Waiting For You..................

by unicorn_girl on June 04, 2005, 04:01:49 PM
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Waiting for you !!

I still remmeber this place and those days
we used to swing and play,
holding hands ,
tying friendship bands.
playing in that small backyard garden
making castles of dirty sand.
that place was so small
but it was a small paradise for us , all.
i cant forget those days
when we sat on that swing,
and that old song we used to sing.
today just standing near that paradise,
all that memories mind again brings.
Today in the same garden
i am not that small
i am standing very tall
but my heart still wants to swing with you
and play with you,
you have left the place.
you no more stay here.
you have left with your beautiful face
to some other place
but I still hope you will comeback someday
because those sweet memories will never decay
i will wait all my life , for a letter , for a call
saying that i am coming back , i am on my way
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2005, 06:45:35 PM »
This one is nice too Unicorn_girl .................!!!!!!!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2005, 09:19:36 AM »
those dances in the rain
those secrets of pain
those laughs till we'd drop
those hugs of encouragement
i do still remember those days my friend

those were the days
we'd fight like we'd never loose
we were sure of each moment
we were young and sure to have aur game

...
beautilully said my friend...Usual Smile
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Tosha
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2005, 09:21:00 AM »
those dances in the rain
those secrets of pain
those laughs till we'd drop
those hugs of encouragement
i do still remember those days my friend

those were the days
we'd fight like we'd never loose
we were sure of each moment
we were young and sure to have aur game


...
beautilully said my friend...Usual Smile
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unicorn_girl
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2005, 09:40:22 AM »
THAT WAS AL OVELY POEM TOO TOSHA !!!!
REALLY POIGNANT.
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Friend_4uall
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2005, 09:48:01 AM »
Good work all of you.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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unicorn_girl
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2005, 09:53:20 AM »
THANK YOU FRIEND , THANKS A LOT FOR YOUR FEEDBACK. NICE TO KNOW YOU . tongue3  tongue3
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Tosha
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«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2005, 11:10:27 AM »
Quote from: "unicorn_girl"
THAT WAS AL OVELY POEM TOO TOSHA !!!!
REALLY POIGNANT.


thanx a lot my dear girly..!!! u r amazing too Shocked
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