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by asif biswas on July 30, 2010, 03:31:28 PM
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main asif fhir ek baar nayi kahani lekar meri pichli kahani yani khooni dil mein mujhe itna response nahi mila lekin main jaanta hoo ki ye kahani to jaroor aapko acchi lagegi so,story starts now ye kahani hai ek ladke ki jise pyar na to pasand tha aur na hi usme uska koi interest tha us ladke ka naam rajvir tha uske papa koi multinational company mein kaam karte hai aur maa housewife so ek din rajvir apne dosto ke paas gaya to unhone use baato baato mein cheda ki teri girlfriend kyun nahi to usne chal hat jawab dekar wapis ghar ko ho lia tabhi use piche se uske dost jo ki uska sabse karibi dost tha monit awaj lagayi to rajvir ne piche palatkar kaha kya hai? bola are tu to naraz ho gaya rajvir ne kaha dekh tujhe kitni baar kaha hai ki aise bekar sawaal mujhse mat pucha kar monit ne kaha aisi kya baat hai ki tu itna pyar ko bura kharab samajhta hai rajvir ne kaha chal batata hoo kuch der chalne ke baad rajvir aur monit ek park mein jaakr beth gaye aur fhir ekdam se rajvir ne kaha dekh pyar karna bekaar hai isse hamesha taklif hoti hai kuch log to iska galat faayeda uthate hai to fhir ise karna hi kyun to mohit ne kaha sun yaar har ladke aur ladki ke life mein ek partner hota hai main tujhpe koi jabardasti nahi kar raha ki tu koi girlfriend bana balki main ye kehna chahta hoo ki tu itna chidta kyun hai pyar ek jaisa nahi hota jo jisse pyar karta hai use hi pata hai pyar kya chiz hai aur agar ek baar tu ise karke dekh to beta duniya ki saari chiz acchi lagti hai rajvir ne kaha aur haa jab pyar wo pyar na ho na jo thik hai tab to badi bekaar hai mohit ne kaha thik hai tujhe meri baat nahi sun ni tujhe lagta hai ki pyar karna bahoot hi boring hai to tu yahi samajh lekin beta jab tere paas pyar khud aa jayega to tu mujhe thankyou kahaega rajvir ne kaha bhool ja kyunki main in sab pachdo mein nahi padta meri life jaisi hai thik hai aur itna kehkar wo akela waha se chala gaya ghar aate samay use ek ladki dikhi halaki wo ladki to dekhta tak nahi tha par na jaane use kya hua ki usne use badi gaur se dekha fhir apni shapat ko yaad kar usne muh fair liya aur sidha ghar ko chala ghar aate hi usne khana khaya aur palang par jaakr so gaya subah uth te hi use fhir se woh ladki ka chehra nazar aaya aur apne aap ko jhatakar usne tez swar mein kaha kya main bhi kya sochne lag gaya school jaate hi wo apne sit par beth gaya tabhi mam aayi aur mam ne sab studennts ko nayi student ka parichay diya use dekh kar rajvir thoda hairan hua aur fhir uspar se nazar hata li yu hi din gujarne lage ab class mein sab jagah us ladki ki tarif aur uski khoobsurati ki misaal di jaati ye sab sunkar rajvir irritate ho gaya aur usne apne dosto ko kaha ki yaar ladki ko chodkar aur kuch nahi ye kya tum sab ke paas rajvir ke dosto ne kaha abe zara dekh to sahi iss ladki ko kitni mat hai rajvir ne kahatum logo se baat karna hi bekaar hai aur fhir wo ghar chala gaya shaam ko park mein jab rajvir khelkar wapis ghar aa raha tha tabhi uski takkar ek ladki se hui wo ladki ko dekhkar rajvir ne sorry kaha aur use dekhta hi reh gaya kyunki woh ladki koi aur nahi jise wo ab dekh raha tha wahi ladki thi se dekhke us ladki ne kaha tum mere classmate ho na to rajvir ladakhte huye kaha ji ha waise maine tumhe pehle bhi kahi dekha hai ladki ne jawab diya rajvir bola ha wo pichli shaam main jab ghar jaa raha to maine tumhe dekha fhir thodi baat kar rajvir ne uska naam pucha to usne bataya shivani sun kar rajvir use bye keh ke chala gaya ab rajvir uspe dhyan nahi deta lekin school me use dosto ne bataya ki us ladki ka ek boyfriend hai lekin rajvir ne haa keh kar baat ko kat diya fhir ek din rajvir ke paas aayi aur usko hello keh ke chali gayi ab aage ki kahani main baad mein likhoonga tab tak mujhe reply jaroor bhejiyega pls give me ur commnts  
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2010, 08:21:40 AM »
uske baad hua yun ki rajvir aksar uss ladki ko nahi niharta but ek din class mein ladka aur ladki ke groups mein ek game hua truth and dair rajvir ne kaha main ye game nahi khelunga mujhe bakwaas lagta hai to uske dosto ne kaha khel na yaar mere chidchide dost aur usko zabardasti game mein bithaya rajvir iss game mein dair pasand nahi karta tha jis wajah se wo hamesha truth leta tha uske baad game mein shivani par question poochne ka aur rajvir ko batane ka aaya jisme rajvir ne truth liya to dosto ne shivani ko uske personal love ke baare mein janna chaha lekin rajvir ne nahi bataya aur goose se bahar chala gaya shivani uske piche gayi aur kaha yaar tum itna pyar vyar se chidte kyun ho usne kaha dekho shivani ye sab fijhul hai ye hamari life ko kharab kar dete hai isse kuch nahi hota bas dukh badta hai main ye jimmedari uthana nahi chahta par shivani ne kaha dekho rajvir manti hoo tumhe koi ladki pasand nahi but kam se kam aise pyar ko bura mat bolo agar har kisi ke dil mein pyar nahi hota to wo apne aapko akela aur helpless samajhta hai chahe wo kitna bhi pyar se dur reh le abhi bhi kehti hoo isse tukharao mat rajvir ne kaha jab aayega tab aayega waise tum mujhe itna kyun samjha rahi ho tum to meri koi lagti nahi ho aur by the way maine suna hai tumhara ek boyfriend bhi hai to shivani ne kaha jab jhoot hai ye sab to ek jhooti afwa hai so tum bas ek baar karke dekho itna kehkar shivani chali gayi aur rajvir akad ke apne doosre kaamo lag gaya aise din yuhi bit gaye aur fhir shaam ko rajvir aur monit baat kar rahe the ki kal unke school me valentine hai so wo kis ladki ko rose de monit ne rajvir se kaha but rajvir ne bola dekh yaaar tujhe jisko bhi rose dena hai tu de main apni jagah thik hoo kehkar dono ne baat ko wahi kaat diya fhir agle din class mein rajvir bheta tha aur wo is soch mein duba tha ki kaun ladki us pagal ko rose degi aur kaun mujhe bas fhir kya tha sab ne apne apne partners ko wish aur rose dekar valentine day celebrate kiya but rajvir un sabko dekh kar has raha tha fhir school ki chutti huyi aur sab bacche class se nikal gaye sirf rajvir ko bag pack karne mein late lag gaya tabhi uske paas shivani aayi aur kaha tumne kisi ko wish nahi kiya aur use dekhkar rajvir thoda hairaan hua aur kaha tum ghar nahi gayi to shivani ne kaha koi to hai nahi saath jaane ko isliye socha tum saath chalte to achaa rehta fhir rajvir ne kaha koi baat nahi shivani boli tumhe kisi ne wish nahi kiya bola mujhe oh cmon main na to kisi ko wish kkarta hoo aur na hi aise kaam karta hoo shivani boli mujhe to kaafi ladko ne wish kiya but mujhe laga koi aur wish karega par it's ok to rajvir bola forget it ye sab bade mein bhi ho sakta hai abhi to hum school students hai aur itna kehkar dono class se nikal gaye fhir shivani ne kaha ki mujhe tum bahoot pasand ho ye sunkar rajvir thoda sharmaya aur jaldi me bola yaar maine kaha na ye sab bekaar hai main in sab chizon ko nahi maanta fhir shivani ko usne ghar drop kar diya aur ghar aakar so gaya aur fhir shaam ko monit ne usko kaha ki use ek girlfriend mil gayi ye sunkar rajvir ne congrats kiya aur kaha chal accha hua fhir monit bola yaar tujhe kisi ne nahi kaha aur rajvir ne kaha dekh yaar tujhe kitni baar samjhaya ki ladke ladki ko purpose karte hai aur na to mujh jaise pagal ko ladki milegi aur na hi main loonga fhri monit ne shivani ki baaat chedi ki sun na shivani ko to kitne offer aaye fhir rajvir ne use saari baat batayi to monit bola wow tu kitna lucky hai jo lakdi bhav nahi khaati kisi se wo tuhe pasand karti hai par rajvir ne hass ke bat taal di aur ghar chala gaya ab shivani usko call karti aur kisi na kisi bahane se baat kar liya karti par rajvir interest nahi leta aur ab use yakeen ho gaya tha ki ab shivani usko chahne lagi hai but rajvir nahi kyunki wo apni yaado se nahi mukar sakta tha ab aage ki story mein aapko bad mein likhoonga aur kisi ne mujhe replies nahi bheja to kam se kam main itna kahoonga ki aap log itne dukh bhare stories padte ho to kam se kam aisi khushi wali story bhi to pad liya karo aur replies diya karo ab main jabardasti nahi karoonga so agar aapko meri stories bekaar lag rahi hai to comments mein keh dijiye ki bekaar hai aapki stories thik hai so pls mujhe replies kisi bad ya good mein bheje main kahani likhna band kar doonga agar meri stories bekaar hai to faisla aapke haato mein 
