A Love Story.... Must Read

by natural on September 29, 2005, 08:30:10 AM
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10 th Grade

As I sat there in English class,
I stared at the girl next to me.
She was my so called 'best friend'.
I stared at her long, silky hair,
and wished she was mine.
But she didn't notice me like that,
and I knew it. After class,
she walked up to me and asked me for
the notes she had missed the day before.
I handed them to her.
She said 'thanks' and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her, I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.

11th grade

The phone rang. On the other end,
it was her. She was in tears,
mumbling on and on about how her
love had broke her heart.
She asked me to come over because
she didn't want to be alone, So I did.
As I sat next to her on the sofa,
I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine.
After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie,
and three bags of chips, she decided to go home.
She looked at me, said 'thanks' and gave me a kiss on
the cheek..
I want to tell her, I want her to know that
I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


Senior year

One fine day she walked to my locker.
"My date is sick" she said, "he's not gonna go"
well,
I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade,
we made a promise that if neither of us had dates,
we would go together just as 'best friends'.
So we did. That night, after everything was over,
I was standing at her front door step.
I stared at her as She smiled at me
and stared at me with her crystal eyes.
Then she said- "I had the best time, thanks!"
and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her,
want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


Graduation

A day passed, then a week, then a month.
Before I could blink, it was graduation day.
I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel
up on stage to get her diploma.
I wanted her to be mine-but
she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it.
Before everyone went home,
she came to me in her smock and hat,
and cried as I hugged her.
Then she lifted her head from my shoulder
and said- 'you're my best friend, thanks' and
gave me a kiss on the cheek.
I want to tell her, I want her to know
that I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


Marriage

Now I sit in the pews of the church.
That girl is getting married now.
and drive off to her new life,
married to another man.
I wanted her to be mine,
but she didn't see me like that,
and I knew it.
But before she drove away,
she came to me and said 'you came !'.
She said 'thanks' and kissed me on the cheek.
I want her to know that
I don't want to be just friends,
I love her but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.


Death

Years passed, I looked down at the coffin
of a girl who used to be my 'best friend'.
At the service, they read a diary entry
she had wrote in her high school years.
This is what it read:
"I stare at him wishing he was mine;
but he doesn't notice me like that,
and I know it. I want to tell him,
I want him to know that
I don't want to be just friends,
I love him but I'm just too shy,
and I don't know why.
I wish he would tell me he loved me !
.........'I wish I did too...'
I thought to my self, and I cried.
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I know it's really a tragic story......... But sometimes it happens.... sad5
I hope ki aap aisa nahi karengey.....  Usual Smile
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friendlyjyo
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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2005, 09:08:00 AM »
wow nice story jaggs..... really its suparb
dost ko khone ki darr se log pyar chupa dete hai kya kare agar bayan kar bhi de to kya vo dost will accept it. if he/she accepts its would be great, else ek accha dost hi kho dete hai thats most of them pyar ko khone ko tayar par dosti ko nahi, this is friendship yar
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2005, 12:56:03 PM »
marvallous nature ....fantastic....... aaj tak maine jitne bhi topic padhe usme ye sabse best hai...... keep it up.... aur isi tarah acch acche topic post kerte rahiye....:wink:
pyaar ke uppar mai zyaada kuch nahi kahna chahoonga.... lekin ha tum jissse pyaar kerte ho aur wo aapki sabse acche dost hai to usko time jane se pahle hi bolna behtar hai ....  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2005, 07:29:40 PM »
awwwwww choo cheeweeeet Jags........just great......kinda sad too............

i agree we should just confess our love regardless of thinking wat the outcome will be ..........its better to confess than keeping in uor heart
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natural
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2005, 05:39:04 AM »
I agree w/ all of U friends......... & thanks for ur comments....
I think before falling in love......... the person we love is our friend.... and if he/she is a true friend of us than expressing our feelings should have no adverse effect.... Generally we think ki agar humney usey bataaya to kahi hamaari friendship na toot jaaye.... lekin agar wo wakayi tumhaara friend hai to deinitely tumhari feelings ka respect karega.... Atleast ur friendship should remain as before.......... Usual Smile
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Barsaath_Warshi
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2005, 08:19:01 AM »
natural ji. the same story is in inspirational story section  sad5
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natural
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2005, 08:46:10 AM »
Ya................. I found it yaar.... But what can we do now.....
I got this story in a mail and thought that it's worth sharing so placed it here......... :wink:
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2005, 08:51:17 AM »
no problem yaar. just i informed you but the story is really kool  glasses2
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