Dark Love Story Part-4 ( ek nayi suruwaat )

by anjali kapoor on February 20, 2013, 04:06:42 PM
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apne is kahani ke piche 3 parts padhe hoge jinhe asif biswas ne likha tha..mai is kahani ka 4th part likhne ja rhi hu..hope apko pasand aaye Usual Smile

avi tak apne padha ki kis tarah zindgi or duniya se ladkar sana or zayed ek hue..
aur zindgi ke ek naye safar par chal dete hai jaha unhe unke pyar ki nishaani ke roop mai zoyal milta hai..

aab aage..
sana or zayed duniya jahaan se bekhabar zoyal ke sath apni zindgi gujar rhe the..zayed sana ko kasam deta hai ki woh jadu chhod dega or insaano ki tarah mehnat krega..apni lagaan or sana ke support se zayed sana contructions ki neeb rakhta hai or dkhte hi dkhte sana contruction ooty ki no.1 company ban jati hai..
or akhir wo wakt aa hi jata hai jiska zayed ko barso se intzaar hota hai..usko buisness of the year ka award milta hai..jisko lene ke liye unko newyrk jana padta hai..
zayed or sana, zoyal ko sana ke dad ke ghar chhod ke newyrk ke liye nikal jate hai..
par ussi raat sana ke dad ko pata lagta hai ki jis flght mai sana and zayed jaa rhe the uska blast ho jata hai,

ab sana ke dad pe jimmedari aati hai zoyal ko sambhale ki..usko palne ki..uss zoyal ko jo khud insaan ke roop mai ek jinn hai

aur yahi se suru hoti hai hamari kahani...
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2013, 04:08:18 PM »
pls btayiye apko startng keshi lagi..kal mai is stry ka next update likhugi
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2013, 04:32:31 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Achi hai.Keep it On......
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2013, 05:20:41 PM »
Starting..bahut acchi hai..
Aur maine aapme..story likhne ka talent..dekh liya hai..

But one question please..
Love to hear your reply..
why did you decide to write part 4 of this story..
having so much interest , could have easily come out with a new one.
Just curiosity?
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2013, 12:47:12 AM »
nice
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2013, 05:47:53 AM »
very nice. keep writing...
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2013, 06:40:43 AM »
HMMM ,,ANJALI MAINE PEHLE KE 3 PARTS NAHI PADHE HAI BUT YAHA SE JO AAPNE SHURU KIYA HAI WO ACHHA LAGA HAI ,,,NICE TWIST N TURN ,,,
DEKHTE HAI US ZOYAL KA KYA HOTA HAI ,,,,USKI PARWARISH KAISE HOTI HAI,,,
NICE KEEP WIRTING... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2013, 06:41:46 AM »
thankx guys
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2013, 06:55:50 AM »
sana ke dad ka name nhi btaya gya hai piche 3 parts mai thats y mai unke name jagah mr.d.k kapoor use kri hu :p

haan to mr.kapoor zayed n sana ki maut ki khabar sun kar andar tak hil gaye the..unhe samj nhi aa rha tha wo kya kre..
ek taraf apni beti khone dard, dusri taraf uski akhiri nishaani zoyal..
wo itne toot chuke the ki wo suicide krne ja rhe the tbi zoyal ke khyal ne unko rook liya..
tbi mr.kapoor wo zoyal is sehar,is sehar ki yaado se door..bohut door lekar chale jayege..
wo apna sb kuch chhod ke otty se zoyal ko lekar dehradoon shift ho jate hai.. or usko itna pyar dete hai jisse zoyal ko kbhi uske maa-bap ki yaad na aye..
par wo is baat se bekhabhr nhi the ki zoyal insaan nhi ek jinnat tha unhne ye baat ki zoyal ko kbi khbar nhi lgne di ki wo ek jinn hai

samay gujarta rha or zoyal ab 20 saal ka ho chuka tha..
zoyal dkhne mai koi aam insaan se nazar nhi aata tha..gora rang,brown hair,blue eyes,esha lgta tha pariyo ki duniya ka koi rajkumar ho.. or ho b kyu na akhir tha to wo sana or zayed ka ansh hi na Usual Smile

koi b zoyal ek nazar dkh kya le uspe fida ho jaye..uski gusse ko pigla dene wali muskam sbko ghayal krdeti thi..

ek baat se bekhabr ki uski hasti khelti zindgi bdalne wali hai..uska sb kuch usse cheen jane wala tha..
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2013, 07:16:58 AM »
keep it up ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2013, 01:09:00 AM »
very good ,,,write next step Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: March 03, 2013, 09:27:24 PM »
Hmm sabse pehle toh aapko mera hello aur aapne kaafi shaandar tarike se dark love series ko aage badhane ka jo step uthaaya hai ooske liye i am great thankful to u darasal maine kabhi socha nahi tha ki main iske aage ke parts bhi likhunga lekin aapki is mehnat aur naayab tarike se nayi part4 umeed karunga inssah allah mere story se bhi acche chale...and if u will feel any doubt..in last parts of this story bejhijhak puch lijiyega...main chahta hoo ki agar khooni dil ka bhi new part aap likhe toh meri khushnaseebi hongi...aap jo bhi likh rahi hai bahut accha likh rahi hai..... icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #12 on: March 25, 2013, 02:44:32 PM »
hello fr m is site par naya hoon maine is stori ke teeno part padhe hain bahut badhiya stori hai.
bahut badhiya suruat ki hai aapne
keep it up .....
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2013, 11:02:06 PM »
waiting for next update
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«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2015, 04:47:26 PM »
Kya ye story kabhi puri bhi hogi maine apne teeno stories ke part complete kar diye they koi bhi adhura nahi chodha aapse ye umeed nahi thi so unfair sad5
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