dark love story ( ek nayi suruwaat )

update,,1

apne is kahani ke piche 3 parts padhe hoge jinhe asif biswas ne likha tha..mai is kahani ka 4th part likhne ja rhi hu..hope apko pasand aaye Usual Smile avi tak apne padha ki kis tarah zindgi or duniya se ladkar sana or zayed ek hue.. aur zindgi ke ek naye safar par chal dete hai jaha unhe unke pyar ki nishaani ke roop mai zoyal milta hai.. aab aage.. sana or zayed duniya jahaan se bekhabar zoyal ke sath apni zindgi gujar rhe the..zayed sana ko kasam deta hai ki woh jadu chhod dega or insaano ki tarah mehnat krega..apni lagaan or sana ke support se zayed sana contructions ki neeb rakhta hai or dkhte hi dkhte sana contruction ooty ki no.1 company ban jati hai.. or akhir wo wakt aa hi jata hai jiska zayed ko barso se intzaar hota hai..usko buisness of the year ka award milta hai..jisko lene ke liye unko newyrk jana padta hai.. zayed or sana, zoyal ko sana ke dad ke ghar chhod ke newyrk ke liye nikal jate hai.. par ussi raat sana ke dad ko pata lagta hai ki jis flght mai sana and zayed jaa rhe the uska blast ho jata hai, ab sana ke dad pe jimmedari aati hai zoyal ko sambhale ki..usko palne ki..uss zoyal ko jo khud insaan ke roop mai ek jinn hai aur yahi se suru hoti hai hamari kahani...

now iam signing off,,next update raat ko dugi..

aapne dobara naye haal se pichle update post kiyaa hai khair aap waapis aayi jaankar khushi huyi aur pls jaldi se is kahani ko shuru kijiye aur haan pls adhura mat chodhiyega isse readers ke saath saath ek kahani ki zindagi bhi adhuri chutt jaati hai....gud luck wid my wishes 

update,, 3

kal zoyal 21 saal ka hone wala tha..
kal tha wo din jab usse apne pita ki sari takate milne wali thi..
zoyal khud ko ek haveli ke samne khada pata hai..charo taraf andhere..kuck to tha uss haveli mai jo itna andhera hone ke waabjud bhi woh haveli sone ki tarah chamak rahi thi..
tabhi uss haveli ka gate khulta hai..andar se itni rosni aati hai ki zoyal ko aankh band karni padti hai..zoyal ankh band kare hi haveli ke andar chala jata hai
haveli mai pohuch kar zoyal awwaaj deta hai.."koi hai..yaha koi hai.."
koi jawaab nahi deta..tabhi zoyal ki nazar diwar pe lagi ek painting pe jati hai..sayad kisi coulple ki painting thi woh..unka chehra dur se clear nahi dikh raha tha,,zoyal unka chehra dehkne ke liye jeshe hi paintng ke kareeb jata hai..haveli ke pehle male se awaaj aati hai.." hame bacha lo in darindo se..zoyal hume bacha lo in darindo se..zoyal beta hame bacha lo.."
zoyal jeshe hi unko bachane upar ki taraaf bhagta hai..

uski nend khul jati hai..subah ke 6 baj rahe hote hai..
zoyal soch mai pad jata hai..kya matlab hai iss sapne ka jo bachpan se usko sata raha hai..
yahi sochte sochte zoyal fresh hone chala jata hai..

guys review jarur dijiye agar kahani achi lage othrwise mai likhna stop krdugi

UPDATE,, 5

Samay gujarta jata hai
zoyal or zoyal ke bech ki duriya najdikiya mai badal jati hai
zoyal ko har raat wo sapna satata rehta hai
uske nanu ko lagta tha ab wakt aa gya hai jab zoyal ko uski sachai batayi jaye ki wo adamjaat ni hai ek jin hai

wahi in sab se bekhabr jino ke sehar mai mallkaan,magsur or riyaat ke bache bhi bade ho chuke hai
malkaan ka beta asif
magsur ka beta altaf or beti kaira
riyaat ke bete saaz or riyaaz

sabhi apne apne pita ki tarah shakti sali hai or apne pita ki maut ka badla zoyal se lene ke liye bekarar hai

har saal ki tarah jino ke sehar mai id manayi jati hai
id ke din jino ke raza har jin ki ek wish puri karte thad

asif,altaf,kaira,saaz,riyaaz
sabhi ki ek hi wish zoyal ka pata pana
jino ke raza ko bhari man se zoyal ka pta btana pada hai

yaha se suru hoti hai badle ki kahani
wo pure 5 or zoyal ek wo bhi apni shaktiyo se aanjaan..