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2010, 05:19:29 PM »
uske baad ab rajvir ko yakeen ho gaya tha ki ab shivani usko chahne lagi hai kyunki class mein usko dekhna fhir uski baato ko gaur se sunna ye sab rajvir ko shivani ke ek hi chiz par ishara kar raha tha wo tha pyar fhir rajvir ne monit ko apni saari baate batayi to rajvir ne kaha dekha main kehta tha na ki tujhe jaroor koi pasand kar lega ab jaa mere sher aur usko purpose kar le lekin rajvir ko accha lag kar bhi ek ajib sa dar mehsoos ho raha tha wo dhar tha uski wo yaadein jo use harpal pyar se dur rehne ko kehti thi iss wajah se rajvir ne soch liya ki ab main saari baatein shivani ko bataunga aur in sab ka pardafaash kar doonga fhir usne shivani ko call kiya aur use park mein bulaya shivani waha aayi aur rajvir use dekhkar uske paas gaya aur kaha shivani mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai to shivani ne kaha kya to rajvir bola kya tum mujhse tum pyar karti ho to shivani boli yes to ye sunkar rajvir thoda kasmasaya aur kaha ki kya lekin tumhe mujhme aisa kya laga usne kaha jisko pyar hota hai kisi se use wo chahe kaisa bhi kyun na dikhta ho pyar pyar hota hai tum mujhe sabse hat kar lage aur ab tum mere dil ke laayak ho to rajvir bola nahi to shivani boli kyun nahi mujhe me koi kamin hai nahi rajvir ne bola to fhir aisi kya baat hai jo tum mujhse pyar nahi kar sakte rajvir ne kaha ki ladkiyon ke piche kharch karna padta hai unhe jo pasand aaye wo unhe dena padta hai to shivani ne kaha agar ladki ko wo apne pyar se zyada wo chiz pasand ho to wo lobhi usse har samay mangana lobhipan hai wo pyar nahi pyar karne ka faayeda pyar do dilon ka milan hai lekin rajvir ne kaha ye sab fijool hai main sirf itna janta hoo ki pyar ek beti ko maa baap se juda karta hai use galat kaam karne pe majboot karta hai shivani ne kaha aisa kuch nahi hai aur waise bhi ye sab soch pe aur bharose pe hota hai aur rahi baat maa baap ki to unhe iss baat ka dar hota hai ki kahi unki beti ka issue na ban jaaye kahi kuch galat na ho jaye iske chalte wo apni beti ki shaadi kisi bhi admi se kara dete hai pyar karna chahiye lekin use deeewangi nahi banana chahiye kyunki waisa karna pyar ko apmaan karna hota hai ladkiyon se galat kaam karna pyaar ko apmaan karne jaisa hai tumhe jo bhi lage agar tumhe mera saath pasand nahi to keh do rajvir bola main sochunga aur rajvir apne ghar chala gaya aur shivani aankhon mein aansu leke apne ghar chali gayi dosto kahani bahoot badi hai isliye main isse likhte rahoonga na maine koi upnyaas se ye kahani li hai aur nahi ye koi sachi kahani hai ye sirf un log par based hai jo pyar karte hai par unka galat matlab nikalte hai so agar kahani ab tak acchi lage to comments jaroor bhejiyega aur main maafi mangunga ki maine is general stories ke kahaniyon ko dukhi bola maaf kijiyega .
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2010, 02:54:17 PM »
Agle din rajvir school gaya jahaan pe  monit uska besavri se intezaar kar raha tha ki tabhi achanak monit ne pucha to kaisa gaya kal ki raat tune purpose kar liya to rajvir ne gusse mein kaha dekh yaar naa to maine use purpose kiya aur nahi maine aisa kuch kiya jisse use ye lage ki main uss pyaar karne laga hoon to monit bola baat kya hui hai jisme tu itna gussa huya hai bola arre yaar chod na wo sab baato ko par monit e force kiya kiya lekin rajvir ne gusse me aaakar monit ko daat diya aur kaha sun yaar agar tujhe mujhse baat karni hai to tu kar lekin kal ke bare mein kuch mat bol aur iss tarah dono mein ladai ho gayi par 2-3 din baad rajvir ne monit ko phone karke usse maafi maangi aur kaha kit u mere ghar aaja dono pc mein gaane sun rahe the ki tabhi monit ne bola ki yaar aisa kya hua kit u itna naraz ho gaya aur main dekh raha hoo ki aajkal tu jo hi-hello bhi karta tha shivani ko wo ab nahi karta tu to ekdam baat karna hi chod diya usse tune to rajvir bola sun darasal usne meri jo pyar ke galat shabd bhare the usne use hata diya hai main bhi samajh gaya hoo ki meri soch galat thi basharte main darta hoo is responsibility ko uthane mein aur main nahi chahta ki uska dil toote bas yahi pray karta hoon ki wo apne life mein khush rahe to monit bola to fhir chod yaar chal tu ye to samjha ki pyaar koi bhoj ya fhir koi bekaar chiz nahi hai chal is galti ka ahesaas to hua aur waise bhi main jor nahi daalunga kit u pyaar kar shivani se pyar apne aap ho jaata hai lekin tune ek tarah se shivani ka dil bhi to dhukaya hai rajvir bola yaaar wo to meri kuch suni hi nahi bas mere pyar ki rat lagayi huyi hai to monit bola ajib ladki hai agar aisi har ladki har ladke ko karne lage to aashiqo ki taadat kam ho jaayegi aur ladkiyo ki zyada dono khub hasse fhir kuch dino mein 2nd term ka unka paper hua jisme dono pass ho gaye aur apni rozana ki zindagi mein lag gaye  aur udhar shivani apni class emin aam students ki tarah padti par usne aas nahi chodi thi ki rajvir usko purpose nahi karega but ek din rajvir school se late ho gaya tha tabhi wo jaldi se shortcut waale raaste se nikal pada jo bahoot sunsaan tha rajvir apne ghar jaa hi raha tha ki usne shivani ko dekha lekin rajvir ko laga shivani kuch zyada speed mein jaa rahi hai tabhi shivani ke piche rajvir ko kuch kharab ladke dikhayi de rahe the jo use baar baar chede jaa rahe the rajvir ko gussa aaya aur wo shivani ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya aur gundo se bhid gaya iss hatapayi mein rajvir ne un sabko khoob pita aur khood bhi zakhmi ho kar gir gaya itne mein use shivani ne uthaya aur kas kar daata jisme rajvir ne kaha maine sirf insaniyat ke naate tumhe bahchaya ye mat sochna ki maine tumhare saath ye sab pyaar ke naate kiya fhir dono ghar ki or chal pade ki tabhi zoro ki bearish start ho gayi jis wajah se dono bhig gaye tabhi rajvir ne ek khnadar doondhkar waha chale gaye waha jaate hi shivani ne rajvir ko zakhm pochne ke liye roomal diya to rajvir bola thanks aisi choto ki to aadat hai waise tum is road se kyun jaa rahi thi to shivani ne sharat se kaha ki tum aise sunsaan raaste mein kya kar rahe the to rajvir bola main aaj lait ho gaya tha aur ye sunsaan sadak to shortcut hai isliye fhir thode chuppi ke baat unhone baat ki to rajvir ne apne pichli galtiyon ke liye shivani se maanfi maanga to shivani boli ki koi baat nahi maine to tumhe us din hi maaf kar diya tha waise pyar forced nahi hai bas tumhe apni galtiyon ka ahesaas mera matlab pyar ke kilaaf jo kuch thaw o sab to tumhara khatam hua fhir bearish tham gayi aur shivani ko ghar chodkar rajvir apne ghar aa gay lekin jaate jaate shivani ne use piche mudhkar tata bhi kiya jisse ab rajvir ke dil mein uske liye thoda kichaav aa gaya tha ab aage ki kahani mein main aapko bataunga kya rajvir ne shivani ko purpose kiya kya usne bhi pyaar ki taqat kea age haar maan li to padhti rahiyega aur haan agar ab tak aapko meri kahani aachi lagi ho to comments jaroor bhejiyega aapka friend asif .
