~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~ -Panna 3:General Stories

k.shael

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«Reply #30 on: October 08, 2009, 05:01:42 AM »

Aage..

Thanx Friends for ur reply..

Isi tarah 2-4 din Dev ke dhayan me Raagini aati jati rahi..aab use har cheez me ek rang, ek khushi, aur mohabbat nazar aati, wo har cheez ki taraf khichne sa laga..aur iss sab ki wajah bhi thi to Raagini..kyunki ye shayad dev samjh hi nahi paa raha tha ki wo Raagini ko pyaar karne laga hai..aur jab usne iss cheez ke baare me apne dost se baat ki to usne kaha ki Dev tujhe to pyaar ho gaya hai re, to dev jhalla utha..kehne laga arre yaar nahi aisa kuch nahi hai, bass mujhe Raagini aachi lagi, aur tujhe to pata hai mujhe to pyaar ka matlab tak nahi maloom mein kaise pyaar kar sakta ho, maine aaj tak dhang se kisi ladki se baat tak nahi ki, tu galat keh raha hai mujhe pyaar nahi hua..ye to bass u hi..

to uss ka dost bola u hi kya ? bata na u hi kya ? bawle sach me tujhe pyaar hua hai, tu use yaad kar raha hai, use khud me apni zindagi me mehsoos kar raha hai, wo ladka jisne shaam nahi dekhi wo aajkal chatt pe chadke chand dekh raha hai to iska kya matlab hai, budhu matlab saaf hai tujhe mohabbat ho gayi hai mere yaar..

Par dev wo to hairaan pareshaan ye maine kya kiya..ye kaise ho gaya..mein use bhoola donga mujhe nahi padna iss pyaar ke chakkar me..to uska dost bola ab pad hi gaya hai to aab bahar nikal nahi sakta mere yaar..

Dev ne bahut socha ki aab wo Ragini ke baare me nahi sochega..par wo jitna bhoolta raggini ka chehra utna hi khil ke uske samne aa jata..use bhi lagne laga ki aab sach me use raagini se pyaar ho gaya hai..usne apne dost se kaha ki yaar tu apni G.F. se bol aur mujhe kaise bhi karke Raagini ka phone no. dila de, mein usse baat karna chahta ho, use batana chahta ho ki mere saath kya ho raha hai, Dev ke dost ki G.F. ne thodi bahut na-nukar ke baad Dev ko Raagini ka no. de diya..kyunki ye raagini ka personal no. tha, to Dev ko baat karne me jyada prob. nahi honi thi..Dev ne himmat karke agle din office me jaate hi office ke no. se Raagini ko call ki,

Dev -hello, kya mein raagini se baat kar raha hoon ?
Raagini -hello, yes mein Raagini bol rahi hoon ..
Dev -hello Ragini mein Dev bol raha hoon, r u remember me..??
Raagini- ohh Dev aap!! aapne phone kaise kiya aapko mera no. kasie mila ?
Dev -wo maine aapki frnd se liya tha..khair aur bataiye kaisi hai aap ?
Raagini - ji mein theek ho aap kasie hai ?
Dev -ji theek to hoon parr...
Raagini -par kya ?
Dev - kuch nahi, i mean theek ho.
Dev -raagini kya mein kabhi kabhi aapko call kar sakta hoon agar aapko bura na lage to,
Raagini -thodi de baad, par Dev ham to ek dusre ko jante tak nahi to phir ??
Dev -bass raagini mein apko pareshan nahi karonga, if u like then can we talk ?
Raagini -ok, par kuch waqt ke liye bass..
Dev -oh sure..
Raagini -Dev kya ye apka no. hai,
Dev -nahi actually pehli baar kisi ladki ko call karne laga tha to office ke no. se ki..
Raagini - ohh okkk
Dev -waise aap mera no. le lijiye mein usi se next time Call karonga.
Raagini -ok
Dev -thnx Raagini aapse baat karke aacha laga..aab mein phone rakhta ho,
Raagini -ji theek hai..
Dev -tc bye
Raagini -ok bye

Baat karne ke baad dev ko aise laga jaise wo bilkul fresh aur gud feel kar raha hai, aab na to wo baichaini rahi na hi tenshion..phir bhi Raagini ki aawaj aur chehra Dev ki aankhon ke samne ghoomta raha..

