The Drama Going All Around Me....!!

by ghayal_shayar on October 29, 2012, 02:14:02 AM
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as i stood that night,
at some height,
having nothing to do,
i put my mind at ease,
little did i know that,
i wud soon feel,
how it feels to watch a drama.
i was a part of, few moments ago.
for suddenly than n there,
just felt, i was different,
don't know why,
but sure i was different,
for that moment i stood breathless,
to hear others drawing breath.
for that moment i remained still.
to see the restlessness around me,
for that moment i put emotions at bay,
to see the smiles & tears of others,
around me.
and finally i realised throughout my life,
i been so preoccupied that,
i cud never see,
from a different perspective,
the drama going on all around me.


--Taish
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2012, 02:17:14 AM »
as i stood that night,
at some height,
having nothing to do,
i put my mind at ease,
little did i know that,
i wud soon feel,
how it feels to watch a drama.
i was a part of, few moments ago.
for suddenly than n there,
just felt, i was different,
don't know why,
but sure i was different,
for that moment i stood breathless,
to hear others drawing breath.
for that moment i remained still.
to see the restlessness around me,
for that moment i put emotions at bay,
to see the smiles & tears of others,
around me.
and finally i realised throughout my life,
i been so preoccupied that,
i cud never see,
from a different perspective,
the drama going on all around me.


--Taish

Very nice creation Taish  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2012, 02:42:19 AM »
very nice n truly said, it happens with everyone
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2012, 03:33:13 AM »
thanks a tonne sunita ji, juz keep reading n appreciating the same way....
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2012, 03:50:31 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2012, 01:57:56 PM »
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truly said
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2012, 01:10:27 AM »
very nice n truly said, it happens with everyone

Thanks Bahukhani ji, it was nyc to know dat u understood the situation I wanted to convey... juz keep reading the same way...
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2012, 01:11:38 AM »
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Saini ji, shukriya....
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2012, 02:57:10 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
truly said

aqsh sahaab, thanks for d appreciation...
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