Slow Dance..........A Poem

by natural on September 14, 2005, 10:48:39 AM
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Hiii Friends...... I got this poem in a mail......
I loved it so sharing it w/ U.............

SLOW DANCE
Have you ever watched kids
On a merry-go-round?
Or listened to the rain
Slapping on the ground?
Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight?
Or gazed at the sun into the fading night?
You better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.

Do you run through each day
On the fly?
When you ask How are you?
Do you hear the reply?
When the day is done
Do you lie in your bed
With the next hundred chores
Running through your head?
You'd better slow down
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.

Ever told your child,
We'll do it tomorrow?
And in your haste,
Not see his sorrow?
Ever lost touch,
Let a good friendship die
Cause you never had time
To call and say,"Hi"
You'd better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.
When you runso fast to get somewhere
You miss half the fun of getting there.
When you worry and hurry through your day,
It is like an unopened gift....
Thrown away.
Life is not a race.
Do take it slower
Hear the music
Before the song is over.


Sorry talat if the same poem being posted in some other thread............ Usual Smile I could not find it in any forum......... and found it worth sharing....... Usual Smile [/b]
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2005, 11:04:46 AM »
wow ...Nice n Gr8 one Natwarlal Usual Smile ..............!!! n its worth sharing Usual Smile
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natural
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2005, 12:39:28 PM »
Thanks Salma..................... To tumney kya socha.... Still dancing fast or slowing down to enjoy every moment.......... :wink:
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2005, 04:36:54 PM »
hey naturla ji...bohot achi poem hai... nice nice!!!  :D
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2005, 04:54:04 PM »
wow such a sweet poem natural Usual Smile ,thanx for sharing with us.
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2005, 03:38:16 AM »
Hmmm nice Q mr.natwarlal :wink:

 I think it shuld be not toooo fast n same as not tooooo slow ..it shuld be 50-50  ( maska-chaska) Usual Smile..so dat we can enjoy evry aspect of life haan ...aur life jo hume dikhati hai wo haste huve nazar se dekho toh sab kuch bahut khubusart nazar aayega Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2005, 04:16:13 AM »
Hey Meena Ji.................. thanku thanku..... Usual Smile
Thanks Nidhi ...........
Aur Salma tum to bari achhi achhi baatein karne lagi ho....... Mera matlab dimaag waali.......lolzzzzzzzz :wink:
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2005, 06:01:21 AM »
awwwwwww this is cheeeeeeweeeeeeet........it sure is worth sharing dude!!!1111
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2005, 07:16:37 AM »
Very nice Jags .... !! and thanks for sharing .......!!!! Usual Smile
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natural
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2005, 08:52:26 AM »
Thanks Talat................ And Thanks Isha........
Actually I was sure ki ye poem mere sabhi doston ko bahut pasand aayega.........  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2005, 09:16:19 AM »
oye hum itne na-samaj bhi nahin hai :/
lekin hum bekar waqt dimag ka iztamal bhi nahin karte hai  :p lol

haan bhai pasand kyun nahin aayega lol
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Tosha
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2005, 08:07:13 PM »
Natural...its an amazing poem ...  i really liked it Usual Smile Keep it up buddy !!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 16, 2005, 04:19:25 AM »
Thanks Tosha.................. Agar aisey achhey achhey email aatey rahe to aisi poems post karna hamesha jaari rakhoonga.................lolzzzzzzz :wink:
Waisey mujhe bhi aapki prose writing kaafi achhi lagi........ Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2006, 07:09:39 PM »
Moved  By  Yoindia Monitor

Waheed
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«Reply #14 on: February 08, 2006, 10:47:09 PM »
i got te same in a mail n was gona post it...thanx nattu for sharing! awesome poem..

this poem was written by a critically ill girl...during her last days...and it ws circulated by her doctor...
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