Aage aapke replies ke baad..plz frnds aur reply kijiye..kya aapko ye story pasandh nahi aa rahi

Shally.


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poppoetry

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #31 on: October 08, 2009, 10:03:30 AM »

ji shally ji mujhe toh ye story pasand nahi aa rahi......
balki bahut pasand aa rahi hai.....waiting for more Usual Smile


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Sammual

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«Reply #32 on: October 08, 2009, 10:09:17 AM »

MB Story Very Nice Shally Ji. Aage Jaldi Likhiyega. Applause


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madhuwesh

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #33 on: October 14, 2009, 03:08:56 AM »

Wah Shally ji,bahut pasand aayee mujhe jaldi se likh.lovely story. icon_thumleft


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Sager4u

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #34 on: October 16, 2009, 04:55:01 AM »

Wow shaLly, mindblowing great story,y not u write more? Plz cont.
Waitingggggggggggggggg


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #35 on: October 28, 2009, 06:38:59 AM »

Thanx frnds for replies..

Aab Aage..

Dev jaane anjaane aab bahut badal sa gaya tha, Raagini se milne ke baad shayad use uski jawani ka ehsaas ho raha tha, chahte na chahte hue bhi wo behno se door hone laga tha, aisa nahi tha ki wo unse baat nahi karta tha, lekin wo khud hi mein ek nayi umaango se bhari zindagi jeene laga tha, jisme use pyaar ke rang, Raagini, thandi hawayein aur phool-baharein nazar aati, haan ye bhi sach hai ki aab pehle se kayi guna jyada pyaara aur masti se bharpoor ho gaya tha, masti bachpan wali nahi jawani wali..shayad isi ko pyaar, mohabbat aur ishq kehte hai..

Udhar Raagini ne bhi Dev ki call aane ke baad se Dev ke baare me sochna shuru kar diya, shayad use bhi Dev ki kahi ankahi baatein samjh aane lagi..jab use ehsaas hua ki shayad wo bhi Dev ko pasandh karne lagi hai to ek baar ghabra si gayi..aur phir u hi aayine ke pass jakar khud me se shayad Dev ko dekh ke sharam ke maare ek choti si muskaan dekar hass padi..

Idhar Dev ne Raagini ko 1 hafte tak phone nahi kiya, shayad khayalo se bahar aaya hi nahi, aur usne Raagini ko phone karke pareshan na karne ka waada bhi kiya tha, to shayad iss liye usne call nahi ki, par Raagini use bhi to aab pyaar ka ehsaas ho raha tha, wo bhi shayad Dev se baat karne ko chatpata rahi thi..par karti bhi kya ? wo khud Dev ko call nahi karna chahti thi..to usne wait karna hi behtar samjha..

Achanak uss din Raagini jab college se ghar aayi to use aate hi ek phone aaya..ye phone dev ka hi tha...

Aage aapke replies ke baad..

Shally.


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madhuwesh

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #36 on: October 28, 2009, 06:51:16 AM »

Kyun hum sabko satate ho Shally dear,jaldi bata phir kiya hua.pliz.bahut achi kahani hai.


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k.shael

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«Reply #37 on: October 28, 2009, 07:12:40 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on October 28, 2009, 06:51:16 AM

Kyun hum sabko satate ho Shally dear,jaldi bata phir kiya hua.pliz.bahut achi kahani hai.

Madhu dear, thnx for reply.

i also want to writte more, but i wanna knw, ki kitne logo ko ye story pasandh aa rahi hai, dear mujhe bhi to meri mehnat ka phal milna chahiye na..

Shally.


