Oh My Love

by Bhupinder Kaur on September 11, 2013, 01:31:17 PM
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I simply run out of words
When you are there
In front of me
I swear
& it is true
I don’t know
How it happened and when
I started feeling for you
Ur presence is so magnificent
That it draws
All my attention  
& drags my emotion, closer to you
You been not aware of my things
Giggles & easily passes by

Oh My Love
Ur smile,
Ur talks
Ur touch
Ur just one glance
Is all what I wish
It’s hard for me
To express ...
To let you, all know
How I feel for you
U r there in imagination
U r there in my dreams
& in all possible ways one can
Oh  My Love,
Look in my eyes
Read those lines
Which I cudnt framed in
Which I cudnt uttered it
Listen the beats of my heart
Which means you &
Only you

Oh My Love
I m getting lost
& ready to loose myself
Jus to win you by myside
The moment I close my eyes
Ur picture fills in
The moment I breathe
Ur fragrance spreads all over &
I desperately inhales
Those hitting puffs of air
The moment I walk
Ur shadow joins mine
The moment I m quiet
Ur song goes on
There is no such moment
Which doesn’t manifests you
Oh My Love
Be Mine... Ameen


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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2013, 01:39:57 PM »
Wow!!!Beautiful.
I simply run out of words
When you are there
In front of me
I swear
& it is true
I don’t know
How it happened and when
I started feeling for you
Ur presence is so magnificent
That it draws
All my attention  
& drags my emotion, closer to you
You been not aware of my things
Giggles & easily passes by

Oh My Love
Ur smile,
Ur talks
Ur touch
Ur just one glance
Is all what I wish
It’s hard for me
To express ...
To let you, all know
How I feel for you
U r there in imagination
U r there in my dreams
& in all possible ways one can
Oh  My Love,
Look in my eyes
Read those lines
Which I cudnt framed in
Which I cudnt uttered it
Listen the beats of my heart
Which means you &
Only you

Oh My Love
I m getting lost
& ready to loose myself
Jus to win you by myside
The moment I close my eyes
Ur picture fills in
The moment I breathe
Ur fragrance spreads all over &
I desperately inhales
Those hitting puffs of air
The moment I walk
Ur shadow joins mine
The moment I m quiet
Ur song goes on
There is no such moment
Which doesn’t manifests you
Oh My Love
Be Mine... Ameen


Accept Rau on it.
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2013, 01:40:46 PM »
beautiful
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2013, 01:48:08 PM »
Awesome poem!
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2013, 02:49:36 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2013, 03:04:08 PM »
EXCELLELENT. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2013, 03:33:21 PM »
GOOD ONE............... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2013, 03:44:19 PM »
woooooow wonderful, superb...  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2013, 07:05:25 PM »
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Oh My Love
Ur smile,
Ur talks
Ur touch
Ur just one glance
Is all what I wish
It’s hard for me
To express ...
To let you, all know
How I feel for you
U r there in imagination
U r there in my dreams
& in all possible ways one can
Oh  My Love,

Awesome linesssssssss....
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2013, 08:53:13 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2013, 11:13:46 PM »
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very very nicely expressesd bhupinder jee..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2013, 11:19:30 PM »
AWESIME AWESOME AWESOME AND JUST AWESOME GREAT WORK DEAR
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2013, 04:34:34 PM »
AWESIME AWESOME AWESOME AND JUST AWESOME GREAT WORK DEAR
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

very very nicely expressesd bhupinder jee..happy9
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woooooow wonderful, superb...  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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bahut khoob
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FOR UR VALUABLE TIME & COMMENTS
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2013, 04:36:51 PM »
EXCELLELENT. Thumbs UP
Thank You
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2013, 04:37:59 PM »
Wow!!!Beautiful.Accept Rau on it.
Thank You ji
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