Raaj (Means Failure):English

Raajbornonlyforyou

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So much is there to say you
So much in my mind to share with you
And everything coming out of my eyes
can't you see it baby
Can't you hear my heart beat

You cannot even think , how I am living now-a-days
Like , everything gone away from my life
And the fact is nothing remained for me
I am trying to hide from me
I started hating me
I don't know why I am doing all these
But can't you see me baby
how I became these days

Now I am really scared of talking to people
I lock myself in my room
I talk to myself and counting the days that remained in my life
I cannot cry anymore baby
Can't you see my eyes
Can't you see the red blooded tears

I know I am a failure
With a failed love story
with many failed dreams
But I truly loved you baby
Can't you see this failure heart
Can't you see many failed broken pieces ...........Raaj


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2010, 04:34:05 PM »

beautiful.. Very well Expressed .. This Poetry has something special in it.. which touched my heart... Beautiful Keep writing.


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2010, 04:37:31 PM »

i dint liked this poem of urs.....love gives strength to win the life ...but u accepted defeat...and now trying to prove that love did it to u......

u r lieing to urself dear...live life and make others happy....if u r not happy its just coz of ur own feelings....

love is not everything in life.......live ur life for others and u will get what u wish from GOD.......


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2010, 04:43:00 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 04, 2010, 04:37:31 PM

Sorry but thank you very much for your kind comments ..
If you really loved some one and they broke your heart, you became alone.. You did somany sacrifices for her and 13 years gone , if she say you that she don't love you...how you feel??
This is my feeling...Raaj


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 04:54:21 PM »

i understand raaj ur feelings and i do care for them..but calling urself a failure...just for love sake..is just .....not worth yaar.....


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 04:59:40 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 04, 2010, 04:54:21 PM

i understand raaj ur feelings and i do care for them..but calling urself a failure...just for love sake..is just .....not worth yaar.....

hey , how can i make a signature like yours....please help me


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2010, 05:03:22 PM »

kasak di pyar aisi cheez hai jo apna rukh badlta rehta hai kabhi bharpur khushi deta hai to kabhi....itne gham ki puri zindagi kum pad jati hai......unhe sehn karne k liye,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2010, 05:04:48 PM »

Beautiful Written Raaj.. Its really Amazing !


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2010, 05:06:12 PM »

Quote from: Raajbornonlyforyou on September 04, 2010, 04:59:40 PM

hey , how can i make a signature like yours....please help me

i made it wid photoshop...if u want i will make it for u...


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2010, 05:09:56 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 04, 2010, 05:06:12 PM

i made it wid photoshop...if u want i will make it for u...

Please make it for me also ..I know photoshop but not good at it and I have no photoshop software with me , it costs me very much here...


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2010, 05:12:59 PM »

very nice Mr. Raaj....its true....when smone special breaks our heart....the person becme alone.....13yrs...a long time....u r right on ur place kasak bt we cant say that person's feelngs wrng who got nthng in love.... chot khaya hua insaan dheere dheere sambhalta h....well...really nice poem Mr. raaj...


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2010, 06:30:00 PM »

Quote from: Raajbornonlyforyou on September 04, 2010, 05:09:56 PM

Please make it for me also ..I know photoshop but not good at it and I have no photoshop software with me , it costs me very much here...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 04, 2010, 05:06:12 PM

i made it wid photoshop...if u want i will make it for u...

But how can i send to u, there is no option for reply or sending a message..give your email address then I will send it their..
That is my photo on beach and I want to write some thing on it...
can you do it plsss?


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2010, 06:32:08 PM »

yes sure i wil do it...


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2010, 06:33:54 PM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on September 04, 2010, 05:12:59 PM

Thanks for your comments and am not a great person , so you can call me just Raaj, no mr please....Raaj


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Re: Raaj (Means Failure)

«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2010, 06:38:38 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 04, 2010, 06:32:08 PM

yes sure i wil do it...

but where I need to send ......


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