The Blessed Child

by Neepobithi on May 10, 2010, 06:17:10 AM
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Shower of elixir from
             The Garden of Eden
Fell on me and kissed
             My soiled, ruffled mane.
Softly caressed the cracked lips, cheeks
            And ravaged mirth
That was baked and drooped,
            In the summer’s hearth.

“Open your mouth”’ the lark
            In my heart squirmed.
I obliged, soaked throat in elixir
            And tongue moistened.
 Green trees at left and right,
            Danced and me fanned,
 Branches laden with fruits;
            Smiled and beckoned.

Fresh and dewy white flowers
            Swaying and permeating scent,
Some fell on my crown;
            Smiled the hanging crescent.
Cuckoo coo-ed, peacock’s salsa
            In his plushy feather,
Doe-eyed squirrels nibbling fruits,
            Scampering hither- thither.

Suddenly, a distant call, “M-o-n- -“
            And a tap on the shoulder’
Jerked and woke me up
            From the surreal slumber.
I rubbed and opened the eyes
            And looked around,
Stark reality struck me;
            I was sleeping on the ground!

Oh, dear! The evening breeze lulled me
            To sleep when I lied
Exhausted, bathing in sweat;
            Under the tree shade.
I glanced at my shabby clothes
            That has faded with time
Lacked soap-cake, clean water
            To wash the grime.

Dear, I had a beautiful voyage
            To heaven, vivid till now.
Had royal attire, water to wet lips
            And gourmet’s treat, wow!
May be I was in dreamland
             Just for awhile
But tasted elixir, quenched thirst
             And stayed with style.

Do the animals, insects and
             Birds ever dream?
And can they enjoy this bliss
             Of heavenly realm??
Nay  dear, I don’t think
             Even in remote wild,
Thank oh God!
             I’m your blessed child.

Thank God again that
            You sculpted me as a human,
For awhile I was
            In cherry-blossomed Eden.
No more shall I worry oh good Lord
            Till my bell tolls, eternal sleep,
This blessed life has some purpose,
            Shall justify in this earth trip.
                                  Till I go to eternal sleep- - -

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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2010, 06:35:03 AM »
bohat bohat khoob. very nice sharing Neepobithi ji......
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Neepobithi
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2010, 11:55:58 AM »
I am happy that you liked it. Thanks Tanhaji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2010, 12:11:24 PM »
Wow very beautiful and mindblowing creation Neepobithi ji.lovely thoughts.God bless you and  all. icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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Neepobithi
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2010, 10:48:34 AM »
Thank u Madhuweshji. I am overwhelmed and this recognition will keep me going.

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