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2010, 08:29:07 AM »
Ab rajvir ko yakeen ho raha tha ki ab wo shivani ko pasand karne laga hai par keh nahi sakta kyunki usme itna saahas nahi hai par kehte hai na yaadein jaldi hat ti nahi rajvir ko fhir yaad aa gay ki wo kya kar raha hai use ye sab nahi karna wo jukh raha hai ye sab sochte huye rajvir ne apne dil ki baat ko thukra kar socha main ye kya karne jaa rahoon maine to monit ko kasam di thi ki main kabhi bhi pyar nahi karoonga ye sab sochte huye rajvir apni aamtor ki zindagi mein lag gaya par kab tak wo apne dil ki haalat ko aise chupata rehta ek na kek din to use ye wish poori hikarni thi kyunki pyar karte nahi apneaap ho jaata hai isi tarah kuch din beet gaye aur rajvir apni zyadti zindagi mein lag gaya ab wo shivani ko hi hello kehkar chala jata pehle ki tarah ab to aur bhi baat karta aur ye sab baat monit notice karta ki aakhir rajvir ab lagta hai shivani se interest lene laga hai par monit ko ek hi baat ki chinta thi ki agar usne rajvir ko bola aur in sab ke bare mein poocha to wo gussa ho jaayega yaw o samjhega ki main galat matlab nikal raha hoo isliye usne iss baat ko dosti ka naam dekar chod diya ab class mein sab aur sab rajvir aur shivani ki baat karne lage ki jahaan dekho dono saath ghumte hai lagta hai aakhir bharamchari rajvir ab pyaar ke aage haar gaya hai aura b shivani ke saath uska love relationship ban gaya hai but monit ye sab baato ko galat maan kar keh deta tha ki rajvir waisa hi hai wo darasal uski friend hai but kehte hai kitne log iss baat ko samjhte bus apni baato se baaz nahi aate bas fhir kya tha ab monit ko bhi lag raha tha ki lagta hai ki shivani se ab wo interest lene laga hai but fhir bhi jaanke rajvir se kuch bhi kehna sher ke muh me haath daalne jaisa tha fhir monit ko ek din rajvir ka phone aaya aur kaha chale hum ghumne to monit bola thik hai dono shaam ko cycle mein idhar udhar ka chakkar kaat te kaat te aakhir wo log ek jagah ruke aur aapas mein baat karne lage tabhi monit kya kehta ki rajvir ne kaha yaar main bahoot dino se dekh raha hoon ki aajkal mujhe shivani ke prati bahoot khichav ho raha hai fhir baato baato mein monit keh hi daala ki kya tujhe lagta hai kit u usse pyar karne laga hai to rajvir hairaani se hokar poocha tu aisa kyun bol raha hai aisa kuch bhi nahi hai to monit ne bola haa mere bhai aisa khuch bhi nahi hai bas main itna hi kehna chahta hoo kyunki ye sab tabhi hota hai jab koi kisi se pyaar karne mera matlab use pyaar hone lagta hai to rajvir ne kaha it means isse pehle ki rajvir kuch bolta monit ne apni chuppi todi aur keh diya yes man you are fall in love ye sunte hi rajvir shocked ho gaya aur kehne laga nahin nahin aisa kuch bhi nahi hai main kabhi kisi se pyaar nahi kar sakta par monit bola kab tak tu aise hi chup rehta ab to tera dil hi usse pyar karne laga hai main kehta than a ki pyaaar karna nahi hota pyar ho jaata hai fhir rajvir monit ko apne saath apne ghar le gaya aur kahaan ki yaar dekh maine tujhe kaha tha ki haa main samajh gaya ki saccha pyar hi pyar keh laata hai but main ye responsibility nahi utha sakta monit bola ye koi responsibility thodi na hai ye to pyaar hai aur pyaar ka matlab kisi ka saath accha lagna hota hai bhid mein wo alag sa lagta hai mere dost ye koi responsibility nahi hai itnna sochte hi ab rajvir ne kaha main sochta hoo mujhe kya karna chahiye fhir monit khushi khushi waha se chala gaya aur kuch dino tak rajvir sochta raha kabhi uska mann kehta ki usse pyaar nahi karna aur kabhi uska dil kehta kar le yaar fhir ek din rajvir faisla kar hi liya ki ab jo ho jaaye main shivani ko purpose kar doonga . to be continued… ab rajvir ne soch liya ki ab use kya karna chahiye kya wo ab shivani ko purpose kar dega aur yahi happy ending of this story agar haa to thik hai aur agar naa to phir kya climax aa jayega dono ke pyaar ke bich kya hoga dono kaa to? padte rahiye main aapko aage bataunga so keep reading! Your friend asif
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2010, 05:19:25 AM »
Dil mein armaan lekar sab kuch soch samajh kar ab rajvir ne aakhir faisla kar liya ki main use purpose kar doonga agle din wo school gaya jahaan wo apni premika I mean shivani ko dhund raha tha lekin usko wo kahi nazar nahi usne kaafi wait kiya to pata chala ki wo aaj absent ho gayi hai uski tabiyat kuch kharab hai .ye sunte hi shaqif ka mood off ho gaya aur chup chap apni sit par baith gaya bagal mein baitha monit bola ki koi baat nahi yaar tune koshish to kit u use uske ghar jaakar use bol diyo lekin rajvir ne kaha abhi nahi yaar waise bi main uske ghar jaunga kaise? To rajvir bola ki sun to sahi ab final exam mein bus kuch hi doori reh gayi hai tu usko jaake wish kar diyo us din to rajvir bola tu thik keh raha hai waise bhi abhi batana thik nahi aur agar in dino keh diya to uska padai mein mann nahi lagega to monit bola thik hai aise din kat te gaye aur final exam aa gaya lekin rajvir to padai se zyada shvani ko purpose karne ke liye betaab tha kyunkiye uska pehla purposal tha aur ab shiavni ko kitna pasand karegi ye soch soch kar to wo ekdum pagalo jaisa behave kar raha tha shivani class mein to aati par ab hi hello tak simit thi bas fhir kyat ha final exam bhi khatam ho gaya aur aakhir kar wo din aa hi gaya jiske liye wo itna excited tha class mein monit aur rajvir paas ho gaye . result ke baad rajvir besabri se shivani ke intezaar mein tha lekin usne sirf uske papa ko file le jaate huye dekha to fhir bhi rajvir ne dost ke naate uske papa se puch liya ki shiavni kyun nahi aaye to uske papa ne kaha ab wo shimla jaa rahi hai ye sunte hi rajvir ko toda hurt laga ki jo ladki usme itna marti thi aaj use kya ho gaya na usne use is bare mein kuch bataya na hi koi bhi aisi baat batayi monit aur rajvir apne ghar aa gaye shaam ko monit bola chal aaja celebration karte exam mein paas hone ki par rajvir ne kaha kya khaak celebration jab wo yaha hai hi nahi monit bola sahi mein na to usne mujhe call kar kiya na hi tujhe ekdam se chali gayi rajvir bola meri hi galti hai ki maine us pehle purpose nahi kiya jab mauka tab to maine thukra diya ab rajvir ko shivani pe gussa aaya aur khud par bhi monit ne samjhate huye kaha ki koi baat nahi is mein teri kya galti tujhe samajh mein der lag gayi par shiavni ne aisa kyun kiya ek phone call to kar sakti thi rajvir ne bola yaar main haar nahi maanuga chal yaar kuch karte hai monit bola kya karenge rajvir bola tujhe shivani ki friend teri girlfriend hai naa usko call kar shayad wo kuch jaanti ho monit ne call kiya to uski girlfriend ne bola k wo aaj raat 9pm baje mein train beth ne wali rajvir ne bola jaldi kar abhi 1 ghanta hai chal jaldi se milte hai monit ne apne bhai ki bike nikali aur dono chale gaye raaste mein ab unke liye ek minute ek ghante ke barabar lag raha tha rajvir monit ko tez chala chala kehte jaa raha tha lekin bich sadak mein unki bike ki petrol khatam ho gayi tabhi rajvir ne kaha yaar sabkuch ek saath hoga kya monit bola chal jaldi kar waha tak le chal petrol pump wahi per hai don one afra tafri mein petrol bharwaya aur chal pade sation ki taraf lekin jab wo waha pahooche uske papa usko bye bye kar rahe the bichara rajvir daudte daudte traintak pahoochne ki koshish ki lekin bichara use ek bye tak nahi keh paaya bichara bahoot duki hua monit ne samjhane ki koshish ki lekin rajvir bola koi baat nahi der se hi sahi usne mujhe kuch sikhaya to aur main uski wo saare pal kabhi nahi bhul paunga monit bola chal wapis ghar chalte hai raat bahoort ho chuki hai jisko jaana tha wo chala gaya bechare dono bike se wapis ghar aa gaye aise karte dono ne apna school graduate kiya but ab rajvir ko pyar se nafrat to nahi thi par usne haar maan li ab wo kabhi ksi se dil nahi lagayega lekin ek din rajvir ke papa ne uska admission shimla ke university mein karwaya kyunki rajvir jahaan rehta tha wahaan ke colleges maanyata paraapat nahi the jis darr se rajvir ke papa ne uska admission shimla mein kara diya ye suunte hi rajvir ne kkoi response nahi diya aur kaha ko baat nahi usne ye baat monit ko batayi aur use shimla jaane ki conveys ki aur dono ka admission ho gaya . st
