U need me by....

by zama on March 12, 2009, 06:24:55 AM
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In an aspired thirst
i was left alone
as per u r thoughts
silence filled my home

with tears rolling by
i sat up with a sigh
building up the hopes
as far as i could try

the urge to mend my house
was raising deep within
with a dream to reach the stars
of sky from this unwanted bin

with eagerness filled in my soul
just to hear those words,i still die
from u...my lost love .....
that u still need me by !!!!!!


Zama
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dead heart
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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2009, 06:30:53 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause ApplauseI am a big fan of English poetry...superb words with deep meaning...Awesome...

I may have needed u if u wuldnt betray me,
I wuld have loved u if u wuldnt stay in sumone else's heart,
The only thing I have for u is "hatred",
And I'm sure u dont need hatred anymore so u dont need me...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2009, 06:36:26 AM »
Very Very Nice Zama & Gud additon Dead heart.
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zama
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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2009, 06:37:22 AM »
Quote from: dead heart on March 12, 2009, 06:30:53 AM
Applause Applause Applause ApplauseI am a big fan of English poetry...superb words with deep meaning...Awesome...

I may have needed u if u wuldnt betray me,
I wuld have loved u if u wuldnt stay in sumone else's heart,
The only thing I have for u is "hatred",
And I'm sure u dont need hatred anymore so u dont need me...

Thankz dead heart ji....


as of reply ..i would say:

All i have now ...is a ,silence soul to say
and for instance, some memories by the bay
but as u have hatred,i luv to share it some
for no one knows future and destiny is yet to come

Zama
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zama
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2009, 06:38:21 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on March 12, 2009, 06:36:26 AM
Very Very Nice Zama & Gud additon Dead heart.

Thankz sophi...
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addicted
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«Reply #5 on: March 12, 2009, 07:11:43 AM »
BAHOOT ACHAA LIKHI HO ZAMA JI
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zama
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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2009, 07:15:13 AM »
Thankz sir ji
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dead heart
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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2009, 09:56:48 AM »
Bahaut shukriya Sophi jee...
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dead heart
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«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2009, 10:02:33 AM »
Quote from: zama on March 12, 2009, 06:37:22 AM
Thankz dead heart ji....


as of reply ..i would say:

All i have now ...is a ,silence soul to say
and for instance, some memories by the bay
but as u have hatred,i luv to share it some
for no one knows future and destiny is yet to come

Zama
Welcome Zama jee...

The day I stop loving you,
I'll tear your soul apart in pieces,
The day my heart stops beating for you,
I'll build your grave when your alive...
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zama
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«Reply #9 on: March 12, 2009, 11:39:39 AM »
Quote from: dead heart on March 12, 2009, 10:02:33 AM
Welcome Zama jee...

The day I stop loving you,
I'll tear your soul apart in pieces,
The day my heart stops beating for you,
I'll build your grave when your alive...


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Gud thoughts Sir jee...

My reply:

The thoughts are new,with quite a reason
listen my luv,don't change with season !!!!


Zama
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«Reply #10 on: March 12, 2009, 12:27:50 PM »
Quote from: zama on March 12, 2009, 11:39:39 AM
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Gud thoughts Sir jee...

My reply:

The thoughts are new,with quite a reason
listen my luv,don't change with season !!!!


Zama


Wow ur simply a great writer...U say alot in very few words...
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«Reply #11 on: March 12, 2009, 12:29:32 PM »
BOhat Achche Zama Ji,. Nice One,.
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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2009, 07:19:54 PM »
Quote from: zama on March 12, 2009, 11:39:39 AM
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Gud thoughts Sir jee...

My reply:

The thoughts are new,with quite a reason
listen my luv,don't change with season !!!!


Zama

When these falling leaves decorate my grave,
You sweep them off and feel brave,
Blood filled with your memory still flows in my vein,
Thats the only reason Rahim still has pain...
              -Burried Heart-
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«Reply #13 on: March 13, 2009, 04:48:16 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 12, 2009, 12:29:32 PM
BOhat Achche Zama Ji,. Nice One,.

Thankz Jaanasheen Sahab


Quote from: dead heart on March 12, 2009, 07:19:54 PM

When these falling leaves decorate my grave,
You sweep them off and feel brave,
Blood filled with your memory still flows in my vein,
Thats the only reason Rahim still has pain...
              -Burried Heart-


I induced memories in to u'r blood
so that after death too,u stay alive
to tell the world our hidden true story
that our love was our life's glory

Zama
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«Reply #14 on: March 13, 2009, 04:53:13 AM »
Very nice Zama ji,N Rahim ji Applause Applause
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