The foundation of Sand (for you Nidhi) :)

by myheart_ursonly on September 05, 2005, 06:28:28 AM
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Dedicated to Nidhi, (nidhi_yadein)  :oops:

The moments of happiness are here again,
how beautiful it's, to see our love grow.
Every season now seems wonderful and new,
whether it be hot summers or winter snow.

I've never been in such a deep affection,
as deeply, as I am now a days with you.
Your sincere affection keeps telling me,
that no other girl loves me like you do.

With the imprint that you've left inside,
you will always be close to this heart.
your love has this great power over me,
that I am hurted more, when you're hurt.

tears started to flood my eyes everytime,
whenever you tried to push yourself away.
Without you, I can never feel complete,
I realized, I can't live any single day.

The bond that's shared among me and you,
is the bond that binds us together as one.
I can't ever imagine loving anyone else,
you are that special and the only one.

With your love, my days seem so beautiful,
whether it be your kiss or just a smile.
Be it holding your hand or a gentle hug,
or thinking about walking with you a mile.

Your sweet, unwavering thoughts of love,
fill my world with happiness and delight.
We're the pair that won't ever seperate,
will remain together as moon n the night.

My love has its faith and trust in you,
your heart, though burdened, beats in me.
In the grace n tenderness of your beats,
my sincerity is my true love's guarentee.

Soon one day, we'll be together as one,
entwined forever, and never to seperate.
I will always be the one to make sure,
to make you feel I am your perfect mate.

I will nurture the world of your dreams,
with my love so unconditional and true.
With trust n sincerity I'll strengthen,
the foundation of Sand once built by you.
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2005, 07:29:53 AM »
Amazing write Amit Usual Smile (ur english poetries r really awesome)..........Thank u sooo much :oops: .
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2005, 08:30:29 AM »
wow amit ji nice one ....!!!  nidhi :wink:  ur lucky  i think so.... lolzz
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2005, 01:21:32 PM »
thanks a lot nidhi Puzzled ! and salma:)
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2005, 01:42:54 PM »
ur welcome amit ji....!!! but really ...nicely written n described it...!!! gr8 one..!! keep posting..!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2005, 04:19:51 PM »
very  nice  amit..............   keep  it  up..............
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sanya310
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2005, 04:46:19 PM »
wah amit bro, bohot hi sundar likha hai..i mean it, everytime ive read ur poetry, i say its ur best...n i ll say that again...r js gettin better than the best...

i esp love these lines...

Soon one day, we'll be together as one,
entwined forever, and never to seperate.
I will always be the one to make sure,
to make you feel I am your perfect mate.

I will nurture the world of your dreams,
with my love so unconditional and true.
With trust n sincerity I'll strengthen,
the foundation of Sand once built by you.

bohot hi deep meaning hai, keep going bro, very nice...
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dolly
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2005, 01:10:16 PM »
very nice Amit.............awsome..........yaa.............

urs also very nice Sani
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2005, 03:20:21 PM »
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol: God Bless :D ............................
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2005, 04:47:04 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
very nice Amit.............awsome..........yaa.............

urs also very nice Sani


hmm thanx all teh same, but ive js quoted lines frm amits poem which i lik the best...
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bond
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2005, 06:12:03 PM »
bahut khoob HEARTY and SANYA
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2005, 06:20:36 PM »
lol arey maine sirf lines quote ki hain hearty ki!! i havent written anything original...but is 'bohot khoob' ke haqdaar banne ke liye kuch likh hi deti hoon!!


there are times when life's really tough
and you wonder wehter wats wrong and wats right
when you would travel seven seas altogether
just for your love's mere beautiful sight
dont worry, soon everythings gona be okay
the suns gona start shining really bright
and you know I ll alwayz be there for you
to hug you, to console, to kiss you good night.
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«Reply #12 on: September 08, 2005, 07:10:02 AM »
lolzzzz sanya tongue3 ,acha kiya jo kuch likh diya tongue3 ,hai na? Winking

Very nice sanya Usual Smile ,keep it up glasses2 .
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«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2005, 07:31:05 AM »
This is what v actuly wonder a love forever
  i pray this loverz garden will be green forever
  look the flowerz rotation of life are enthusiasitic
  and may be this will be a never ending pastiche


pastiche - a musical Source
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«Reply #14 on: September 08, 2005, 12:11:27 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
lol arey maine sirf lines quote ki hain hearty ki!! i havent written anything original...but is 'bohot khoob' ke haqdaar banne ke liye kuch likh hi deti hoon!!


there are times when life's really tough
and you wonder wehter wats wrong and wats right
when you would travel seven seas altogether
just for your love's mere beautiful sight
dont worry, soon everythings gona be okay
the suns gona start shining really bright
and you know I ll alwayz be there for you
to hug you, to console, to kiss you good night.


lol  galti se mistake ho gayi....kal aadhi neend mein tha jab ye post kiya tha.....neways  nice one
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