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2010, 06:52:21 AM »
Fhir jab rajvir aur monit ka admission shimla mein ho gaya to unhe ek hafte baad hi apne naye jagah jaaana tha padai karne ke liye dono baton me lage huye the shimla jaane ke liye khair aakhir ek hafte baad unko jaana tha dono ne train ke liye bahoot saari cheezen le rakhi thi aur dono waha se shimla ke liye nikal gaye train gati badte rehti aur unke maa baap unhe bye bye karte karte kab piche choot gaye pata hi nahi chala ab train apni gati se aaage bad rahi thi aur rajvir aur monit apni kitabon ko check karne mein busy the train mein dopahar ho gayi thi aur dono aaram bhi kar chuke the lekin train aaraam aur nind to aati hi nahi fhir rajvir jab monit se baat kar raha tha ki tabhi monit ka call baja usne uthaya aur jaldi jaldi baat karke phone kaat diya kyunki aage sampark hona mushkil tha rajvir ne pucha kiska phone tha monit ne bola meri girlfriend ka ki kab pahoochoge khana kha liya rajir ne muskrakar kaha sahi hai tujhe aur bhi to koi khyal sorry tu mere vajah se waha chal raha hai monit bola nahi nahi yaar jaise hi maine papa ko bataya to papa ne kaha acha hua tumne bata diya waise hi main tumhare college ke liye kitna chakkar laga raha tha aur unhone mere conveys karne se pehle hi mera shimla ka ticket katwa diya rajvir hassa aur usne kaha sahi hai yaar  chal iss baar tujhe conveys to nahi karna pada haste hase monit ne rajvir se kaha ki yaar tujhe pata hai shivani bhi to shimla hi jaa rahi thi naa rajvir ne bola ab chod naa jisko jaana tha wo kab kaa chala bhi gaya par monit ne kaha ek baar hum shvani ko dhund bhi to sakte hai par rajvir ne kaha faaltoo mein agar khuda ko manjoor hoga to humari mulaqat dobara hogi aur agar nahi to jaahan tak humara sampark tha wahi tak thik tha aur wahi khuda ko manjoor tha to monit bola sorry tujhe fhir cheda rajvir bola yaar jo dil mein hai keh diya kar kyunki use bahoot der ke baad kahega to utni hi buri mehsoos hogi chal chod iss topic ko aur zara iss janne wali khushal vaadiyo ka maza lene de lekin rajvir ke bhi dil mein bhi yahi tha ki kab wo shivani se mile but wo use dhundha nahi chahta tha kyunki jaanta tha ki shivani ne use kaha ki main tumhare siva kisi se pyar nahi karti yahi baat aaj bhi rajvir ke dimag mein ghum rahi thi fhir 2 din baaad shimla pahooche jaha pe haalhi mein bearish hua tha rajvir ne apne family ko phone kar kaha ki kaha jaana hai to unhone unhe apni jigri dost ke ghar jaane ko kaha aur naam bhi bataya rajvir aur monit unke jigri dost ke ghar pahoonche jaha pe unka ek uncle wait kar rahe the uncle ne unko dekhte hi apne paas wali building ki taraf le gaye au rune 5th floor pe jaakar ek room khola lo beta ye hai tumhara room dono ka aur main ab jaa rahoon lekin rajvir ne rokte uye kaha uncle aapka naam kya hai to uss uncle ne apna naam shaam bataya aur aur mujhe shaam uncle kehna darasl unki dosti rajvir ke baap se thi dono ne ek saath padai puri aur ek doosre ke behad karibi dost the ab rajvir aur monit nayi college gaye lekin yah ape koi ragging nahi tha but gande ladke to bahoot  bhare huye the lekin rajvir ne unki taraf dekha bhi nahi but jab nayi class aaya to rajvir ko jo sit milli ussi labte sit par do student ko chodke shivani bathti thi par naya session shuru hone se naye students mein rajvir bhi tha rajvir aur monit ki dosti sab se ho gayi thi par kuch lafango ko chodkar tabhi class mein shivani enter ki aur apni desk par baith gayi rajvir ne use dekhkar hairaan tha par use kuch keh nahi paaya kyunki wo apne mein busy khair class shuru ho gayi aur khatam hone ke baad jaise hi use dekhne ke liye main kahoon baat karne ke liye utha to wo class se nikal gayi aur jab rajvir usse milne ke liye class se bahar bhaga to tab tak shivani kisi ki bike mein baithi jaa chuki thi bechara rajvir ko laga mujhe shivani ne dekha tak nahi aur chali gayi mujhe usne neglect kiya par mont ne kaha aisa kuch nahi hai agar shivani iss class mein hai to iska matlab ab tu use purpose kar sakta hai to bus wait kar usse baat karne ka par rajvir ko ab shivani alag tarike ki lag rahi thi to be continued…
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2010, 12:02:46 PM »
Ab jab rajvir ko aisa lag raha tha ki ab shivani uspe dhyan nahi de rahi thi to use uske bich me panda hi nahi chahiye aur ye sochkar wo ab apne beete din yaad kar leta aur udaas hi rehta but monit usko dilasa dekar kaha ki yaar sun to sahi tujhe lagta hai ki ab wo tujhe koi response nahi de rahi kya pata wo shivani hi na ho rajvir ne bola agar wo shivani nahi hoti to uska pura nature shivani ki tarah kyun milta hai kya koi judwa behan hai uski aise betuke sawaal puchkar dimag aur kharab mat kar pls jis shivani ko main jaanta tha wo shivani chanchal humesha se possessive aur yaha tak ek bahoot acchi ladki thi monit bola sun waqt ko badalne mein der nahi lagti kya pta uski personality ab pehli ki tarah na ho jaise aaj teri hai pehle tu khud pyar ke naam se chidta tha par aaj dekh aapne aapko.rajvir ne kaha to personality change hone se insaan bhi bhul jaate ek dusre ko monit haan kyun nahi jkyunki insaan ka dimag ek jagah sthir nah iota bahoot kam log aise hote hai jo ek dusre ko samajh ki ye uska past se aaya insan hai ab meri baat kan khol ke sun kal jaa kar usse baat kar aur usse sorry bhi maang liyo apni pichli galti ke liye fhir rajvir mein ek umang si aayi aur wo agle din college ke liye tayyar ho gaya aur pehle se uska wait karne laga class mein usse baat karne ko lekin wo apne mein mast thi rajvir ko aise react kar rahi thi ki kaun sa bikhari dekh liya ho but college ke baad shivani shivani karte karte uske piche gaya lekin kab wo chali gayi pata hi nahi chala ab rajvir ko ek udassi aa gayi thi usne jis chiz ko forgive kiya aaj wo usse khud hi forgive ho gaya ab rajvir ne is baar bhi mauka gawa diya lekin 2-4 din tak aisa hi kiya par jaise shivani uski taraf dekhti bhi nahi aisa shivani kyun kar rahi thi pata nahi but rajvir ko lag raha kuch to baat hai par ek din shivani ka rajvir picha kar hi raha tha ki bich mein ek ladka khada ho gaya dkhne mein koi gunde se kam nahi tha bas fhir kyat ha wo ladka rajvir bola kyun re meri girlfriend ka picha kar raha hai koi problem hai kya tujhe nayi nayi class mein aaya to apna naya dukan khol liya tune rajvir ne kaha dekh bhai main usko bahoot pehle se jaanta hoo aur hum dono school se ek saath the aur wo mujhe bina bataye yaha aa gayi us ladke ne rjvir ka collar pakad kar kaha tere jaise bahoot tuchke dekh rakhe hai jo sirf ek nazar dekhne ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakte