PAIN....................tamanna1

by tamanna1 on October 16, 2011, 08:35:59 AM
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Like a bird whose feathers have been snapped
Slowly health failing, but life in the body still trapped

Days and nights of severe pain
The medicines I take, gives no gain

Every move has become very troublesome
Basic work has become so very cumbersome

Tired, dizzy and in pain I wait
Hoping to get better after every night

The new day has so far given me no hope
Don't know, how long my body will cope.

My eyes looking to sleep all the time
Soon I will be gone, but the clocks will still chime
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2011, 12:57:13 PM »
Quote from: tamanna1 on October 16, 2011, 08:35:59 AM
Like a bird whose feathers have been snapped
Slowly health failing, but life in the body still trapped

Days and nights of severe pain
The medicines I take, gives no gain

Every move has become very troublesome
Basic work has become so very cumbersome

Tired, dizzy and in pain I wait
Hoping to get better after every night

The new day has so far given me no hope
Don't know, how long my body will cope.

My eyes looking to sleep all the time
Soon I will be gone, but the clocks will still chime




Just Beauuuuuuuuu....tiful.
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2011, 01:25:38 PM »
Thanks Usha Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2011, 05:26:03 PM »
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Quote from: tamanna1 on October 16, 2011, 08:35:59 AM
Like a bird whose feathers have been snapped
Slowly health failing, but life in the body still trapped

Days and nights of severe pain
The medicines I take, gives no gain

Every move has become very troublesome
Basic work has become so very cumbersome

Tired, dizzy and in pain I wait
Hoping to get better after every night

The new day has so far given me no hope
Don't know, how long my body will cope.

My eyes looking to sleep all the time
Soon I will be gone, but the clocks will still chime
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mkv
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2011, 03:01:44 AM »
Vow..very nice
I hope everything is fine..
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tamanna1
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2011, 06:40:58 AM »
Thanks all...
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sarfira
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2011, 09:26:05 AM »
gud
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sunildehgawani
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2011, 10:52:37 AM »
absolutly nice creation ........tamanna ji
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mkv
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2012, 04:17:01 PM »
Tamanna jee
i just saw this post and could not stop myself from replying once again.
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2012, 04:20:03 PM »
lovely ... nice creation tamanna  Applause Applause
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