:: The Last Poem She Wrote ::

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In a little home, all alone; there once lived a girl,
beautiful, five feet seven, her hairs had lovely curls.
She loved a guy, more than she ever loved her life,
and waited for the day to be recognized as his wife.

She treated him like a gift sent from heavens above,
& often said, he taught her the real meaning of love.
She longed to be in his arms and hold onto his hand,
he was everything to her - a lover and a best friend.

He also loved that girl from the bottom of his heart,
he had a strong belief, that none can do them part.
Only obstacle he had was, he was too far from her,
maybe 530 miles, I'm unsure what the numbers were.

At times she talked to him about one of her friends,
said he's the one on whom she can always depend.
He asked her, "Oh! Well, then who am I to you???"
She replied "You've made my dreams come true.

You're the one whom I think of all day and night,
you've filled my life with the happiness and delight.
Whenever I close my eyes, It's only you that I see,
I love you more than my life, you're everything to me."

It was her best friend, the girl often talked about,
Something's going on, now the guy started to doubt.
At times, he was like a glass with anger filled upto brim,
He thought an affair was going on between her & him.

At times he thought how much she speaks is true,
he wanted her to prove when she said "I love you."
he often asked, "why don't you value what you say?"
and she always replied, "why do you feel that way?"

The distance between them had made a serious effect,
and soon, like the start, nothing was now perfect.
The girl's effort to stay with him didn't last too long,
lovely melody of her life turned into a monotonous song.

With thoughts of doubt each and every passing day,
their trust was breaking & their love was fading away.
Time went on slowly and nothing seemed to be fine,
doubts in the guy's mind kept showing their shine.

She missed him, and her nights were passing in a cry,
She sent him many letters but he didn't send any reply.
No words can explain, the pain she was going through,
She didn't know how to talk to him or what else to do.

She talked with one of his friend & asked him number,
but he wasn't interested to talk and kept ignoring her.
poor she! tried to search for him in things all around,
and at the time she needed him, he was never found.

He never showed his concern for her or ever cared.
The pain she was living in couldn't be compared.
The girl was really hurt and she commited suicide,
The news next day read, "A girl, 20, yesterday died"

In a room locked from inside, her body was found,
stained in blood next to the bed, lying upon the ground.
In her left hand, she was holding her suicide note,
upon the letter, there was the last poem she wrote:

"When you'll read this, I would not be here with you,
but this doesn't mean, that my love was never true,
Who was that guy, Honey? He was nothing to me,
and you were my life, I just wish you could see...

"I will love you for an eternity.", was your promise.
but you did not trust my love for you and I hate this.
You have now broken the promises you once made,
So I am going far away by a cut with this blade.

I loved you with all my heart and I will forever do,
but what's the purpose of living, if I'm not with you.
Maybe I wasn't your girl or you were unable to see,
that you were my life, you meant everything to me.

With one last wish, that I could once see your face,
I'm going to heavens above, in the God's embrace.
Remember, no one can love you the way I loved you,
every word of promise I said, was cent percent true.

This is my last present to you, for what you've done,
I am going to a place, from where I will never return.
As you'll read this, and I'm in the heavens up above,
maybe then you'll realize the thing called true love."

It was not supposed to end in this way, with a weep,
now she's laying in the grave, forever in deep sleep.
See, the doubts for sure, can cause a relation's death,
so don't ever let doubts take away your last breath.
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«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2005, 08:49:56 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
In a little home, all alone; there once lived a girl,
beautiful, five feet seven, her hairs had lovely curls.
She loved a guy, more than she ever loved her life,
and waited for the day to be recognized as his wife.

She treated him like a gift sent from heavens above,
& often said, he taught her the real meaning of love.
She longed to be in his arms and hold onto his hand,
he was everything to her - a lover and a best friend.

He also loved that girl from the bottom of his heart,
he had a strong belief, that none can do them part.
Only obstacle he had was, he was too far from her,
maybe 530 miles, I'm unsure what the numbers were.

