Surprise

by jatti_80 on March 05, 2008, 08:47:37 PM
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Surprise me tonight with one kiss, that blows away our universe.
Surprise me tonight with one word that means more than fifty.
Surprise me tonight with one touch that takes my breath away.
Surprise me tonight with one look that melts my soul.
Surprise me tonight with all the passion i see in your eyes.
Surprise me tonight with that feeling that I'm yours for eternity.
Surprise me tonight with your personality so rupturing.
Surprise me tonight, with tomorrow......
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2008, 02:51:24 AM »
Good surprise  love4
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jatti_80
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2008, 09:05:49 PM »
thanx, i jus have to stick to english coz i cant make too much sense in punjabi r hindi
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2008, 09:07:35 PM »
woow too good jatti!!! Write as you like!!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2008, 09:09:37 PM »
nice one jattiji...great going
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jatti_80
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2008, 09:14:55 PM »
Thanx girls but not as good as urs thou, u guys r brilliant
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Rajbir
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2008, 09:15:46 PM »
Jatti

Good one ! Feel free to write in any language that u like Usual Smile

But...Naam jatti te punjabi wich nahi likh sakdi...r u from UK? (jk)NaNaNa
thanx, i jus have to stick to english coz i cant make too much sense in punjabi r hindi

Khwaish is a boy by the way tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2008, 09:16:18 PM »
Thanx girls but not as good as urs thou, u guys r brilliant


 Giggle Giggle Giggle khwaish is BOY  BangHead
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«Reply #8 on: March 08, 2008, 10:35:13 PM »
lolz  :giggle:sorry Khwaish menu nahi pata c ur a guy lolz kee kara Rajbir eni vi punjabi nahi ondi ki punjabi vich kuch likh saka  Winking
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«Reply #9 on: March 08, 2008, 10:36:11 PM »
oh yeh n am not from uk, am from Ireland
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