Who am I

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"In the rainy dark nights,
My inner demons fight,
I am no longer taking a side,
I watch calmly and stand aside,
Both Devil and Angel are the same,
None I want to defame,
As who knows who I am!"
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2015, 04:01:34 AM »
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beautiful line niceeeeee
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2015, 04:31:46 AM »
Quote from: vinery on May 24, 2015, 03:42:58 AM
"In the rainy dark nights,
My inner demons fight,
I am no longer taking a side,
I watch calmly and stand aside,
Both Devil and Angel are the same,
None I want to defame,
As who knows who I am!"



boss!!!!!!!!!!!

nice lines but i have little contradiction in it the angel is considered  in  a positive sense and vice versa the devil. Being human we have blended both the characters in  and it reflects accordingly with the time even then we don't appreciate devil . We need to act as human and don't respect devil 

plz don't mind

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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2015, 06:56:02 AM »
Quote from: qalb on May 24, 2015, 04:31:46 AM

boss!!!!!!!!!!!

nice lines but i have little contradiction in it the angel is considered  in  a positive sense and vice versa the devil. Being human we have blended both the characters in  and it reflects accordingly with the time even then we don't appreciate devil . We need to act as human and don't respect devil 

plz don't mind

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I don't mind criticism but I wanna know why you keep calling me 'Boss'!
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2015, 07:08:01 AM »
nicely grafted ... POOJA ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2015, 07:11:21 AM »
Quote from: kumaar on May 24, 2015, 07:08:01 AM
nicely grafted ... POOJA ji
Thank you so much.
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2015, 07:12:04 AM »
Quote from: jeet jainam on May 24, 2015, 04:01:34 AM
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beautiful line niceeeeee
Thank you so much.
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2015, 07:38:04 AM »
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very good
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«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2015, 07:40:44 AM »
Quote from: alfaaz on May 24, 2015, 07:38:04 AM
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very good
Thank you so much.
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