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«Reply #15 on: March 28, 2012, 01:13:02 PM » |
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us bde se kamre ka koi chota sa b kona (sivaye chat aur jameen k) aisa nhi tha jahaa.n 'VIRAT KOHLI' ki poster na lgi ho!!
Wo deewaangi ki had tk virat se manoos ho chuki thi.
Yahaan tk ki usne apne copiyon aur kitabon pe b Virat ki photo wale akhbaar chada rkhe they..
Wo 12th me thi jb usne pehli baar Virat ko dekha tha..
Chai ka trey uthaye wo drawing room me dakhil ho rhi thi ki achanak hi uski njar t.v. Pe pdi aur wahi.n jam k reh gyi thi...
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«Reply #16 on: March 28, 2012, 01:31:24 PM » |
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Indian cricket team ka koi new player tha jiski pehli century pe sb uski peeth thapthpa rhey they aur wo muskura rha tha...
Fir ekdam se ghutno k bal baithkar usne apna locket choom lia...
"mobabbat yu.n achanak bhi ho jaya krti hai"
Jugnu ko aaj pta chla.
'VIRAT KOHLI' ki muskurahat itni dilfareb thi ki use apna dil khota hua sa mehsoos hua.
"Jugnu!!"
papa ki aawaaj pe wo besaakhta plti hi thi ki,
"chanaak!!!"
hathon me pkdi hui trey kadmo me aa giri thi.
Sbki tavajjoh usi ki traf ho gyi...wo itni laparvaah to kbhi nhi thi.
"Rani,ye sb kuch saaf krke chai dobara bna lena"
naukrani ko hidayat dekar wo apne room me ja chuki thi.
Ye 3 saal pehle ki baat thi..
Jugnu yaad krke muskura uthi..
Ab to aalam ye tha ki wo saher me Virat ka naam lekar uthti..aur Virat k naam pe hi shaam kr deti.
Uske frnd aur papa..sb use pagal kehne lge they.
Mgar wo khush thi..apne khwaab k us dunia me hi..jahaa.n Virat k siva koi nhi tha..
Koi bhi nhi..!!!
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«Reply #17 on: March 28, 2012, 01:53:53 PM » |
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"ye kya hai?"
wo garden me gulaab k paudhe lgane me mgan thi jb hi Aaditya apne janmdin pe diye uske gift ko uthaye chla aaya.
"cricket kit hai"
sukoon se jawaab dia gya tha.
"wo to mai dekh hi rha hoon..par kis liye hai?"
dubara sawaal kia gya.
"practice k liye baba!! Tumhe cricketer banna hai na"
usne gamle me mitti daalte hue kaha tha.
"accha..ye kisne keh dia tumse?"
wo jhoothi hairat se pooch rha tha.
"mai keh rhi hoon..ye kya km hai?"
andaaz me guroor tha.
"accha ji!! Lekin mene kb kaha ki 'JO TUMKO HO PASAND WHI KAAM KARENGE..TUM DIN KO AGAR..."
wo bakayda gane lga tha.
"Aadi suno to!
Tum cricketer bn jana,fir virat se dosti karna..fir wo tumhare ghar aayega..tumhara ghar mere ghar k paas..mai b tumhare ghar aa jaungi...aur fir......"
wo mitti se sne hathon pe chehra tikaye aankhe.n bnd kr gai.
"fir kya Jugnu?"
Aaditya ne use josh dilaya.
"fir mai use direct prapose kr doongi...yes!!!
Theek hai na Aadi??"
usne tsdeek k liye aankhen khol di.n
par wo to ja chuka tha..
"huh..! Jalankhor..meri khusi brdast nhi kr skta.."
Jugnu ne bura sa muh bnaya aur wapas paudhe lgane lgi.
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«Reply #18 on: March 29, 2012, 02:54:45 AM » |
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wo coaching center k bahar khdi hokar apni frnd Soniya ka wait kr rhi thi..
"yaar ye Viratwa sale ko player kisne bna dia...0 run pe out ho jata hai ghonchu kahi.n ka.."
"haan yaar...aaj India match haar gyi usi ki vjah se."
..itna sunna tha ki Jugnu k kaan khde ho gye..usne gusse se un dono ldkon ki taraf dekha jo usse thodi doori par khde aapas me baatcheet kr rhe they.
Wo tamtamate chehre k sath unke paas pahunchi thi...
"suniye! Aap logo.n ko kya tkleef hai?"
usne dono ko ghoorte hue poocha tha.