At times she talked to him about one of her friends,
said he's the one on whom she can always depend.
He asked her, "Oh! Well, then who am I to you???"
She replied "You've made my dreams come true.

You're the one whom I think of all day and night,
you've filled my life with the happiness and delight.
Whenever I close my eyes, It's only you that I see,
I love you more than my life, you're everything to me."

It was her best friend, the girl often talked about,
Something's going on, now the guy started to doubt.
At times, he was like a glass with anger filled upto brim,
He thought an affair was going on between her & him.

At times he thought how much she speaks is true,
he wanted her to prove when she said "I love you."
he often asked, "why don't you value what you say?"
and she always replied, "why do you feel that way?"

The distance between them had made a serious effect,
and soon, like the start, nothing was now perfect.
The girl's effort to stay with him didn't last too long,
lovely melody of her life turned into a monotonous song.

With thoughts of doubt each and every passing day,
their trust was breaking & their love was fading away.
Time went on slowly and nothing seemed to be fine,
doubts in the guy's mind kept showing their shine.

She missed him, and her nights were passing in a cry,
She sent him many letters but he didn't send any reply.
No words can explain, the pain she was going through,
She didn't know how to talk to him or what else to do.

She talked with one of his friend & asked him number,
but he wasn't interested to talk and kept ignoring her.
poor she! tried to search for him in things all around,
and at the time she needed him, he was never found.

He never showed his concern for her or ever cared.
The pain she was living in couldn't be compared.
The girl was really hurt and she commited suicide,
The news next day read, "A girl, 20, yesterday died"

In a room locked from inside, her body was found,
stained in blood next to the bed, lying upon the ground.
In her left hand, she was holding her suicide note,
upon the letter, there was the last poem she wrote:

"When you'll read this, I would not be here with you,
but this doesn't mean, that my love was never true,
Who was that guy, Honey? He was nothing to me,
and you were my life, I just wish you could see...

"I will love you for an eternity.", was your promise.
but you did not trust my love for you and I hate this.
You have now broken the promises you once made,
So I am going far away by a cut with this blade.

I loved you with all my heart and I will forever do,
but what's the purpose of living, if I'm not with you.
Maybe I wasn't your girl or you were unable to see,
that you were my life, you meant everything to me.

With one last wish, that I could once see your face,
I'm going to heavens above, in the God's embrace.
Remember, no one can love you the way I loved you,
every word of promise I said, was cent percent true.

This is my last present to you, for what you've done,
I am going to a place, from where I will never return.
As you'll read this, and I'm in the heavens up above,
maybe then you'll realize the thing called true love."

It was not supposed to end in this way, with a weep,
now she's laying in the grave, forever in deep sleep.
See, the doubts for sure, can cause a relation's death,
so don't ever let doubts take away your last breath.
wowowowowow amazing amit Usual Smile .Very touching.
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sanya310
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«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2005, 11:44:03 AM »
great poem amit, touching beautiful words and a some  great advice Usual Smile
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natural
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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2005, 12:03:18 PM »
Wow........................
What a great poem. The girl should'nt have died. A great Lesson to be learnt by all those who dont' care abt other's feelings.

A real good poem.......................
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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2005, 06:14:39 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
In a little home, all alone; there once lived a girl,
beautiful, five feet seven, her hairs had lovely curls.
She loved a guy, more than she ever loved her life,
and waited for the day to be recognized as his wife.

She treated him like a gift sent from heavens above,
& often said, he taught her the real meaning of love.
She longed to be in his arms and hold onto his hand,
he was everything to her - a lover and a best friend.

He also loved that girl from the bottom of his heart,
he had a strong belief, that none can do them part.
Only obstacle he had was, he was too far from her,
maybe 530 miles, I'm unsure what the numbers were.

At times she talked to him about one of her friends,
said he's the one on whom she can always depend.
He asked her, "Oh! Well, then who am I to you???"
She replied "You've made my dreams come true.

You're the one whom I think of all day and night,
you've filled my life with the happiness and delight.
Whenever I close my eyes, It's only you that I see,
I love you more than my life, you're everything to me."

