~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~:General Stories

k.shael

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Hello to All Dear Friends..

Aaj mein koi shayri ya ghazal likhne nahi balki ek aisi kahani likhne ja rahi hoon, jo bilkul sachi hai, Aap sab iss kahani ko Mohabbat, Pyaar, shq, Diwangi,Umeed,Dhokhe,Lachari,Nafrat, aur Sachi Kahani keh sakte hai...

Ye kahani hai ek ladke(Dev)ki,

Dev, ghar me 3 badi behno ka akela pyara bhai, bahut hi mannato, duaon ke sath gharwalo ne use paya, kyunki 3 behne usse badi thi, so use na sirf maa-baap balki, 3 behno ka pyaar laad bhi bahut mila..uski har jarurat har maang ko poora kiya jaata, iss wajah se wo kuch sharrti sa bhi ho gaya tha, lekin ek baat thi jo usne kabhi bhi galat nahi ki, wo ye ki itna pyaar milne ke bawjood usne kabhi kuch galat nahi kiya, fayda nahi uthaya, hamesha naa sirf Mumy-Papa ki balki 3 behno ki bhi bahut ijjat ki, wo bhi unse utna hi pyaar karta jitna ki wo 3 usse, unme se badi siter padayi kar chuki thi aur as a teacher job karne lagi, unka ghar kiraye par tha, jab teacher bani to bache ghar padne tution par bhi aane lage..isi beech choti 2 behno ne bhi apni study poori karke, teaching ko hi apna profission bana liya, isi beech sourav bhi bada ho gaya tha wo bhi study karne lag gaya tha, bahut hi pyara, hasta khelta pariwaar, aab baat chali badi behan ki shaadi ki to unki shaadi karwa di gayi,...

aage phir se likhongi..tab tak aap bataiye kya aap log interested hai iss kahani ko sunne me..

wiating for replies..

Shally.


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cara

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2009, 06:17:42 AM »

KYUN SUSPENSE MAIN RAHKTI HO SHALLY JI, BADA DIYO AAGE DEV KI LOVE STORY!


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salil2002

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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2009, 06:39:23 AM »

i m interested love4


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madhuwesh

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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2009, 07:10:32 AM »

SHALLY DEAR,I AM INTERESTED,JALDI JALDI LIKH SWEETY. love4


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Sammual

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2009, 07:52:23 AM »

Jaldi Likho..


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dead heart

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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2009, 08:55:36 AM »

Me too I'd love to read this story ahead...


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2009, 08:57:39 AM »

Thanx for ur replies frnds..

Aage..

Badi sister ki shaadi hone ke baad, aab Dev choti 2 behno ke aur bhi kareeb aa gaya, shayad use ye ehsaas ho gaya tha ki ye 2 bhi use ek din chod kar apne ghar chali jayengi, jab behno ke pass bache tution pad rahe hote to, Dev so raha hota, aur choti sister jaa kar use pyaar se utha kar bacho ke beech le aati, wo thodi bahut naah bhi karta, par behno ki zidd ke aage kuch na kar paata, aur beth jaata copies lekar..

isi tarah din bhadte gaye..aur behno ne aacha-khasa tution classes chala liye, wo Dev ko bhi utne hi pyaar aur salike se padati jaise baki sab ko..isi tarah se din beette gaye aur ek din Dev ne bhi apni study complete kar li..

aage aapke Replies ke baad...


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poppoetry

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2009, 09:10:46 AM »

intzaar aage ka Shally ji......jaldi post kariye


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Talat

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2009, 12:28:25 PM »

Waiting for more icon_thumleft


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jasbirsingh

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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2009, 06:34:01 PM »

pls carry on...


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #10 on: September 16, 2009, 05:07:14 AM »

Thanx for ur replies frnds..

Aage..

Dev bhi dusre ladko-ladkiyon ki tarah, school time me frnds banata gaya, par haan ladkiyon se wo kam hi baat karta kyunki, wo usi school me pad raha tha jahaan par uski 2 badi sisters padati thi, uski class ki kayi ladke ladkiyan uski behno ke pass padne aati tution classes ke liye, so isi liye behno ki ijjat aur darr ke karan ladkiyon se door rehta tha, padayi me kaafi aacha tha, iss liye nahi ki uski sisters uski teachers, iss liye bhi kyunki wo dekhta tha ki kaise uski behne mehnat karke yahan tak pahunchi hai, Dev bahut hi pyara, masoom aur smart ladka tha, itna ki agar koi ladki use dekh le to pyaar me pad hi jaaye, aur uski smile wo to bahut hi pyari thi, uski baatein aisi jaise bass insaan ka dil kare ki sunte hi jao, ek aur kaam jo Dev bahut aache se karta tha wo tha jab shaam ko ssiters thak jaati to unhe tea ke saath maggi bana kar deta tha, aur behne use pyaar se apni katori me se khilaati, sach me bahut hi pyaar tha in 3 bhai behno me, aur mumy papa apne bachon ko khush dekhkar, aur bhi khush ho jaate..aab jab sisters aacha kamane lagg gayi to unhone papa ki help karke ek plot(khali jameen) li, aur uspe apna gahr banana shuru kiya, raat ko papa aur dopehar se shaam tak dev wahaan ka dhayan rakhta, aur phir kuch hi mahino baad unka ghar bann gaya bahut hi pyara sa ghar..aab sab aur bhi khush the..

aage aapke replies ke baad..

Shally.


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madhuwesh

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«Reply #11 on: September 16, 2009, 12:29:32 PM »

Sweet Shally kyun tarsate ho jaldi bata phir kya hua,very nice story. love4


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Sammual

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«Reply #12 on: September 16, 2009, 01:35:18 PM »

Nice Story Abhi Tak Bahut Achi Lagi.Likhte Raho.......


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poppoetry

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«Reply #13 on: September 17, 2009, 04:02:27 PM »

Waiting............


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #14 on: September 18, 2009, 04:39:49 AM »

Dear friends..

keep repling..show ur interest..so i can post the more story..

waiting for ur replies..

Shally.


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