hai aur usne rajvir ko do thappad jhad diye aur kaha meri girlfriend shivani ko agar tune fhir dekhne ki koshish ki to soch liyo tu kahni ka nahi rahega bichara rajvir ko ek sadma ghus gaya ki shivani ko koi aur pyar karne wala aur mujhse bhi zyada caring karne wala mil gaya aur waha se rajvir chala gaya monit ko saari bataya to usne kaha us ladke ki itni himmat ki wo asa kar sakta hai aur shivani jis ladki ko main itna accha chanchal aur aaj usne tumhe neglect kiya tu usse mat baat kar aur bhool ja ki aisi koi ladki thi aur thi to wo tere past mein thi rajvir ne monit ka kaha maana aur aur use bhula lane ki koshish karne laga aur udhar shivani roz apne boyfriend ke saath aati jaati aur ek din rajvir ne dono ko college ke picche kiss karte huye dekh liya aura b to usne soch liya aisi gadhiya ladki ko to main kuch bolunga hi nahi aur kasam kha li ki usme zindagi se nikalne ka aur is tarah dono ki life ek dusre se hat gayi ab kuch mahino baad rajvir ab puri tarike se shivani ko bhulakar ek nayi zindagi shuru kar chukka tha par ek din uski mulaqat class ki sabse badi playgirl baby se hua aur monit ko iske bare mein rajvir ne monit ko bola ki ab ye baby use chahne lagi hai jo sabki life ke saath khelti aur usne ab apna dil rajvir ko de diya hai ab monit ne kaha kya ye bhi tera anchaha pyar hai to rajvir ne kaha is baar nahi .kahani mein bahoot twist aa gaye hainna ki ekdum se rajvir ne confirm karne ke baad shivani se break up kar liya tha aur ab uska interest apni nayi girlfriend pe tha kya yahi tha kahani ka mod nahi bas padte jaayo khud samajh jaoge.
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2010, 07:17:39 AM »
Ab rajvir ki dosti jis playgirl ladki baby se hui thi wo kuch zyada hi kharab thi ab rajvir zyada time us ladki ke saath spent karta aur rajvir bhi kharab hone laga tha monit usko kehta tha ki us ladki ke personality ko mat apna banne de warna tub hi waisa hi ho jaayega lekin rajvir monit ki baat ko ignore kar ke uske sath der raat tak bahar rehta aur ab to usne bhagwan ko manna bhi chod diya aur ekdum apne aapko ek kharab ladke mein badal liya than a hi kisi se dhang se baat karta aur naahi roz college attend karta pehle to bahoot baar monit ne rajvir ko samjhane ki koshish ki par uske kaan mein ju bhi nahi rengti aise din bitta gaya ek din rajvir ne monit ko kaha aaj main night club jaa raha hoon tu so jaiyo aur dawaja locked mat kijiyo monit bola agar shaam uncle ne dekh liya to kya samjhenge rajvir ne akadkar kaha jo samjhana hai samjhe meri life hai main kuch bhi karoon aur apni girlfriend ko phone karke wo uske saath chala gaya udhar shivani ko uske boyfriend ne ek restaurant mein le gaya aur idhar nightclub mein rajvir aur baby to bas jashann mein magan the unhe din duniya ka to koi pata hi nahi lekin rajvir tna bhi kharab nahi tha ki wo kisi ke saath satth aisi waisi harkat karta rajvir ne beer sirf pee jabki baby ne bahoot drinks kar liye aur rajvir ko phir  apni dosto se introduce karaya uski saari dost lakdi thi aur sab ki sab amir baap ki bigdhi hui beti rajvir ne sab ko h kiya aur kaha main abhi toilet se aata hoon baby apni friends se bol rahi thi kyun kaisa laga ye ladka uski dost bola accha hai par sidha hai kisi ko nazar uthake nahi dekhta jab ki tune nazar wale ko hi nazar laga diye aur khoob hasse fhir rajvir ke bare mein ladkiyon ne kaha yaar mast hai ek baar mujhe milega ye aise sab ladki ek dusre mein ladke ko lekar ek dusre mein jhapatne lagi aate waqt rajvir ne saari baatein sunli thi aur sharmakar unke paas gaya baby ne kaha yaar rajvir tu inko bada mast laga kya dega inko apna pyar rajvir ne kasam khai hui thi ki wo aisa kuch nahi karega aur sne piche hatne ke liye keh diya nahi abhi offer available nahi aur majak banakar hasne laga fhir baby ne use aur pine ke liye approach kiya aur thoda na nukur ke baad dono mein behes ho gayi aur rajvir udaas hokar nightclub se bahar aa gaya udhar shivani ko uska boyfriend keh raha tha c,mon baby let’s do it kuch nahi hota koi nahi aayega par shivani ne dekha dekho main ye sab bure kaam nahi kar sakti aur zyada zor dene ke baad bhi shivani nahi maani to uska boyfriend gussa hokar waha se chala gaya aur wo rokte reh gayi use dar lag raha tha ki ab wo apne ghar itni raat gaye kaise pahoochegi aur udhar nightclub se bahaar rajvir apne mein gumsum khada tha ki piche se baby ne use hug kiya aur kaha kyun itne jaldi gussa kyun ho gaye sorry wo meri friends na kuch aisi hi hain aur bola c,mon ek drink lo aur chalte hai yaha se rajvir bola baby c,mon tumne already drink bahoot drink le li hai ab chalo yaha se par baby use apni kasam di aur kaha sirf pepsi pi lena thodi na nukar ke baad aakhir baby ka request kaam kar gaya aur andar jaakar ek pepsi aur ek fanta le liya rajvir ne kaha main pasie dekar aata hoo aur jaise I wo gaya baby ne ek tablet rajvir ki drink mein mila diya aur dono ne drink pikar apne apne ghar chale ki tabhi rajvir ko shivani dikhi par ab usmepehle jaisi koi aatraction nahi dikhayi de rahi thi aur baby ko kaha kya main abhi aaon par baby ne kaha kyun wo kya tumhari girlfriend hai ya line marni hai rajvir ne kaha o,cmon wo musibat mein hai uski madad karni chahiye aur usne shvani ko awaj lagayi aur use kaha kyun kya hua tunhare boyfriend ne tumhara saath chod diya aur kaha main tumhe chod deta hoo par shivani no thanks waise bhi mere life mein mere saat koi nahi hai par rajvir ne usse request karke apne saath le liya baby bahoot irritate ho rahi thi aur usne shivani se bahoot baat ki aur baby ko introduce karaya usse uske baad usko ghar chod diya aur waha se chala gaya shivani ab khud ko kos rahi thi ki maine kya kar dala maine use galat smajha par usse ab rajvir neglect karne laga tha
Usse aisa laga aur udhar baby ke ghar pahoochkar tablet ka sar hone laga rajvir par au wo apna hosh kho baitha aur fhir baby ne use bed pe patak diya udhar itni raat ho gayi soch soch kar monit pagal ho raha tha aur wo bahoot chintit tha ki abhi kaha hoga rajvir aisi puri raat kat gayi subah rajvir utha baby ke ghar aur khud ko nude situation mein dekh darr gaya ki tabhi baby uske paas aayi aur kaha lo chai thakan door ho jaayegi rajvir bola are baby ye tumne kya kar daala ab to ye gadbad ho gaya oh,no par aby ne kaha umne kuch galat nahi kiya kal raat to humne nashe ka bharpoor celebrate kiya aur ab tum bhi to accha feel kar rahe ho aur by the way tum mere boyfriend ho aur boyfriend ko maine jo chiz dena chahiye thaw o ab de diya rajvir gusse mein bola ye pyaar tha ya vaasna baby ne kaha ye pyaar tha meir jaan aur na to tumne mujhe iskeliye ukasaya aur nahi kuch aisa so ye to mera farz banta hai na ki tumhe khush rakhoon aur rajvir ne use sorry bolkar apne flat ki or chal pada monit ne gusse kaha kya be ladki ke chakkar mein khaha chala gaya tha to rajvir ne kaha sorry yaar kya karoon wo main zyayda nashe ke kaaran aa nahi paya aur mont ne kaha chal tu aa gaya yahi kaafi hai main to dr ke pagal ho gaya tha aur fhir rajvir ne shivani ki baat monit ko batayi aur college chala gaya monit ne pichli raat ki baat chodkar shivani ke bare mein sochne laga aur udhar shivani ab rajvir se milne ke liye pagal thi .to be continued… to dosto kahani mein bahoot kuch bura ho gaya shivani ko uske boyfriend ne chod diya aur ab shivani ko ek baar phir rajvir se mulaqat ho gayi but bich mein baby aa gayi  dekhte hai aage kya hoga?
