the pain is just too real

by Neelam on July 30, 2004, 07:40:52 AM
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Neelam
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these wounds wont seem to heal
this pain is just to real
theres just too much that time cannot erase
when u cried i"d wipe away all of ur tears
when you'd scream i'd fight away all of  ur fears
and i held ur hand through all of these years
but
you still had one me
i tried so hard to tell myself that ur gone
but though ur still with me i've been alone out of love........ :cry:
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2010, 03:35:27 PM »
nice poem.neelam ji.
these wounds wont seem to heal
this pain is just to real
theres just too much that time cannot erase
when u cried i"d wipe away all of ur tears
when you'd scream i'd fight away all of  ur fears
and i held ur hand through all of these years
but
you still had one me
i tried so hard to tell myself that ur gone
but though ur still with me i've been alone out of love........ :cry:
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2010, 06:07:42 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Neelam ji,bahut dard bhari poem likhi aapne.great work Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2010, 06:30:23 AM »
Good one Neelam Ji
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