-----/// Please don't go ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on September 29, 2013, 02:44:02 PM
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when you were about to go
my lips were saying 'yes'
my heart was saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go

dreams were with you
my life was with you
how lonely I was without you
i didn't knew how to show
so I was only saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go

what i was saying were all lies
with tears full in eyes
said I don't love u, but
thought that you would know
i don't wan't to let you go
Oh my love! please don't go
Oh my dear! please don't go

you should have turned around
to see me waiting for you
but you never turned around
leaving me all alone
i know you are far away
but my heart is still saying 'no'
Oh my love! please don't go
Oh my dear! please don't go


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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2013, 03:06:23 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2013, 03:15:59 PM »
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 icon_flower VERY NICE CREATION HRIDAY JI icon_flower

  icon_flower MOST OF THE THINGS WE MISS IN LIFE BY SAYING NO TOO EARLY AND YES TOO LATE  icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2013, 05:07:14 PM »
when you were about to go
my lips were saying 'yes'
my heart was saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2013, 06:13:10 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 29, 2013, 02:44:02 PM


when you were about to go
my lips were saying 'yes'
my heart was saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go

dreams were with you
my life was with you
how lonely I was without you
i didn't knew how to show
so I was only saying 'no'
Oh my dear! please don't go
Oh my love! please don't go

what i was saying were all lies
with tears full in eyes
said I don't love u, but
thought that you would know
i don't wan't to let you go
Oh my love! please don't go
Oh my dear! please don't go

you should have turned around
to see me waiting for you
but you never turned around
leaving me all alone
i know you are far away
but my heart is still saying 'no'
Oh my love! please don't go
Oh my dear! please don't go


*****HRIDAY*****






excelllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllle nt poetry ,sir

what an improvisation in the application--nicely pen down
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«Reply #5 on: September 29, 2013, 06:36:45 PM »
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waah kya baat hai hriday jee..

chhae hue hai charo oor aap to..

Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2013, 07:57:25 PM »
nice
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«Reply #7 on: September 29, 2013, 08:32:38 PM »
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Bahut khoob hriday ji.. full of emotions.. dheron dheron daad...
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2013, 02:07:41 AM »
v. Nice
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2013, 03:07:18 AM »
NiCe OnE ji
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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2013, 03:24:59 AM »
Words coming straight from the heart Hriday ji .... Daad apko
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«Reply #11 on: September 30, 2013, 11:06:13 AM »
wah wah
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«Reply #12 on: October 03, 2013, 10:19:58 PM »
thank you sooo much Sahal ji....!!!

Quote from: sahal on September 29, 2013, 03:06:23 PM
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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2013, 04:51:38 AM »
thank you sooo much....!!!

Quote from: ambalika sharma on September 29, 2013, 03:15:59 PM
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2015, 12:04:12 AM »
Nice. Applause
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