our rhyme~ Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on September 18, 2010, 06:37:40 AM
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This poetry is an answer i gave on one of my friend's poetry, she's a very nice poet..so sharing my answer on her poetry wid you all~



so, as you think we are
the bond will remain for life's so far

so, as you were in my arms
always in the heavenly farms

with the flowers kissing you everytime
the birds singing our rhymes

one thing which would always be
only you my eyes need to see

angels write the story of thee
The love between you and me...
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Anshumali
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«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2010, 07:00:57 AM »
This poetry is an answer i gave on one of my friend's poetry, she's a very nice poet..so sharing my answer on her poetry wid you all~



so, as you think we are
the bond will remain for life's so far

so, as you were in my arms
always in the heavenly farms

with the flowers kissing you everytime
the birds singing our rhymes

one thing which would always be
only you my eyes need to see

angels write the story of thee
The love between you and me...
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Good One ... very nice creation ... dil se daad hazir hai... likhte rahen aage bhi... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2010, 07:09:23 AM »
dhanyawad anshumali ji~
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2010, 09:41:54 PM »
Good one Abhi Ji
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2010, 12:05:58 PM »
very nice poem
Abhi ji.
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poppoetry
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2010, 12:32:27 PM »
Really good.....very nice Abhi ji.....
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2010, 01:30:36 PM »
Awwwww.... very Lovely and Beautiful Creation Abhi..

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !!!!
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neelgold
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2010, 11:28:47 PM »
very very nice
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2010, 07:07:46 AM »
Good one Abhi Ji
very nice poem
Abhi ji.
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Really good.....very nice Abhi ji.....
Awwwww.... very Lovely and Beautiful Creation Abhi..

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !!!!
very very nice

aap sabka bahut bahut shukriya jiii..apko pasand aayi
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