Till My Very Breath is Snatched from Me

by anjaan dharkan on October 23, 2008, 02:09:31 PM
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how long will i be waiting, when will we meet again?
i am incomplete in all these days without you, when will I be complete again?
its just three words you have to say, to give me my life back...
to reassure me that, ideed, I am alive, and to fill all that I lack...
Give me the breath of life, give me my peace.
take away my agony so that this pain will cease...

Your eyes will be in mine,  till the final hour that I will see...
I swear I will love you till my very breath is snatched from me...
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2008, 02:19:41 PM »
KASAM SE YAAR AISA LAGTA HAIN TUMNE ENGLISH ME PURI GHAZAL LIKH DI HAIN ITS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND STILL SO SIMPLE AND SWEET.
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2008, 02:22:22 PM »
 Applause Applause

Very nice poem nice lines anjaan sis keep it up.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2008, 03:36:57 PM »
thank you honeyrose!
sajid sahab, 4 sum1 born and raised and living in USA, ye ek plus point hai, angrayzee sahee aajatee hai... Usual Smile!
thanks 4 ur kind words!
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2008, 05:13:42 PM »
how long will i be waiting, when will we meet again?
i am incomplete in all these days without you, when will I be complete again?
its just three words you have to say, to give me my life back...
to reassure me that, ideed, I am alive, and to fill all that I lack...
Give me the breath of life, give me my peace.
take away my agony so that this pain will cease...

Your eyes will be in mine,  till the final hour that I will see...
I swear I will love you till my very breath is snatched from me...


Beautiful work Sidra...very nice Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2008, 05:16:29 PM »
nice work Anjaan ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2008, 02:23:38 PM »
celmira, pooja, thank u!
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