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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2010, 03:19:18 AM »
Agle din rajvir bahoot fresh hokar college aaya par use dar lag raha tha ki jaisi baby hai uska playgirl bartaav kahi wo ladki kisi ko bata na de bichara rajvr thoda darr ke apni class mein gaya waha wo playgirl baby uska wait kar rahi thi aur uske desk baith kar usse baat karne lagi rajvir bola ki kal humne galat kar lia jo kiya aur waise bhi ye sab ke shaadi hona bahoot important hai par playgirl baby wo kaise maan jaati usne keh diya suno to rajvir agar pehle kar lia to kya bura waise bhi shaadi old fashion log karte hai aur tumhe pyar pasand hai ya main tumhe jo chahiye tha main tumhare bina kahe bhi de diya rajvir ko kuch kuch baat uski sahi lagne lagi aur usne bhi jhad ke keh diya haan waise bhi pyar mein maine bahoot kuch saha hai aur na jaane maine aisa kyun kiya fhir baby ne kaha ki wo ladki apni class mein padti hai na tum use kab se jaante ho rajvir bola school se forget her use to sirf ghar tak drop kiya tha baby boli usse line maar rahe the kya rajvir bola oh’cmon tumhare siva kisi aur ke bare mein soch sakta hoo dimag kharab hai mera to baby ne mazak se kaha to socho na kisi aur ka maza lene ke liye udhar baby aaayi aur lagi dhoondne rajvir ko rajvir monit ke saath pad raha tha garden mein waha shivani gayi to rajvir ko boli hi rajvir monit to sab sun raha tha rajvir ne kaha hello aur fhir monit ko kaha accha mujhe jaana hai ab baby ke saath shivani ne kaan baj pade aur rajvir ne bina kuch kahe waha se chala gaya shivani dekhti reh gayi usne kaise use neglect kara fhir shivani ne monit se pucha aakhir iske saath aisa kya hua hai ki yeh itna busy hai monit ne kaha wo darasal aur saari baatein shivani ko batayi shivani udaas ho kar bolne lagi galti meri hai ki maine soch liya ki ab hum kabhi nahi mil payenge par mujhe rajvir se baat karni hai aur waha se chali gayi monit bichara dekhta hi reh gaya ki ye sab kya ho raha hai aur udhar baby ke saath rajvir maza kar raha tha aur ab to shivani ko hello tak simit rehta aur nahi usse kuch kehta aur baby ke saath ghumne nikal jaata par ek di jab shaam ko rajvir ghar jaldi aa gaya to monit ne kaha abe yaar tujhe hua kya hai jis ladki ko tu chahne laga tha aaj us ladki ko dekh bhi nahi raha rajvir bola kis ki/ monit bola shivani ki aura b tu play girl ke saath hai kya pagalpan hai teri rajvir o ab usko meri yaad aane lagi hai ab uske liye itna bhagta tha tab kaha thi choro ki tarah chupti bhagti thi aur uske boyfriend ne mujhe iss wajah se kitna mara bhi kaise bhul jaao maine usi din kaha tha ki ab kabhi uski shakal nahi dekhoonga aur tu bhi ab bas kar warna mera dimag aur sathiya jaayega jaane de jab use milna hoga kabhi main mil loonga warna use jaane de monit bola pyar karna sikh liya lekin pyar kisse karna chahiye ye tujhe nahi pata bas chala aya rajvir bola meri baat sun tu mujhe pyar mat padha main jaisa hu thik hoo ab aur mat kharab kar mood ko waise bhi main tere in bekaar lectures se bore ho gaya hoo aur gusse se bahar chala gaya rajvir ke mobile par ek call ayi aur usne jab hello kaha to udhar awaj baby ki aayi aur kaha chalo aaj bhi chalte hai to rajvir bola thik hai uske baad uske mobile mein ek ladki ka msg aaya jise padkar rajvir samajh gaya ki wo shivani hai aur use usne ek café mein bulaya aur rajvir gaya usse milne bhi  gaya jab usne msg mein kuch zyda request kar di thi aur baby ko kaha main raat ko aata hoon aur rajvir café pahoocha waha shivani usse mili rajvir ne kaha kya hua aaj kaise yaad aa gayi to shivani rone lagi to sab use dekhne laga rajvir ne use ek kapda diya aur kaha baad mein ro lena pehle batao yak is liye bulaya usne kaha main apne friend se breakup le loongi rajvir bola kyun tumhare liye to bahoot jaan deta hai tumhare chakkar mein to usne mujhe bhi khoob maara aur kya chahiye ab batao shivani boli ki tumhe maarne se mujhe accha nahi laga tumne mujhe contact karne ki koshish ki lekn maine koi response nahi diya aur tumhe neglect kiya rajvir ne bola koi baat nahi tumhe main pyaar karta thaw o ab past ban chuki hai aage ke bare mein socho us din tumhare boyfriend ne tumhe chd diya raat ko waha pe darasal shivani ne kaha rajvir ne pucha kya darasal diya kyun nahi face pe do agar main us din tumhe nahi bachaya hota to aaj tum pahoochati bhi ghar chalo koi baat nahi jo hua so hua tumne mujhe contact kyun nahi kiya tha jab aayi thi yaha boli ki maine soch liya tha ki ab to hum milenge nahi par kehte hai pyar kab kaha khadha kar de ye sunkar rajvir bola chodo wo sab baat ab humahara koi pyaar nahi hai ab main thik hoo tabhi rajvir ke mobile mein 3 msg aaye to usne dekh kar kaat diye use missed call aya to shivani ne kaha ki koi tumse urgent baat karna chahta hai rajvir bola koi baat nahi jo tumhe kehna hai jaldi kaho to shivani ne kaha kyat um mere saath fhir patch up karoge to ajvir bola sorry shivani ab meri koi aur girlfriend hai aur rahi baat tumhaari tumne mujhe maukhe diye aur main bhi tumhe kitna mauka diya lekin kabhi koi na koi problem mein ye pyar fass jaata chodo na pyar vyar ko aur just keep stay in your life without true love. Aur ab main chalta hoo bye bye fhir rajvir waha se jaate jaate keh gaya ki meri girlfriend baby hai bye aur kehkar rajvir chala gaya aur udhar shivani uska muh dekhti reh gayi ye kitna badal gaya hai aur baat bhi sahi thi ki ab rajvir bahoot kuch jaan chukka tha fhir wahi raat ki masti shuru ho gayi aura b to rajvir baby ke ghar 2-4 din tak ruk jaata aise bahoot din tak chalta raha aur ab wo shivani ko kam response karta aur baby ke saath zyada ghumta ek baar shivani ne notice kiya ki ab baby aur rajvir dono kaafi ghul gaye to usne socha kyun na inki life se main chali jaao aur monit ko saari baat batayi to monit bola rajvir pagal ho gaya hai wo koi ladki hai bas naam ki hai baby aur personality ki playgirl hai wo kabhi rajvir ko uss nazar se nahi dekhengi lekin shivani ne dilasa dete huye kaha aisa kuch nahi hai aur ab usne contact karne ki koshish ki to bich mein uska boyfriend aa gaya jo kehn laga c,mon sweety mujhe maaf kar do lekin shivani ne kaha ab mere life mein koi aur nahi hai aur jhatak ke age bhadi to uske boyfriend ne usse pakda aur zabardasti use apne saath gaadi mein le gaya usne kaha main help help chilaungi lekin monit ne ye sab dekh liya aur rajvir ko phone karke sab baat bata di to be continued…kya ab shivani ko uska boyfriend nahi chodega ya fhir rajvir usko aur nahi dhyan dega jaane ke liye padte rahiye.
