The Beautiful Cold Dawn of December

by sufu on December 31, 2012, 02:06:54 PM
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As the cold breeze blows by, I suddenly remember
That beautiful cold dawn of last December

The sparkling blue waves washed the golden sand
As I walked along the shore holding your hand
It was not less than a journey to some fairy's magical land

I looked into your green glittering eyes
They told me how much you loved me, it was not a surprise
Ah! So overwhelming! So magical! So nice!

You told me i was your lifeline
Without me your life tasted as sour as wine
And then suddenly bringing me back to reality, the clock struck nine

I tell myself that the wicked love is no more
That had once destroyed me to the core
And from its pain my heart is still sore

All those memories have made my eyes flow
Yet the cold breeze has not stopped to blow
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2012, 02:11:48 PM »
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very very very beautifully written
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«Reply #2 on: January 01, 2013, 10:38:09 AM »
nicely written
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2013, 02:59:34 PM »
thnx aqsh ji and nand bahu ji....
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