*Selfish Friend*:English

Roja

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I wanted him to know and realise
But he never saw loneliness in my Eyes
And I experienced that vanished hand
My friend sunk somewhere in the sand.

So much still softly my heart spoke
But to not a word He awoke.

Shyly my eyes tried to make him know
But to my feelings his eyes went low.
Though I heard the voice of his heart
That said it was hard to part.

When my eyes tried to reply
To his ears He had defy.

That day with dusk my victory fell
Into a unfound, unheard Well.

That day I lost all that I had
Ohhh, Life is but such bad..


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2009, 03:31:07 PM »

Very nicely presented piece of work Roja Ji

Correction to this line
So much still softly my heat sopke
" " " " " heart spoke

No offence pls


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Roja

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2009, 04:59:56 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 24, 2009, 03:31:07 PM

Very nicely presented piece of work Roja Ji

Correction to this line
So much still softly my heat sopke
" " " " " heart spoke

No offence pls

Thanks Rajesh Harish ji...

(I corrected those lines sir ji)


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2009, 02:15:48 AM »

U R Always Welcome


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deepika_divya

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2009, 08:17:19 AM »

Roja its beautiful.


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Roja

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2009, 04:15:53 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on January 31, 2009, 08:17:19 AM

Roja its beautiful.

Thanks sophi dear.


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jasbirsingh

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2009, 06:42:39 PM »

Quote from: Roja on January 24, 2009, 02:07:17 PM

very nice Roja....

The day i get him, life seems so good
with him, i am always in my cheering mood
the days without him are sad
is this the reason, why life is bad ?

jasbir singh


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Talat

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2009, 08:56:51 PM »

Very nice Roja..NIce reply Jasbir Ji


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Pooja

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2009, 09:14:59 PM »

Good work Roja and Jas ji


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jasbirsingh

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2009, 07:26:42 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 11, 2009, 08:56:51 PM

Very nice Roja..NIce reply Jasbir Ji

THANKS CELMIRA

JASBIR SINGH


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jasbirsingh

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2009, 07:27:13 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 11, 2009, 09:14:59 PM

Good work Roja and Jas ji

THANKS POOJA

JASBIR SINGH


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Roja

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2009, 03:59:32 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 08, 2009, 06:42:39 PM

very nice Roja....

The day i get him, life seems so good
with him, i am always in my cheering mood
the days without him are sad
is this the reason, why life is bad ?

jasbir singh

Thanks and nice lines fm yr heart
Those are bygone days... I have forgotten. Things were hard that time
Now it is ok... i mean, normal.


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madhuwesh

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2009, 04:07:33 AM »

Wow bahut khoob Roja dear n Jasbir ji.very touching n lovely creation.great work.excellent icon_thumleft


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Sager4u

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2009, 04:18:44 AM »

I hope roja ye mere liye nahi hai,kyoki bahut din hua hai main tumhe kuch reply nahi de pa raha hun

well,very gud creation roja


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Roja

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Re: *Selfish Friend*

«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2009, 04:40:43 AM »

Quote from: Sager4u on November 08, 2009, 04:18:44 AM

I hope roja ye mere liye nahi hai,kyoki bahut din hua hai main tumhe kuch reply nahi de pa raha hun

well,very gud creation roja

haha.. yeh aap k liye nahi likha gaya Sagar. Aap aisa nahi jaisa poem mein darshaya hai. Hai aise bi insaan... Maaf kardeni chahiye aise bimar logon ko . Bahut bahut thanks dear aapne hamara likha pada aur tarif ki.


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