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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2010, 04:06:38 AM »
sorry friends mujhse patience nahi ho raha tha isliye aage kya hua main aapko batata hoon to jab monit ne 2-3baar rajvir ko call kiya to usne uthaya nahi aur khud uske gadhi ka picha karne laga udhar jab rajvir free hua to rajvir ne call dekha aur kaha are monit ko kya hua aaj itna missed call mara fhir usne jab monit ko call kiya to usne gusse se kaha kit u bas chipka reh to rajvir bola hua kya tu itna gusse mein kyun hain to monit bola dekh na shivani ko aur saari baatein batakar rajvir bola main abhi aata hoon aur udhar baby ne bola kya hua rajvir itne bhaukhlaye huye kyun ho to usne kaha ki mera dost  musibat mein hai main aata hoon tum ghar jao main wahi milunga tumse au rkehkar baby ki baat kko ansuna kar wo bhaga udhar shivani ke boyfriend ne use ek sunsaan jagah pe le gaya aur gaadi se shivani ko nikal kar use ek khandar mein le gaya jo pahadi ke upar tha waha picha karte karte monit bhi aa gaya aur piche se usko pakda lekin uske boyfriend ne piche do ladke lagaye hye the unse monit ko pakadkar khoob maara aur kaha jab tak main na aaun tab tak ise chodna mat udhar rajvir aa gaya aur usne khoob mara dono ladke ko aur fhir andar bhaga waha pe shivani ke saath uska boyfriend jabardasti kar raha tha lekin gate band hone se rajvir ne kholne ki koshish ki par khula nahi udhar shivani ne pne aapko chudane ke liye use kick maari aur bhahar ki or bhaagi bahar bhagte huye shivani ko uske boyfriend ne phir pakad liya aur gusse mein aakar uske kapde phad diye rajvir ne dekh liya aur gaya usko maarne usne itna pita itna pita ki uska muh tod kar use khandar ke gaddhe mein phank diya jaha wo behosh ho gaya aur shivani ko bola are you okay? To shivani kaha ya  accha hua tumne sahi waqt pe bacha liya warna aaj ye to mujhe kahi ka nahi chodta aur use thankyou bol ke hug kiya aur monit andar aa gaya fhir rajvir ne shivani ko uske ghar drop kar diya aur kaha agar chaho to main tumhare maa baap ko bold u to shivani boli nahi pls mat bolna meri galti thi ki main aise ladke ko pyar karne lagi jo itna had tak gir jaayega aur phir use drop kar rajvir bola ab tu iska dhyan rakhiyo mujhe baby se milne jaana hai to monit bola tu usse pyar nahi karta to rajvir bola dekh wo meri purani friend thi aur rahi baat to main ye sab kisi ki insaniyat ke taur par kiya agar koi aur bhi hota to wo bhi yahi karta samjha mujhe koi pyaar nahi usse aur ab aur mat bulaiyo accha hua ki us din ke thappad ka jawab de diya aur fhir rajvir baby ke paas gaya baby ne kaha itni lait kaise lag gayi to rajvir ne use apne aap biti ke bare mein bataya par usne gaur nahi kiya aur kaha chal accha hua kit um wo pehle ki tarah true lover to nahi bane koi baat nahi par ab aur xcuse nahi milenge aur kehkar rajvir ke gale lag gayi lekin rajvir ko darr tha ki kahi wo ladka fhir se kuch na kare. To be continued….
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2010, 07:03:04 AM »
Ye sochkar rajvir ko lagne laga tha ki ab shivani unsafe hai lekin dil mein ek baat aur thi ki main in sab baato par dhyan kyun de raha hoo wo to meri koi lagti nahi aura b meri already girlfriend bhi hai to ye sab main kyun soch raha hoo aur ye sab sochte huye rajvir ne soch liya ki ab wo ladka kuch nahi kar paayega waise bhi to jaan mein kutt usi shivani ne hi lagaya hai itna kuch dekhne ke baad to ab mujhe ye jimmedari bhoj lagne lagi hai aur fhir rajvir ne baby ko kaha ab main chalta hoo baby boli kya hua aaj kuch accha nahi lag raha rajvir bola aisi koi baat nahi wo darasal main aaaj bahoot thak gaya hoo islye chalta hoo aur waise bhi mujhe notes bhi likhne hai tumhare paas copy hai to baby boli haa aur baby ne use apne class ki copy dedi rajvir bola thankgod tumne kaam to kiya warna mujhe laga tha aur baby boli kya laga tha rajvir bola kuch nahi aur waha se chala gaya apne ghar aate hi monit bola o mere hero aa gaya tu kya hua aaj jaldi kaise aa gaya  rajivir bola are aaj us ladke ne saara mood kharab kar diya monit bola tune jo kiya thik kiya chal ab bata notes le aaya rajvir ne bola haa aur don one notes kar liya monit ne bola shivani ke paas gaya tha bechari bahoot darr gayi hogi rajvir bola kuch nahi hoga ab wo ladka kuch nahi karega aur usko bol diyo ki ab koi pyar vyar ke chakkar mein na pade warna main hamesha nahi bachaane jaa sakta aur bola maine sone jaa raha hoo aur rajvir sone chala gaya agle din baby aur rajvir baat kar rahe the  ki tabhi bich mein shivani aa gayi aur unke saath canteen ke sit pe baith gayi aur kehne lagi so kya chal raha hai dono ne bola thik chal raha hai baby ne chedte huye bola ki kya hua sam ne tumhe cheda tha rajvir ne bataya  mujhe accha hua bach gayi waise bhi wo ek bahoot hi conserve aur kharab ladka hai waise mere raj ne tumhe hero banke baccha liya what will be the scene that? Lekin shivani ko uncomfortable huyi aur wo waha se chali gayi rajvir ko thoda bura laga aur baby kya yaar sabke samne muh khol deti ho baby what i have done? Aur rajvir ne kaha chalo picture dikhane le chalta hoo aur dono chale gaye udhar shivani ko reh rehke jaha sam yaani uske pichle boyfriend ka darr wahi rajvir ki uski zindagi mein wapas aane ki khushi aur ek himmat ban chuki thi use pata tha ki ab rajvir ka uspe koi interest nahi raha wo usse jitna piche bhagti wo sahi mein piche chala gaya tha aura b us tak pahoochna namoomkin tha tabhi usse raha na gaya aur monit ko call kiya monit ne kaha wo abhi ghar nahi aaya fhir bhi milne ke bahane monit ke ghar shivani chali gayi waha jaate hi usne apartment gayi jaha use shaam uncle dikhe monit waha khada tha usne  shaaam uncle ko shivani ka introduction dekar andar le aya andar jaate hi bola kuch logi bola haa ek glass paani monit kitchen mein uske liye chai banana gaya tabhi uski nazar baby ke notes mein padi fhir uski nazar apni purani photo par padi jisme rajvir uske saath khada tha sochne lagi jo ladka pyar se itni nafrat karta tha aaj wo ladka to bahoot aage nikal gaya aur sochte hye monit andar aaya aur kaha kya hua pichli yaadein yaad kar rahi ho haa kitne acche din the wo pal jab rajvir pyar se ktna chidta tha baato baato mein monit ne kaha ha bich mein to wo tumhare khayalo mein pagal ho gaya tha yahi shivani ne kaha usse main isi wajah se nahi apne paas milnawana chahti thi monit bola haa tumhe purpose karne wala tha lekin tumhe aur sam ko saath dekhkar use gussa aaya aur usne pyar karna hi chod diya shivani boli chalo mujhe rajvir se hi kuch baat karni thi isliye main chahti hoo ki main usse hi keh doo aur monit ne baby ke ghar ka pata de diya shivani baby ke ghar gayi jahan pe shivani ne dono ko saath dekh liya rajvir bola tum yaha kya kar rahi ho shivani boli sorry maine tumhe interfere kiya tum dono ko bye mujhe ab chalna chahiye par naa hi usne rajvir ki suni aur waha se rote huye chali gayi.to dosto ab kya hoga jab shivani ne dekh liya rajvir ko uske saath yahi ban gaya rajvir ke liye shivani ka anchaha pyar to padte rahiye kyuki abhi kahani kaise kasie mod legi dekhiyega bye bye and padhiyega jaroor.