"ji hme to koi tkleef nhi hai..par aapko sayad koi tkleef ho gyi hai mohtarma..jo vewajah gle pd rhi hain..."
un dono ko b gussa aa gya
"aap log Virat ko viratwa,sala aur ghonchu kyo keh rhe they?
Tmeej jra b nhi hai kya..ye bech k kmeej khareed li?"
gussa shabaab pe tha.
"aap had se aage bdh rhi hain miss!
Hum Virat ko viratwa kahen ya kuch aur..hmari mrji...aapko koi problem nhi honi chahiye."
wo dono b jid pe ad gye.
"chataakh !!"
Jugnu ne unme se ek ko kheench k tamacha jda tha.
Ek pl k liye khamosi si cha gyi..
Saamne se aati Soniya ne apna sar peet liya..
Jugnu Virat ki burai krne walo.n se yu.n hi pange lia krti thi.
Sdak pe kafi bheed ikatthi ho gyi..
"aap apne aapko samajhti kya hain miss?...bahut akad bhra hua hai na..abhi btata hoon ki bdtameeji kise kehte hain.."
wo ldka uski taraf bdha tha.
Jugnu ko kato to khoon nhi...
Kya kr gujri thi vo iska andaza use ab hua tha..
Use lga ki jaise hr traf andhera cha gya ho.
Aur isse pehle ki vo behosh hoke sdak pe girti,
2 mjboot hathon ne use thaam lia....
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«Reply #19 on: March 29, 2012, 01:49:00 PM » |
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bohot badhiya sarkar... i m new here....
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«Reply #20 on: March 30, 2012, 03:11:35 AM » |
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Aankhen khuli to usne khud ko apne kamre me paya..
Aaditya uske just saamne khda use yun dekh rha tha ki jaise kaccha chba jayega.
"tum apne aap ko RANI LAXHMI BAI smajhti ho kya??
Jra sa b andaza hai tumhe ki kya kar k aai ho??"
wo gusse se use daant rha tha.
"wo log mere Virat ki burai kr rhe they..mujhse brdast nhi hua to mene.......
"thappad maar diya...waah!! Kya nek kaam kia hai..!! Tumhe to gold medal milna chahiye is par.."
wo Jugnu ki baat kaat k bola tha.
"Aadi...mjaak mt udao mera.."
wo roni surat bna k boli thi.
"arey nhi nhi Jugnu..!! Mai to tareef kr rha tha..blke uncle ko b bta k aata hoon ki unki laadli kitni bahudur hai..."
wo jane ko plta.
"tumhe meri kasam Aadi..tum papa ko kuch nhi btaoge..!"
Jugnu ne uska raasta rok liya.
"bus...kasam de k bch jati ho hmesha..lekin dhyaan rhe aainda aisa koi kaam mt krna..wo to accha hua ki mai wqt pe pahunch gya tha..wrna wo ldka to..
Aaditya ne baat adhoori chor di.
Jugnu njren jhuka gyi thi...
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«Reply #21 on: March 30, 2012, 03:32:09 AM » |
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Exams me busy hone k karan usne kai dino se computer ko hath b nhi lgaya tha.
Use aaj hi fursat mili thi..
Computer on krke usne apna FACEBOOK account khola hi tha ki sara mood chaupat ho gya..
Haton me pkde hue koffee mug ko usne jor se table pe ptka aur room se bahar nikal gyi..
"Aadi.."
wo tnfan krti hui uske ghar pe pahunch chuki thi...ummeed k khilaaf wo bde aaraam se so rha tha.
Jugnu ne direct uski gardan daboch li..wo chaunk k jga tha..
"arey koi bchao mujhe...Jugnu k andar kisi murderer ki rooh ghus gyi hai.."
Aaditya k muh se lafj bamuskil ada hue they...uski aankhen bahar ko nikal aayi thi.n.
"tumhari himmat kaise hui mere Virat ki cartoonist photo facebook pe upload krne ki.."
gussa itna shadeed tha ki Jugnu ki naak surkh ho gyi.
"kya hua Jugnu?"
aunty k entry pe uski pakad dhili pdi thi.
Aaditya ko jhooti khaansi ka daura pd gya.
"aunty..isse keh den ki mujhse uljha na kare..wrna ek din apne sare daat kho dega.."
wo unke paas aakar boli thi.
"Aaditya..kya kia hai tumne?"
unhone bete ko daant k poocha.
"kuch nhi mama,bs iske 'Virat' ki real photo fb pe upload kr di thi mene...sb keh rhe the wow!! So smart..ldkiyaan to flat ho gyi thi.n dekhkar"
keh k wo ruka nhi tha.