It was her best friend, the girl often talked about,
Something's going on, now the guy started to doubt.
At times, he was like a glass with anger filled upto brim,
He thought an affair was going on between her & him.

At times he thought how much she speaks is true,
he wanted her to prove when she said "I love you."
he often asked, "why don't you value what you say?"
and she always replied, "why do you feel that way?"

The distance between them had made a serious effect,
and soon, like the start, nothing was now perfect.
The girl's effort to stay with him didn't last too long,
lovely melody of her life turned into a monotonous song.

With thoughts of doubt each and every passing day,
their trust was breaking & their love was fading away.
Time went on slowly and nothing seemed to be fine,
doubts in the guy's mind kept showing their shine.

She missed him, and her nights were passing in a cry,
She sent him many letters but he didn't send any reply.
No words can explain, the pain she was going through,
She didn't know how to talk to him or what else to do.

She talked with one of his friend & asked him number,
but he wasn't interested to talk and kept ignoring her.
poor she! tried to search for him in things all around,
and at the time she needed him, he was never found.

He never showed his concern for her or ever cared.
The pain she was living in couldn't be compared.
The girl was really hurt and she commited suicide,
The news next day read, "A girl, 20, yesterday died"

In a room locked from inside, her body was found,
stained in blood next to the bed, lying upon the ground.
In her left hand, she was holding her suicide note,
upon the letter, there was the last poem she wrote:

"When you'll read this, I would not be here with you,
but this doesn't mean, that my love was never true,
Who was that guy, Honey? He was nothing to me,
and you were my life, I just wish you could see...

"I will love you for an eternity.", was your promise.
but you did not trust my love for you and I hate this.
You have now broken the promises you once made,
So I am going far away by a cut with this blade.

I loved you with all my heart and I will forever do,
but what's the purpose of living, if I'm not with you.
Maybe I wasn't your girl or you were unable to see,
that you were my life, you meant everything to me.

With one last wish, that I could once see your face,
I'm going to heavens above, in the God's embrace.
Remember, no one can love you the way I loved you,
every word of promise I said, was cent percent true.

This is my last present to you, for what you've done,
I am going to a place, from where I will never return.
As you'll read this, and I'm in the heavens up above,
maybe then you'll realize the thing called true love."

It was not supposed to end in this way, with a weep,
now she's laying in the grave, forever in deep sleep.
See, the doubts for sure, can cause a relation's death,
so don't ever let doubts take away your last breath.


Beautyfull!!..! khool! not u yar ! i m talking about ur poem Winking ! well yar this is gr8 ! so simple n touching....
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nikki
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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2005, 07:05:23 PM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
In a little home, all alone; there once lived a girl,
beautiful, five feet seven, her hairs had lovely curls.
She loved a guy, more than she ever loved her life,
and waited for the day to be recognized as his wife.

She treated him like a gift sent from heavens above,
& often said, he taught her the real meaning of love.
She longed to be in his arms and hold onto his hand,
he was everything to her - a lover and a best friend.

He also loved that girl from the bottom of his heart,
he had a strong belief, that none can do them part.
Only obstacle he had was, he was too far from her,
maybe 530 miles, I'm unsure what the numbers were.

At times she talked to him about one of her friends,
said he's the one on whom she can always depend.
He asked her, "Oh! Well, then who am I to you???"
She replied "You've made my dreams come true.

You're the one whom I think of all day and night,
you've filled my life with the happiness and delight.
Whenever I close my eyes, It's only you that I see,
I love you more than my life, you're everything to me."

It was her best friend, the girl often talked about,
Something's going on, now the guy started to doubt.
At times, he was like a glass with anger filled upto brim,
He thought an affair was going on between her & him.

At times he thought how much she speaks is true,
he wanted her to prove when she said "I love you."
he often asked, "why don't you value what you say?"
and she always replied, "why do you feel that way?"

The distance between them had made a serious effect,
and soon, like the start, nothing was now perfect.
The girl's effort to stay with him didn't last too long,
lovely melody of her life turned into a monotonous song.