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Sammual

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #38 on: November 02, 2009, 12:46:44 PM »

Bahut Khoob Shally Ji. Applause

Sahi Kaha Madhuwesh Ji Ne. Jaldi Age Bhi Likhoo..


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poppoetry

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #39 on: November 05, 2009, 03:44:11 PM »

Kha gum hai aajkal aap dear Shally ji........ sad11

jaldi aaiye.....kahani aage badhaiye.......


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madhuwesh

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«Reply #40 on: November 06, 2009, 05:57:02 AM »

Shally dear ab toh likho,kab tak intezaar karu. tongue3


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k.shael

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«Reply #41 on: November 25, 2009, 06:48:39 AM »

Shukriya dosto replies ke liye..

Aab Aage...

Dev ki call dekhte hi Raagini ko jaise iss jahan ki har khushi mil gayi, jaise hi phone uthaya to Dev ki aawaj sun kar dil ko aisa sakoon mila ki jameen aur aasmaan ko bhi aacha laga..Raagini ne iss baar se Dev se bahut khul kar baat ki, jaane kyun par iss baar ki baat ne unhe ek naye rishte ki gaanth me baandhna shuru kar diya..Aur Dev wo to deewana sa ho ke sun raha tha Raagini ki baatein, aaj unn dono ko waqt ka bhi khayal na raha, Jis Raagini ne bola tha ki wo jyada der phone pe baat nahi karegi, aaj wo khud hi phone rakhna nahi chah rahi thi, khair dono me bahut si baatein hui, aur Dev ne raagini se bola ki chalo theek hai mein phir phone karonga aabhi phone rakhta hoon kuch kaam hai, shayad Raagini ka mann aabhi bhi phone rakhne ko nahi kar raha tha, usne bhi bade bemane se bola theek hai phir baat karenge..aur phone rakhte rakhte ye bhi pooch liya Dev kya kabhi mein tumhe call kar sakti ho agar dil kare to..Dev ne kaha haan Raagini kyun nahi, jab dil kare..kar lena..aur phone rakh diya..

Aab halat ye thi ki Dev se jyada Raagini ko ye rishta pyara lagne laga tha, Dev wo to pehele se hi iss rishte me bandh sa gaya tha..aab yahi silsala chal pada..dono ek dusre ko phone karte rahe..baatein hoti rahi..ek din baat karte hue Dev ke mann me pata nahi kya aaya bola Raagini kya ham dobara mil sakte hai, mera bahut mann hai aapse milne ko aur office me kuch khas kaam bhi nahi hai to agar ham aaj mil le..Raagini pehle to thoda sochne lagi phir boli theek hai Dev me shaam tak soch ke bata dongi..aur jana kahaan hai ? Dev ne bola wahi jahaan pehli baar mile the..Raagini ki aankhein aur muskurahat sharam se bhar uthi, ya u kahe ki uss din ko yaad kar khil gayi...

Dev sham hone ka intzaar karne laga, 4 baj gaye, 5 baj gaye, par aabhi tak Raagini ki call nahi aayi, thoda pareshan ho gaya, aur mayoos bhi ki shayad mujhe nahi kehna chahiye tha..6 baj gaye, aabhi tak Raagini ne call nahi ki, phir bhi dil me ek aas thi ki wo phone karegi, par ye kya Raagini ne na hi phone kiya aur na hi msg.

Bade bemane se utha aur ghar ko aa gaya, na dhang se hassa-bola na hi kisi se baat ki, aur na hi dhang se kha paaya..neend wo to shyad aaj aani hi nahi thi, itni baichaini to kabhi na thi...shyad ishq-e-khumaar tha, ya phir Dev ho gaya ishq-e-bimaar tha...hahaha

