*Selfish Friend*

by Roja on January 24, 2009, 02:07:17 PM
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I wanted him to know and realise
But he never saw loneliness in my Eyes
And I experienced that vanished hand
My friend sunk somewhere in the sand.

So much still softly my heart spoke
But to not a word He awoke.

Shyly my eyes tried to make him know
But to my feelings his eyes went low.
Though I heard the voice of his heart
That said it was hard to part.

When my eyes tried to reply
To his ears He had defy.

That day with dusk my victory fell
Into a unfound, unheard Well.

That day I lost all that I had
Ohhh, Life is but such bad..
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2009, 03:31:07 PM »
Very nicely presented piece of work Roja Ji

Correction to this line
So much still softly my heat sopke
 "    "    "       "     "  heart spoke

No offence pls                       
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2009, 04:59:56 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 24, 2009, 03:31:07 PM
Very nicely presented piece of work Roja Ji

Correction to this line
So much still softly my heat sopke
 "    "    "       "     "  heart spoke

No offence pls                       

Thanks Rajesh Harish ji...

(I corrected those lines sir ji) Usual Smile
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2009, 02:15:48 AM »
U R Always Welcome
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2009, 08:17:19 AM »
Roja its beautiful.
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2009, 04:15:53 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on January 31, 2009, 08:17:19 AM
Roja its beautiful.

Thanks sophi dear.
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2009, 06:42:39 PM »
Quote from: Roja on January 24, 2009, 02:07:17 PM
I wanted him to know and realise
But he never saw loneliness in my Eyes
And I experienced that vanished hand
My friend sunk somewhere in the sand.

So much still softly my heart spoke
But to not a word He awoke.

Shyly my eyes tried to make him know
But to my feelings his eyes went low.
Though I heard the voice of his heart
That said it was hard to part.

When my eyes tried to reply
To his ears He had defy.

That day with dusk my victory fell
Into a unfound, unheard Well.

That day I lost all that I had
Ohhh, Life is but such bad..


very nice Roja....

The day i get him, life seems so good
with him, i am always in my cheering mood
the days without him are sad
is this the reason, why life is bad ?


jasbir singh
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2009, 08:56:51 PM »
Very nice Roja..NIce reply Jasbir Ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2009, 09:14:59 PM »
Good work Roja and Jas ji
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2009, 07:26:42 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on February 11, 2009, 08:56:51 PM
Very nice Roja..NIce reply Jasbir Ji

THANKS CELMIRA

JASBIR SINGH
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2009, 07:27:13 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on February 11, 2009, 09:14:59 PM
Good work Roja and Jas ji

THANKS POOJA

JASBIR SINGH
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2009, 03:59:32 AM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 08, 2009, 06:42:39 PM
very nice Roja....

The day i get him, life seems so good
with him, i am always in my cheering mood
the days without him are sad
is this the reason, why life is bad ?


jasbir singh

Thanks and nice lines fm yr heart  Usual Smile
Those are bygone days... I have forgotten. Things were hard that time
Now it is ok... i mean, normal. Usual Smile
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2009, 04:07:33 AM »
Wow bahut khoob Roja dear n Jasbir ji.very touching n lovely creation.great work.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Sager4u
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2009, 04:18:44 AM »
I hope roja ye mere liye nahi hai,kyoki bahut din hua hai main tumhe kuch reply nahi de pa raha hun

well,very gud creation roja
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Roja
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2009, 04:40:43 AM »
Quote from: Sager4u on November 08, 2009, 04:18:44 AM
I hope roja ye mere liye nahi hai,kyoki bahut din hua hai main tumhe kuch reply nahi de pa raha hun

well,very gud creation roja


haha.. yeh aap k liye nahi likha gaya Sagar. Aap aisa nahi jaisa poem mein darshaya hai. Hai aise bi insaan... Maaf kardeni chahiye aise bimar logon ko  Usual Smile. Bahut bahut thanks dear aapne hamara likha pada aur tarif ki.
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