agli raat ko zoyal ko phir sapna aata hai wo pagalo ki tarah chilla kar uth jata hai
uski awaaj sun kar nanu bhi a jate hai
nanu - kya hua beta ?
zoyal - nanu ye mere sath hi kyu ho raha hai mai pagal ho jaoga
nanu - may be i know ye sab tmhare hi sath kyu hota hai
zoyal - what ? apne aaj tak mujhe kyu ni btaya
nanu - mai bas sahi samay ka intzaar kar raha tha or mujhe dar tha mai tumhe kho na du beta
zoyal - aap kya keh rahe ho mujhe kuch samj ni aa raha
nanu - kal hum ooty chal rahe hai
zoyal - ooty why ?
nanu - tumhe kuch btana hai or dikhana bhi h..

    Update,, 6

    agli subah zoyal or uske nanu otty pohuch jate hai
    otty airport par zoyal: nanu lo apka otty a gya
    nanu: ye mera hi nahi or mere se jada tumhra otty hai
    tumhara kal aaj kal issi sehar se juda hu hai
    zoyal: nanu clear btayiye na
    nanu: sabr rakho dhere dhere sab pata lag jayega

    zoyal and nanu taxi mai baith kar
    nanu taxi wale se: driver taxh old hills ki taraf le lo

    old hills pohuch kar taxi ek purani si kothi ki taraf rukti hai..

    zoyal: nanu apko pure otty mai or koi jagah ni mili ghumne ke liye
    nanu: hum yaha ghumne nahi aye hai ye hamara purana ghar hai jaha tumhre maa bap rehte the
    zoyal: nanu aap ro rahe hai
    nanu: kuch nahi beta bas purani yaade taza ho gayi

    dono ghar ke andar jate hai
    pure ghar mai sannata faila hua hai

    nanu : beta mai tmhe jo btana chahta wo bohut jaruri baat hai
    zoyal : nanu boliye
    nanu : hmm beta tum koi aam insaan nahi ho
    zoyal : hain to kya bhoOt hu kya aap bhi nanu
    nanu : mai serious beta tum adamjaat nahi ek jinnat ho ek shaktishali jin
    zoyal : nanu ho gya apka mazak ?
    nanu : beta mera wishwas kro tum ek jin tumhre pita bhi jin the
    zoyal : what
    nanu : tum kehte the na tumhe wo sapna kyu aata hai bachpan se wo sapna tumse kuch kehna chahta hai usme tumhari zindagi ka koi raaz chupa hai
    zoyal : mai keshe manu mai jin hu
    nanu : apne dil mai jhaak kar dekho jawab tumhe khud mil jayega
    zoyal : mujhe kuch samaj nahi a rha
    nanu : mai tumhe dikhata hu aao mere sath

    dono basement mai jate hai
    waha ek box rakhna hota hai nanu us box ko khol kar usme se ek mani nikalte hai

    nanu : is mani ko apne hath mai pakdo
    zoyal mani ko pakadta hai tabi charo taraf sannata ho jata hai
    ajeeb tarah ki awaaje ane lagti hai, esha lagta hai zameen mai se koi ane wala hai

    zameen fat jati hah charo taraf duha hi duha fail jata hai or tabi ek naag zameen se nikalta hai

    zoyal : nanu jaldi chaliye yaha se
    nanu : thehro beta ye hamara kuch nahi krega ye tmhra sewak hai

    nanu aage bhadkar wo manh naag ke muh pe rakh dete hai or zoyal se kehte hah
    nanu : beta ya kank hai har tum ek saahi jin ho or har saahi ke pas ek ichadhari naag ke roop mah ek sewak hota hai jo jin ki hifajat krta hai
    otty se jane se pehle mene kank ko yahi rehne ko bola tha wo pichle 20 saalo apne malik yani tumhra wait kr rha hai

    kank mani pakar eka ek takatwar ho jata hai wo zoyal ki taraf jata hai zoyal ke pas aakar wo mani ko zoyal ke mathe se lagata
    zoyal ko sab kuch yad ane lagta hai wo kon hai kya hai uske maa bap ke jivan mai kya kya hua, keshe unki maut hui
    or achanak se zoyal ka roop badal jata hai or wo apne jin ke roop mai a jata hai

    too be continew.