TEARS

by KOYAL46 on March 17, 2010, 10:24:46 AM
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TEARS   tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed                                                        
 The mind feels heavy,
 The throat choked  
 As I try to suppress it.
               
 I don't want to share my feelings        
 They are too personal for that.          
 But when I don't let them out,          
 They mount up within me,                  
 trying to explode                        
                                          
 Even at times when I'm not sad,        
 When I've nothing to moan about        
 Still I do feel frustrated                
 And a need to let-go some feelings        
 Those which've weakened me,            
 Which've rendered me helpless            
 Why have I surrendered                  
 And to what- I need to know.        
 Perhaps this is the life
 I haven't understood,
 Perhaps I should let it flow.
       
  tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

                       Its Mine....  
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2010, 10:27:16 AM »
Nice one Koyal JI
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2010, 10:36:58 AM »
THANKS
Rajesh-bhai....
Nice one Koyal JI
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2010, 11:31:51 AM »


Oh Koyal Ji, Ku tears baha rahey ho,
sadey naal reh key bhi tusi
ku gam meh doobey ja rahey ho.......

Dostoh ki toh kami nahi
fir ku tanha huye ja rahey ho
sadey naal rey key bhi tusi
ku gam meh doobey ja rahey ho ......

baat toh batao humsey
dil peh bozz ku liye ja rahey ho
sadey naal rey key bhi tusi
ku gam meh doobey ja rahey ho ......

komal sa hai chehra tumhara
fir aakhoh sey ku neer baha rahey ho
sadey naal rey key bhi tusi
ku gam meh doobey ja rahey ho ......




jasbir singh
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riyaz106
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«Reply #4 on: March 17, 2010, 12:10:05 PM »
You have written very beatiful poem Koyal ji. Marvelous and mindblowing creation.

Try to imagine
Crystal drops
Gentle wonder
Welling forth
Love unfettered
From heart benign...
These are your tears
Your beautiful tears
(NM)
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2010, 01:58:27 PM »
Thanks Jasbirji....for understanding...

Jeevan mai kuchh lamhe aise aate hain jab
Chahkar bhi insaan kuchh nahi kar paata....
Apne aapko niyati k aage bebas-laachaar paata hai... tearyeyed



Oh Koyal Ji, Ku tears baha rahey ho,
sadey naal reh key bhi tusi
ku gam meh doobey ja rahey ho.......

Dostoh ki toh kami nahi
fir ku tanha huye ja rahey ho
sadey naal rey key bhi tusi
ku gam meh doobey ja rahey ho ......

baat toh batao humsey
dil peh bozz ku liye ja rahey ho
sadey naal rey key bhi tusi
ku gam meh doobey ja rahey ho ......

komal sa hai chehra tumhara
fir aakhoh sey ku neer baha rahey ho
sadey naal rey key bhi tusi
ku gam meh doobey ja rahey ho ......




jasbir singh
hira_company@yahoo.com







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KOYAL46
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2010, 02:02:50 PM »
Thanks Riyaz-bhai....you have given value to my tears.... tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

You have written very beatiful poem Koyal ji. Marvelous and mindblowing creation.

Try to imagine
Crystal drops
Gentle wonder
Welling forth
Love unfettered
From heart benign...
These are your tears
Your beautiful tears
(NM)
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2010, 02:11:02 PM »
Thanks a lot Aakaash-ji....

very nice Koyal ji and nice lines Jasbir ji
bahut khoob
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2010, 08:03:20 AM »
Thanks Jasbirji....for understanding...

Jeevan mai kuchh lamhe aise aate hain jab
Chahkar bhi insaan kuchh nahi kar paata....
Apne aapko niyati k aage bebas-laachaar paata hai... tearyeyed





aisa daur toh sab key jeevan meh aata hai
insaan chah key bhi khudd koh kamjor paata hai

par issey dil kamjor kartey nahi
dostoh key rehtey, khudd koh mayoos kartey nahi






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«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2010, 08:11:02 AM »
TEARS   tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed                                                         
 The mind feels heavy,
 The throat choked   
 As I try to suppress it.
               
 I don't want to share my feelings         
 They are too personal for that.         
 But when I don't let them out,           
 They mount up within me,                   
 trying to explode                         
                                           
 Even at times when I'm not sad,         
 When I've nothing to moan about         
 Still I do feel frustrated                 
 And a need to let-go some feelings       
 Those which've weakened me,             
 Which've rendered me helpless           
 Why have I surrendered                   
 And to what- I need to know.         
 Perhaps this is the life
 I haven't understood,
 Perhaps I should let it flow.
       
  tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed

                      Its Mine....  

Beautiful One Koyal.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Just Loved Reading It & Indeed Tears Can Speak More Than Words..

Too Goooood Koyal Thumbs UP
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: March 19, 2010, 01:56:36 PM »

Thanks Khwaishji...for appriciating my work.....

Beautiful One Koyal.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Just Loved Reading It & Indeed Tears Can Speak More Than Words..

Too Goooood Koyal Thumbs UP

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KOYAL46
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«Reply #11 on: March 19, 2010, 02:11:35 PM »
Santwana k liye dhanaywaad Jasbir-ji......

Bhole ban kar haal na puchho
Behte hain ashq tou behne do
Jis se badhe bachaini dil ki
Yaaraa Ayse tassali rehne do



Koi kissi ka dard le sakta nahi
Neeyati ko koi badal sakta nahi

Bataane se kbhi dard kam hota nahi
Esey Sahe beena jeevan chalta nahi

Aansoo baha kay bhee dekh liya humne
Darde dil ko lubha k bhi dekh liya humne




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