SICK 'n' TIRED _____________________ !~ROY!~

by roy on August 03, 2012, 08:25:34 AM
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this is a poem describing the feelings of a poor guy who never had the experience of love n care ...... please give ur time to read it till the end nd do lemme now ur opinion !!


                              SICK 'n' TIRED

um sick 'n' tired of each n every thing
um sick 'n' tired of being a living being ...

sick 'n' tired of surroundings um traped in,
for the reason - it is irritating me deep-within...

sick 'n' tired of being a poor guy,
dreaming of all those things i wasn't able to buy ...

use to console my heart that every dog bounce back with his time ,
the day will come when ill b holding a glass of expencive wine.....

buh now um  sick 'n' tired of dogging my want,
missing all those things i had never own !!




um sick 'n' tired of each n every person in my life i had,
um sick 'n' tired of uh MOM  n DAD ....
sick of uh dad, who always act as he'z mad ,

fighting with mum for little things all the time,
created a feeling of hatred in me  and made me bad ...

tired of waiting for mum who was busy all the time,
who had to go to earn money,
money to make my future fall in line ...

but coz of this i starved for her love n care ,
lookin back then - mum u were never there ...

the times i wished to crey  U WERE NEVER THERE,
hug me , console me n to wipe of my TEAR...

i was all alone - back then ,
struggling struggling with my sorrow nd all those things through which i went ...

now um sick 'n' tired of loneliness in which um drowning
sick 'n' tired of showting.. nd crawling ....

WISH TO FLY AWAY WITHOUT ANY WING ,
UM sick 'n' tired OF EACH N EVERY-THING
 !!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2012, 09:31:09 AM »
nice
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2012, 03:07:30 PM »
nice
shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2012, 03:12:28 PM »
Outstanding.
very nicely expressed. 100% communication..
keep it up.
you really deserve appreciation for this beautiful poem.
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2012, 04:43:48 PM »
fantastic...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2012, 07:41:06 PM »
Topic Moved to Shayari - e - Dar --> English section.
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2012, 08:04:40 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob Roy jee. Kaafi achhi lagi aapki poem.
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2012, 09:44:53 PM »
this is a poem describing the feelings of a poor guy who never had the experience of love n care ...... please give ur time to read it till the end nd do lemme now ur opinion !!


                               SICK 'n' TIRED

um sick 'n' tired of each n every thing
um sick 'n' tired of being a living being ...

sick 'n' tired of surroundings um traped in,
for the reason - it is irritating me deep-within...

sick 'n' tired of being a poor guy,
dreaming of all those things i wasn't able to buy ...

use to console my heart that every dog bounce back with his time ,
the day will come when ill b holding a glass of expencive wine.....

buh now um  sick 'n' tired of dogging my want,
missing all those things i had never own !!



um sick 'n' tired of each n every person in my life i had,
um sick 'n' tired of uh MOM  n DAD ....
sick of uh dad, who always act as he'z mad ,

fighting with mum for little things all the time,
created a feeling of hatred in me  and made me bad ...

tired of waiting for mum who was busy all the time,
who had to go to earn money,
money to make my future fall in line ...

but coz of this i starved for her love n care ,
lookin back then - mum u were never there ...

the times i wished to crey  U WERE NEVER THERE,
hug me , console me n to wipe of my TEAR...

i was all alone - back then ,
struggling struggling with my sorrow nd all those things through which i went ...

now um sick 'n' tired of loneliness in which um drowning
sick 'n' tired of showting.. nd crawling ....

WISH TO FLY AWAY WITHOUT ANY WING ,
UM sick 'n' tired OF EACH N EVERY-THING
  !!!



UOOR POEM SKETCHED A PICTURE OF MODERN LIFE AND THAT TO, NO LUV EXISTS IN RELATION COZ-------------TIME IS MONEY AND LIFE DEPENDS UPON IT ONLY . WHICH IS IN FACT PATHETIC SITUATION FOR MANKIND. AND AS DAYS ARE PASSING THINGS GOING TOUGH AND TOUGH . SO WE SHOULD LEARN TO LIVE IN THE PRESENT SITUATION AND FIND HAPPINESS IN SMALL THINGS..............AS I BELIEVE------------NAAAAAAAAICE POEM!!!!!!


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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2012, 09:39:42 AM »
Outstanding.
very nicely expressed. 100% communication..
keep it up.
you really deserve appreciation for this beautiful poem.


thanks alot mukesh bhai ! um glad u liked my work
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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2012, 09:40:36 AM »
fantastic...  Thumbs UP

thanku suman aunty Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: August 04, 2012, 09:43:07 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Roy jee. Kaafi achhi lagi aapki poem.
iftakhar bhai thanks alot
jo apne time nikala poem padne k liye Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: August 04, 2012, 09:45:06 AM »

UOOR POEM SKETCHED A PICTURE OF MODERN LIFE AND THAT TO, NO LUV EXISTS IN RELATION COZ-------------TIME IS MONEY AND LIFE DEPENDS UPON IT ONLY . WHICH IS IN FACT PATHETIC SITUATION FOR MANKIND. AND AS DAYS ARE PASSING THINGS GOING TOUGH AND TOUGH . SO WE SHOULD LEARN TO LIVE IN THE PRESENT SITUATION AND FIND HAPPINESS IN SMALL THINGS..............AS I BELIEVE------------NAAAAAAAAICE POEM!!!!!!




bilkul sahi kaha apne kamosh sir
mai is poem k zariye ye he batana chahta tha jo apne explain kiya hai
tanks alot Usual Smile
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