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«Reply #12 on: August 10, 2010, 05:28:20 AM »
aage kya huwa....
likhiyay na ...

I M WAITING 4 readd
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«Reply #13 on: August 10, 2010, 08:07:00 AM »
To friends kahani bahoot aage jaa chuki hai kabhi rajvir pyar mein fisla to kabhi shivani lekin doo kabhi ek dusre ko purpose nahi kar paaye ek saath fhir uske baad jab shivani ne ye sab dekh liya to ghar aakar wo bahoot royi uska dil ab bhi ye maan lene ko tayyar nahi tha ki rajvir ne usko dhoka diya sab kuch jaante huye bhi rajvir ko us halat mein dekhkar shivani ko rajvir ke zindagi se jaana hi uchit laga rajvir ne phone kiya shivani ko aur kaha shivani baat suno haa main usse pyar karta hoo lekin jab maine bhi bahoot thokre khaayi tab jaake mujhe kisi aur ladki pyar hua kyunki tumne mujhe majboor kiya tumne bhi to sam ke saath mujhe neglect kiya kyunki tumhe laga ki main tumhare zindagi mein kabhi nahi tha aur na kabhi aa paunga koi baat nahi us time meri galti thi ki main pyar ko pasand nahi karta tha kyunki har kisi ko pyaar samajhne bahoot der lag jaati hai but tumhe bachana aur tumhe us sunsaan raat ko lift dena sab kuch jhoot nahi tha main tumhare saath koi pyaar karne ka natak nahi kiya bas tumhe ek dosti ke naate bachaya kyunki mujhme ab bhi tumhare liye attraction tha pata hai tum jab mujhe us shaam ko pehli baar dikhi thi to tabhi main samajh gaya tha ki ek din to hamari mulaqat hogi aur dekho huyi bhi to isi naate agar tumhe lagta hai ki maine tumhare saath dikhawa kiya to main keh doo maine aisa kuch nahi shivani ne kaha main samajhti hoo rajvir sorry maine tumhe galat samjha lekin main tumhare aur baby ke bich nahi aana chahti bas hum ab dost hi reh sakte hai rajvir bola main bhi tumhare baat se sehmat hoo aur us din se dono acche dost ban gaye naahi baby ne koi question pucha rajvir se shivani ke bare mein kyunki wo to pehle se hi alag type ki bandi thi bas yuhi din bit gaye aur wo log 2nd year mein pahooch gaye jaha pe sec-a mein rajvir aur shivani ek class mein ho gaye aur jahan sec-b mein baby chali gayi jis wajah se rajvir ko baby ab time nahi deti aur rajvir bhi khud mein gumsum baitha rehta fhir ek din ab rajvir ka aana jaana baby ke yaha band hone laga tha  aur baby bhi ab kam rajvir se uthne baithne lagi thi but ek din rajvir aur baby nightclub mein mile jahan pe sabkuch rangeen tha rajvir ne thodi si pi jabki baby ne kitne drinks kar liye aur lagi ladko ke saath nachne lakde bahoot badmashi kar rahe the uske saath rajvir ko thoda gussa aaya aur usne baby waha se nikal kar ek kone mein bithaya fhir baby ne bola ab rajvir main tumhe apne naye boyfriend se milwati hoo fhir tabhi ek hatta katta handsome baby ke paas aaya baby ne use kiss kiya aur rajvir se introduce karaya aur kaha ye mera new lover aajkal to ye meri friends tak ko nahi chodta aur kehke uske saath nachne lagi rajvir ko bura laga aur wow aha se nikal gaya sab dekhne ke baad bhi rajvir ko baby se koi gussa nahi tha par ab usne than li ki pehle ki tarah hi rahega koi girlfriend nahi banayega aur waha se nikal gaya aur padal chalte chalte jaakar ek park mein baith gaya jaha pe wo rone laga aur saare din yaad karne laga ki tabhi use ye nahi pata tha ki piche shivani ka ghar hai aur tabhi shivani ki nazar rajvir par padi to tabhi waha daudke gayi aur waha uske paas aakar rajvir ko kaha yaha kya kar rahe ho itni raat gaye waise bhi shimla mein raat ko thand bad jaati hai rajvir bola kya sochu job hi sochta hoo kharab nikal jaata hai isliye main pyar nahi karna chahta tha aur rone laga shivani boli are rajvir hua kya rajvir ne saari baat batayi to shivani ne kaha chodo wo sab baato ko aur kuch socha kya karige rajvir bola break up kar loonga baby ke saath aur apni zindagi aise hi katunga tabhi shivani ne kaha dekho rajvir pyar mein kabhi girna nahi chahiye kyunki jo pyar karta hai wo accho ke saath hi karta hai kyunki waise bhi  baby ek rayeeszaadi aur bigdi huyi ladki hai aur waise bhi us jaisi ladki ko pyaar nahi bas dosti bhi nahi karna chahiye aur rote rote shivani ki god mein sar rakh diya aur shivani uske baal ko sehlane lagi fhir rajvir bola sorry mai kuch zyada hi jazbaati ho gaya tha maaf karna aur waha se chala gaya ghar aate hi usko shaam uncle se mulaqat ho gayi aur shaam uncle ne apne paas bulaya rajvir ko rajvir ne kaha ki mujhe is pyar mein kabhi bhi dilchaspi thi hi nahi lekin jab se main ye dekh raha hoo ki mujhe kabhi bhi pyaar hasil nahi hua kya mujhe sacha pyar karne wala milega shaam uncle ne kaha dekho bete maine bhi bahoot pyar kiya tha bahooto se lekin jab mujhe sachi pyar karne wali milli to wo mili mujhe jab main office mein gaya pyar har kisi se hota hai lekin jispe tumhe zyada kichaav laga samajh lo wahi tumhara pyar hai aur wahi tumse pyaar karega jo tumhare naseeb hai use ek baar apne sapne mein khojo kya pata wo tumhe dikh jaaye aur agar nahi dikhi to samajh jaao ki aisi koi bhi abhi tak nahi hai tumhare zindagi mein jo upar wale manjoor hoga wahi ladki tumhare life mein aayegi kyunki duniya mein aise bahoot log hai jinhe pyaar kebaare mien kuch nahi maloom hota aur naa hi unhe ye pata hota hai ki aage unhe jo wo ladki milni chahiye wo milegi ya nahi aur isi bewqufi mein sahi pyar life mein nahi aata kya pata wo kaisa insaan ho kaisa uske andar ka personality kis type ka ho to bas abhi bahoot der hai tumhe pyar ko samajh ne mein ek baat aur kabhi pyar ko galat nahi bolna chaiye kisi wajah se kya pata wahi pyar hi tumhari zindagika ahem pal ban jaaye to bas yahi socho aur aura hi baat ladkiyon ko ghumane mein jo ladka sab kuch de sakta hai apni girlfriend ko us ladke ko aaj ke zamane mein sab pyar karti hain kyunki pyar nahi uske rutbe mein pagal ho jaati aur use pyaar nahi sirf istemaal karna keh sakte hai aur pyar mein paise nahi dekhte paise to insaan ki banayi hui ek kagaz ka tukra hai jisse saari duniya chalti hai pyar iss duniya se badkar hai sab sunne ke baat rajvir andar chala gaya aur wo sochte sochte so gaya kaun hogi wo ladki jo rajvir ko milegi kya shivani uski zindagi mein bas ek anchaha pyar bani reh jaayegi padte rahiye. Aur haa sky blue aapka dhanyawaad padne ka aur mujhe reply bhejne kaa agar aur kisi ko bhi achhi lage to jaroor bhejiyega just wait for my next post.
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«Reply #14 on: August 10, 2010, 11:54:22 AM »
thank u asif ..
i m waiting 4 read..
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