 03:24:35 PM »
nishita your new avtar is sooooooooo nice, can I steal it?  :wink:

If my taking the same avtar bothered you and you'd like your piggy one back, just let me know and I'll change mine.
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nishita
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2004, 06:35:02 AM »
its ok beena... no probs.. guess u want my new avtaar Winking ..
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Tosha
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«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2004, 06:06:47 AM »
its beautiful beena ji...
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2004, 10:54:49 AM »
Nice good one..

I Will also write something on my mother.. Soon..

Ques..
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Neelam
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2004, 02:53:58 PM »
nishita and beena
both Excellent!
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nishita
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«Reply #12 on: October 18, 2004, 11:20:43 AM »
thks neelam n Mr.Q
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Tosha
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«Reply #13 on: October 27, 2004, 10:54:30 AM »
chand shabdo main mushkil hai
maan ke rishte ho karna bayan
wo mamta wo pyaar
hai nirala ankoha
kya kahe sakega koi
ki kya ussne sahi hai
usse ke dil se pucho
kyo dukh main bhi wo hasto sada hai
maa to tofha hai
tofha khuda ka
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brokenarrow_daiict
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«Reply #14 on: November 16, 2004, 01:59:30 AM »
Nice nishita.If u can plz comment on my post(Mother) also.Bye.
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