Will You Love Me?

by Zaif on October 29, 2013, 03:48:47 PM
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I'm so broken that no help can cure me,
And I've no words to describe how I feel..
The sorrow of life has given me wounds,
But I'll try until my wounds heal.

The emptiness buried in me is opening its
wings,
Like a mighty hawk grabbing its tiny prey..
I've no one to share my innermost pains,
I'm just so lonely, what else can I say?

This world of emotions is emotionless so
far,
I've got none to say that you're mine.
I moved on, on my own, away from all,
I've the feeling that none can define..

So I'm asking you to feel how I feel,
Can you see the pain which always I see?
I'm not asking for more than a good friend,
I know its hard, but will you love me?

- Zaif
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 03:57:17 PM »
waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 05:29:07 PM »
Awesome one....

Keep writing...
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2013, 06:26:56 PM »
Thnk you ji.
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 06:27:53 PM »
U r most welcome Ji..
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2013, 09:17:59 PM »
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hmmm nice one zaif ji.. keep writing...
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2013, 10:34:08 AM »
Thnk u.
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