khair jaise taise raat gujri, aab subah phir se wahi latka hua chehra..to behno ne pooch hi liya ki ye kya halat bana rakhi hai, na smile na baat ye kya ho raha hai tujhe..kahin phir se to bimaar nahi, maathe pe hath rakh ke dekha sab theek tha, aab kisi ko kaise chalta ki bukhar to hai par dil ko aur wo bhi loveria wala...khair unki baatein taal kar jaldi se naha-dho ke tyaar ho ke office ke liye nikla,,office pahunch ke bhi mann ko chain nahi ek baar to socha ki Raagini ko phone karke pooche aisa kyu kiya, par phir zidd ki wajah se na kiya..aakhir dopehar hui lunch lagne laga par dhayan aab nahi tha, aab bhi soche ja raha tha ki tabhi phone ki ring baji..dekha to phone raagini ka hi tha, pehle to socha ki nahi uthaunga, par dil hai ki manta nahi, dev ne phone uthaya, udhar se Ragini boli, hello kaise ho, Dev theek ho, tum kaisi ho, mein bhi theek ho, sorry yaar mein kal aa nahi paayi aur na hi phone kiya, tumhe bura laga hoga, nahi koi baat nahi par haan tum bata deti to..to kya ? Raagini ne poocha, Dev kuch nahi...

Raagini 2-4 meethi baaton se hi Dev ka mood theek kar diya..jaise kuch hua hi nahi..aur Dev wo bhi bhool gaya..aab ye wo waqt tha jab dev ko ehsas hua ki raagini ki uski zindagi me hone na hone ka kami pata lagne lagi, Raagini ne kaha ki mein bhi milna chahti par kisi wajah se nahi aa payi, par koi baat nahi phir kabhi milenge..sab baat clear ho gayi..aab Raagini ne kaha chalo phone rakhti ho phir baat karenge mujhe kahin jana hai gharwalo ke sath, Dev ne kaha ok koi baat nahi tum jao tc bye..

idhar dev bhi apne kaam me lag gaya..achank sham ke 5 baje ek msg. aya, Dev ne pada to ragini ka tha, aur likha tha..m waiting for u at our 1st meeting place..Dev ki khushi ka thikana hi na raha fatafat computer off kiya, manager ko bol ke ki jaldi ja raha ho, byic nikal ke pahunch gaya...wahan Ragini black pujami suit pehene ek table pe baithi uski raah dekh rahi thi..jaise hi pahuncha dono ne hath milaya..ek dusre se aankhein mili, aur lo ho gaya pyaar..i knw ki pyaar to pehele hi tha, par aaj confirm ho gaya tha..khair dono ne sath beth ke bahut baatein ki, Dev ne byic nikali aur wo ghar ke liye chal pade..Raagini simti si baithi thi, par aaj thoda sa aacha feel kar rahi thi, kyunki ye 2 baar thi jab wo dev ke sath byic pe baithi, raste dev ne bola raagini pakad ke bathna plz, tumhe pata hai na mujhe byic tej chalane ki aadat hai, Raagini sharam se bhar gayi, par phir bhi apna right hand Dev ki kamar pe rakh diya..2-3 baar jhatke lage to ek dum dev se lag gayi..shayad ye khuda ki marzi thi ya phir..ishq ki ijajat..

dev ne raagini ko ghar ke bahar road pe choda..aur bye bola,par dono ki aankhein to ek dusre ko jaise na chodne ko keh rahi thi..raagini ne bhi bye bola aur dev byic le ke chala gaya,,raagini use jata dekhti rahi...

aur phir badi pyari se smile le ke ghar aa gyai..dev wo bhi bahut hi khush tha..

Aage aapke replies ke baad..

plz padiye aur bataiye ye story kaisi hai..

shukriya

Shally.


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madhuwesh

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #42 on: November 25, 2009, 08:34:16 AM »

Wow bahut khoob Shally dear.beautiful story.ab toh aur maza aane lagi.very romantic.great work.


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Sammual

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #43 on: December 02, 2009, 11:38:30 AM »

Wow Main Apki Stori Ka Deewana Ho Gaya Hoon Plz Agli Baar Jaldi Post kariyega Applause


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arunsingh

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Re: ~~"Dev Ki Love Story by Shally."~~

«Reply #44 on: December 30, 2009, 05:18:03 PM »

Shally Pls if Possible Make It Fast..


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