Your touch: has left my veins to fire!:English

abdbundeli

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Your touch: has left my veins to fire!
   My elements: have turned to a pyre!

It was something, like, hardest rum:
That enters throat and pierces fast!
It was something, like storming hail:
That comes and freezes stretches vast!
   What burned so hot?
   What chilled so cold?
      I can’t say; what it was for sure?
      - For, I was not exposed before!
It was to me, stranger entire!
    My elements: have turned to a pyre!

First, I ventured at some self-help:
But nosed-down merely, like a whelp!
God! What all this, that eats me out?
My throat was choked, and rocked about!
   I failed to call:
   Midst that enthrall!
   My experiences failed, athwart!!
   I failed to play an active part!!
I’m self-compelled, but, to admire!
   Your touch: has left my veins to fire!

Plodding to-an’-fro, I stumbled oft!
Unknowingly, I rumbled oft!
Could not find any comfort, yet:
With mind in circles, bundled oft!
   I failed to live!
   I failed to die!
   And, life went-on, quite unconcerned;
   Though, some thing iced; and, something burned!!
It makes me stir: it makes me tire!
      Your touch: has left my veins to fire!

   ••••
   - G.R.Prakash


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prmchawla

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Re: Your touch: has left my veins to fire!

«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2008, 09:16:37 AM »

great yaar.


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MHussain

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Re: Your touch: has left my veins to fire!

«Reply #2 on: November 13, 2008, 02:39:27 PM »

it is long and very good very lovely


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abdbundeli

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Re: Your touch: has left my veins to fire!

«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2008, 02:57:59 PM »

prmchawla ji / MHussain ji!
Thanks a lot, you read it, and also discovered some substance in it!
- G.R.Prakash/abd bundeli


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Re: Your touch: has left my veins to fire!

«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2020, 03:20:38 PM »

Beautiful, nice, dheron daad.


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Re: Your touch: has left my veins to fire!

«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2020, 08:41:57 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 09, 2008, 09:10:31 AM

Your touch: has left my veins to fire!
   My elements: have turned to a pyre!

It was something, like, hardest rum:
That enters throat and pierces fast!
It was something, like storming hail:
That comes and freezes stretches vast!
What burned so hot?
   What chilled so cold?
      I can’t say; what it was for sure?
      - For, I was not exposed before!
It was to me, stranger entire!
     My elements: have turned to a pyre!

First, I ventured at some self-help:
But nosed-down merely, like a whelp!
God! What all this, that eats me out?
My throat was choked, and rocked about!
   I failed to call:
   Midst that enthrall!
   My experiences failed, athwart!!
   I failed to play an active part!!
I’m self-compelled, but, to admire!
Your touch: has left my veins to fire!

Plodding to-an’-fro, I stumbled oft!
Unknowingly, I rumbled oft!
Could not find any comfort, yet:
With mind in circles, bundled oft!
   I failed to live!
   I failed to die!
   And, life went-on, quite unconcerned;
   Though, some thing iced; and, something burned!!
It makes me stir: it makes me tire!
      Your touch: has left my veins to fire!

••••
- G.R.Prakash

Very nice..


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