With thoughts of doubt each and every passing day,
their trust was breaking & their love was fading away.
Time went on slowly and nothing seemed to be fine,
doubts in the guy's mind kept showing their shine.

She missed him, and her nights were passing in a cry,
She sent him many letters but he didn't send any reply.
No words can explain, the pain she was going through,
She didn't know how to talk to him or what else to do.

She talked with one of his friend & asked him number,
but he wasn't interested to talk and kept ignoring her.
poor she! tried to search for him in things all around,
and at the time she needed him, he was never found.

He never showed his concern for her or ever cared.
The pain she was living in couldn't be compared.
The girl was really hurt and she commited suicide,
The news next day read, "A girl, 20, yesterday died"

In a room locked from inside, her body was found,
stained in blood next to the bed, lying upon the ground.
In her left hand, she was holding her suicide note,
upon the letter, there was the last poem she wrote:

"When you'll read this, I would not be here with you,
but this doesn't mean, that my love was never true,
Who was that guy, Honey? He was nothing to me,
and you were my life, I just wish you could see...

"I will love you for an eternity.", was your promise.
but you did not trust my love for you and I hate this.
You have now broken the promises you once made,
So I am going far away by a cut with this blade.

I loved you with all my heart and I will forever do,
but what's the purpose of living, if I'm not with you.
Maybe I wasn't your girl or you were unable to see,
that you were my life, you meant everything to me.

With one last wish, that I could once see your face,
I'm going to heavens above, in the God's embrace.
Remember, no one can love you the way I loved you,
every word of promise I said, was cent percent true.

This is my last present to you, for what you've done,
I am going to a place, from where I will never return.
As you'll read this, and I'm in the heavens up above,
maybe then you'll realize the thing called true love."

It was not supposed to end in this way, with a weep,
now she's laying in the grave, forever in deep sleep.
See, the doubts for sure, can cause a relation's death,
so don't ever let doubts take away your last breath.


beautifull poem Hearty..............................
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amrita
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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2005, 10:08:40 AM »
.....................................Beautiful... ...
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mohd_ubaid
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«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2005, 12:10:28 PM »
hey, it was a gr8 poem very touchy, but one shouldn't die for some one who doesn't even trust them. Trust is the foundation of some relation and if one doesn't trust his/her partner he doesn't qualify to be in a relationship. Any ways it was indeed a gr8 poem keep it up!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2006, 05:45:46 PM »
thanks nidhi, nikki, sanya, natural, sadi, amrita and ubaid...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2006, 05:59:39 PM »
Wow Amit !

Such a beautiful poem ! How come i missed it.

I must have been travelling...

An excellent piece of work...

Rajbir
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anjani_si
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2006, 08:27:54 PM »
urz.....simply gorgeous......

i loved from deeply down my heart
i looked around for him my every breath
but he never considered my true heart
therefore i took my last breath
and held on to his heart!!!!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2006, 01:48:53 AM »
One of the best poems I have ever read!!! I know Every one in here is appreciating you! I think you should circulate this across to a lot many people who need to read this. Dhruv aap ko salam karta hai!

Mahobat pe kurabn hone wale aaj bhi hai,
Kisi ki yaad main marane wale aaj bhi hai,
Yeh josh-e-jazba rakhane wale aaj bhi hai,
Allah ko jin per naaz ho aise deewane aaj bhi hai!

Ai khuda aisa imtihaan kisi ka na lena,
Mahobat main aisa anjaam kisi ko na dena,
Ruh tadap uthi hai meri, uski fariyad sunkar,
mahobat bhare dil main tu shak paida na karana!!!!

BENAM
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2006, 05:40:18 AM »
bhai sahi me aaj tak maine bhi nahi padhi sorry ......

but is such a good poem and last one also.......

waise aap ye bataiye na kya naam tha unka jinki ye poem hai ....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2006, 07:21:09 AM »
Anjani

bahut khoob !

BeNam

Aap ne har baar ki tarah bahut he achcha reply diya hai...

I hope everyone will read this post and contribute to it

Rajbir
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sanya310
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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2006, 07:30:20 AM »
good going anjani and benam..
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