You wright to your belong

Any thing any where,
i put my feel my essence to something
some site,
A newcomer i see
once i did not get to see,
Any thing related to me goes far away i see
i want it back, "come close to me",
i wrote it, still it goes far,

someone takes the credit, but who?.
 still i don't get to see my work, seen i got a response
But i click and wait...,again nothing to be seen, either the person who responded also
My work, i feel like a nikumpup that is being used
but then as the newcomer we have to abide the rules.
but then why the things we write not able to be seen just post more,
wait more, then we might be able to see ower belongings?....

nice thought Anu ji.....keep writing....welcome to yo

Bahut khoob Anu ji.great creation.welcome to yo.

thanx for your comments

If 10 people care 4 u, one of them is me, if 1 person cares 4 u that would be me again, if no 1 cares 4 u that means i m not in this world.