~~~ walk with me ~~~

by BeNam on February 09, 2006, 11:20:32 PM
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~~ walk with me ~~

When I was lost in time,
I didn’t find the words that rime,
Things were shattered,
Nothing seems to matter!

I had lost my faith in me,
Was roaming just like a bee,
Life had no meaning to me,
That had weakened my knees!

You walked in like an angel,
I never met some one so special,
You showed me the way to life,
I had to throw away my knife!

You said walk with me,
Life is beautiful cant you see,
I obeyed just like a slave,
But I will take those moments to my grave!

A walk with you has changed my life,
Now I need you for rest of my life,
Can I ask you to be my beloved wife?
Say you will be mine,
I won’t need any more from life!

--- BENAM ---
Being in love is living!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2006, 07:16:47 AM »
Quote from: "BeNam"
~~ walk with me ~~

When I was lost in time,
I didn’t find the words that rime,
Things were shattered,
Nothing seems to matter!

I had lost my faith in me,
Was roaming just like a bee,
Life had no meaning to me,
That had weakened my knees!

You walked in like an angel,
I never met some one so special,
You showed me the way to life,
I had to throw away my knife!

You said walk with me,
Life is beautiful cant you see,
I obeyed just like a slave,
But I will take those moments to my grave!

A walk with you has changed my life,
Now I need you for rest of my life,
Can I ask you to be my beloved wife?
Say you will be mine,
I won’t need any more from life!

--- BENAM ---
Being in love is living!


Very nice Benam, this shows ur love clearly:)

Keep writing, n Look for some typos
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2006, 09:53:54 PM »
very nice Benaam ji.........
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Rishi Soumya
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2006, 05:57:00 AM »
Very very nice.......
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BeNam
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2006, 05:28:08 PM »
Thanks Rishi, Nikki and Amit!

I have loved you and will love you forever never the less,
bcoz I know very few love stories have perfect end, Rest are end less!

--- BENAM ---
A heart that loves you,
and always wants to be with you!
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2006, 04:54:56 AM »
Gr8 Benam
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BeNam
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2006, 04:18:47 PM »
Thanks Shayarji!

With you as my love,
I want to live for enternity,
Because without you my love,
Life has no Certainty!
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2006, 06:10:32 PM »
Good job BeNam!!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2006, 08:19:39 PM »
Thanks Pooja ji!
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