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O'twinkling stars be her eyes.................... AbulAsad

by Abul Asad on January 04, 2013, 08:13:27 PM

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O'Twinkling Stars be her Eyes

O' twinkling stars be her eyes, like diamonds cut in skies
sprinkling my heart's inner wrinkles with a surprise

O' silver moon your light be pale, against the glow of her shiny face
O' shinny sun your warmth be cold against her smiley grace

O' night 'tis you who lends color, to the long tresses of her hair
Hiding wonders of a galaxy, filled with stars'n their sparkling fare

As they weaves their turns'n knots, like a mighty river carving
down mountains'n rocks, rushing like thunder
inside a dark forest's wonder

O'twinkling stars be her eyes
like diamonds cut in skies
Abul Asad


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Re: O'twinkling stars be her eyes.................... AbulAsad

«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2013, 11:32:10 PM »

lovely


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Re: O'twinkling stars be her eyes.................... AbulAsad

«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2013, 12:18:04 AM »

very nice


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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2013, 02:37:00 AM »

wow, wonderful

As they weaves their turns'n knots,

like a mighty river carving down mountains'n rocks,

rushing like thunder inside a dark forest's wonder.

Simply Best
Applause


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Re: O'twinkling stars be her eyes.................... AbulAsad

«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2013, 03:10:29 AM »

Quote from: Aarish on January 05, 2013, 02:37:00 AM

wow, wonderful

As they weaves their turns'n knots,

like a mighty river carving down mountains'n rocks,

rushing like thunder inside a dark forest's wonder.

Simply Best
Applause

Aarish sahab,

Thank you soo very much, your appreciation is soo appreciated


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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2013, 03:11:05 AM »

Quote from: suman59 on January 04, 2013, 11:32:10 PM

lovely

Thank you, that was a nice thing to say.


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«Reply #6 on: January 05, 2013, 03:11:37 AM »

Quote from: nandbahu on January 05, 2013, 12:18:04 AM

very nice

Thanks a ton


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Re: O'twinkling stars be her eyes.................... AbulAsad

«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2013, 05:21:30 AM »

Quote from: Abul Asad on January 04, 2013, 08:13:27 PM

very nice


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«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2013, 05:40:42 AM »

Quote from: sahal on January 05, 2013, 05:21:30 AM

very nice

Thanks a million Sahal sahab,
your words are truly appreciated


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«Reply #9 on: January 05, 2013, 10:55:45 AM »

beautifully written, very nice


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«Reply #10 on: January 05, 2013, 07:03:27 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on January 05, 2013, 10:55:45 AM

beautifully written, very nice

Aqsh sahab shukriya,
meherbani janaab aapsab ki


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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2013, 08:44:43 AM »

wah


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