time at run

a small try in rap genre.
hope u all like it.
open for all type of comments be it harsh,motivational,ground shaking any type..
thank you...
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Hey time cant u stop
I havent reached on the top
Hey time cant u stop,stop for me
I've got whole world to see
I dont want to leave this place
Why life is in so much pace
Still have to explore the space
Hey time cant u stop for me
I have got all my friends
But it ll come to an end so
Let the relations deepens
Why you always so creepin'
And See all are weepin
Look they are keeping there
Dreams from slipping.
Hey time cant u stop,stop for me
Whatever the weather
We ll stay together
We all pray together
We are friends forever
In any situation whatsoever
Hey time cant u stop,cant stop for us
Please stop for us.

good

very good....