Taish- A Walk Through Garden of Eden...!!:English

ghayal_shayar

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one day i walked in a garden,
which i guessed to b in eden.

then i saw n angel,
who in 1st site bcame my life.
it seeded as if a painting of Angelo,
had come to life.

she was very alone,
n was dancing on the clouds.
to me it loked,
as if my dream lovers clone,
called me aloud.

now i recalled her,
2 b my libet,
whom i searched from,
America 2 tibbet.

she was smiling,
yet i knew that she was sad.
then i thought,that 2 so beautiful a girl,
how can this world b so bad.

i went ahead n,
n started talking 2 her.
then i came to know,
that there were people,
who were mocking 2 her.

suddenly she started crying
n it seemed as if,
the hell had broken loose,
as i saw her on the floor lying.

being near to her,
was increasing my feeling of liebe,
it was bcoming endless like ne bay.

one day too beautiful to avoid,
i went near to kiss her,
but only to miss her.

then i wept,
to see for how much i had slept


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: Taish- A Walk Through Garden of Eden...!!

«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2013, 02:30:17 AM »

Gud 1 Bro.


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nashwani

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Re: Taish- A Walk Through Garden of Eden...!!

«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2013, 03:09:57 AM »

Taish bhai pasand ayi apki ye peshkash..nicely written n beautifully expressed.. happy9


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- A Walk Through Garden of Eden...!!

«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2013, 03:46:21 PM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 03, 2013, 02:30:17 AM

Gud 1 Bro.

thanks mate...


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- A Walk Through Garden of Eden...!!

«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2013, 03:47:35 PM »

Quote from: nashwani on June 03, 2013, 03:09:57 AM

Taish bhai pasand ayi apki ye peshkash..nicely written n beautifully expressed.. happy9

nashwani ji shukriya, pasand karne ka, bas yahi dua rahegi ki aapko pasand aane laayak likhta reh sakuN...


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: Taish- A Walk Through Garden of Eden...!!

«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2013, 01:43:46 AM »

Very beautiful Bhusan jee.


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- A Walk Through Garden of Eden...!!

«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2013, 05:15:09 AM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on June 06, 2013, 01:43:46 AM

Very beautiful Bhusan jee.

thanks mate, felt gud to get admiration from u..!!


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@Kaash

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Re: Taish- A Walk Through Garden of Eden...!!

«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2013, 06:01:54 AM »

nicely written! gud 1!

Applause


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