Twisted.........Sps

by Sps on June 01, 2016, 07:11:38 AM
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Twisted

Yes I fell
From the highness
Sure got touched and pampered
Caressed whole
But only my love can touch my soul

Have yearned respite
Tis was my refuge
It felt right
All yin and yang
Entwined by pure yore
And lust in the core

Guilt twitches
Soul cries
Even love left
Against my faith
What hell breaks the Sun
For a night of being a desirous woman

If love sets you free
Why I am bruised by chains
If to desire is human..
How much Human is a Woman?
If love rusts with a drop of rain
No love can touch my soul again!
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2016, 08:39:51 AM »
Awesome  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2016, 10:29:05 AM »
 Applause Clapping Smiley sunny very good impressed
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2016, 02:28:08 PM »
Thanks Rustum ji n Aditya
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2016, 11:05:59 PM »
 :thumbup:Splendid and Gorgious w/ RAU (Rau will be aded to your score later.)
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2016, 05:44:35 AM »
Glad that you liked it Surinderji.... thanks a lot for the Rau  happy3 toothy4 blob5
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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2016, 01:43:58 PM »
Quote from: surindarn on June 01, 2016, 11:05:59 PM
:thumbup:Splendid and Gorgious w/ RAU (Rau will be aded to your score later.)
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Rau add kar diyaa hai aapke score mein.
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2016, 06:09:52 PM »
Quote from: Sps on June 01, 2016, 07:11:38 AM
Twisted

Yes I fell
From the highness
Sure got touched and pampered
Caressed whole
But only my love can touch my soul

Have yearned respite
Tis was my refuge
It felt right
All yin and yang
Entwined by pure yore
And lust in the core

Guilt twitches
Soul cries
Even love left
Against my faith
What hell breaks the Sun
For a night of being a desirous woman

If love sets you free
Why I am bruised by chains
If to desire is human..
How much Human is a Woman?
If love rusts with a drop of rain
No love can touch my soul again!

glimpse  of good english poet meticulously unleashed the feelings through words  nice approach well done ,sir
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«Reply #8 on: June 04, 2016, 08:22:44 PM »
Thanks a lot marhoom bahayat ji
Thanks a lot surinderji
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2017, 06:54:33 PM »
very nice post guys. keep it up!
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