"Aadi..tumhe bakhshungi nhi mai.."
Jugnu ne uske piche daud lga di...
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«Reply #22 on: March 30, 2012, 05:24:32 AM » |
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"Hey Virat !!
Aaj to aap hero bn gye ho yaar!!!
Yun b hota hai bhla..aaj subah hi mere dil ne kaha tha ki aap century marenge...
I'm surprised...ye sch ho gya!!
O God..!! Mai ab tk ykeen nhi kr pa rhi...189r/140b..
Wow!!
U can do!! Aap to kuch b kr skte hain...
Miracle se km nhi hai aapke aaj ka performence...
U r great..u r great..
Really..!!"
Drawing room me sofe pe chadhi wo khusi se chilla rhi thi..saamne chlte T.V. pe Virat ka interview chal rha tha jisne aaj team ko namumkin si jeet dilayi thi.
"oh papa! Dekhiye na..hum jeet gye...Virat ne century mari hai.."
Mr. Singh abhi abhi hospital se laute they.
Jugnu ne unke gle me bahen daal di.n.
"huh...jada khush hone ki jarurat nhi..ek match jeet gye to kya worldcup 2015 ghar aa gya.."
Aaditya achanak hi aake bola tha.
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«Reply #23 on: March 30, 2012, 05:43:23 AM » |
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"aaya nhi hai to aa jayega...don't worry..Virat hain na..kyo papa??"
usne farzi collar jhade...
"Definately my child"
unhone victory ka nisaan dikhaya.
"yeh !!...that's like my papa...I love u so much.."
wo unke sine se ja lgi thi.
"uncle,ise jada match na dekhne dia karen..virat ko njar lg gyi to doob jayega bechara."
Aaditya ne jhoothi fikrmandi dikhai.
"tumhe khwaab aa jata hai kya ki mai khush ho rhi hoon..aur fir chle aate ho mera mood off krne."
wo ldaka auraton ki trah kamar pe hath rkh k boli.
"sorry! mere khwaabon me 'sde' hue log nhi aate...
Anyway mai btane aaya tha ki mama yaad kr rhi thi.n tumhe...unhone 'moong ka halwa' bnaya hai..."
"kya sch..??"
apni fav. Dish ka naam sunke wo 1 second me drvaje tk pahunch chuki thi.
"arey sleepar to pehan lo"
Mr. Singh ne aawaaj di
mgar vo ja chuki thi...
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«Reply #24 on: March 30, 2012, 06:03:31 AM » |
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"Aadi...utho to jra"
wo uske sar pe khdi chilla rhi thi...
Dopehar ka wqt tha..wo mje se apne bistar pe leta nind ki vadiyon me gum tha.
"raat bhar jag k chaukidari ki hai kya??
Ya sdiyon se nhi soye ho?"
Jugnu lagataar chillaye ja rhi thi.
Wo jag gya tha mgar sote rehne ka dikhawa kr rha tha.
"Aadi mai 3 tk ginungi...agar nhi uthe to ye jag me bhra pani tumhare oopar daal doongi.."
dhamki kaamyaab rhi..wo tadakh k utha tha..
"bko..kya museebat hai..har wqt sar pe sawaar rehti ho..kbhi to apne ghar pe b tika karo.."
Jugnu ko hsi aa gyi..
"mujhe tumhari fijool si muskurahat dekhne ka koi sauk nhi...smjhi..!"
wo chadar dubara sar tk taan chuka tha.
Aur uski is hrkat pe Jugnu ne na sirf chadar kheenchi..blki jag me bhra pani b uske chehre pe udel dia.
"aakhir tumhari problem kya hai meri amma??"
wo dono hath jod k sar jhuka gya.
"5 minute me taiyaar ho jao..mujhe market jana hai..."
usne order dia.
"mujhe nhi jana market jhaarket..tum akele nhi ja skti kya.."
usne saaf mna kr dia.
"mujhe sauk nhi lga hai tumhe apne sath le jane ka..par vo kya hai ki na aaj mera driver chutti pe hai.."
jugnu ne apni problem btai.
"mgar....."
"agar mgar kuch nhi...taiyaar hoke bahar aao mai wait kr rhi hoon.."
wo bta k ja chuki thi.
Aaditya jhunjhula k reh gya.
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«Reply #25 on: March 30, 2012, 06:19:00 AM » |
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Mrs. Saroj apne car ka sheesha niche kiye bahut der se us ldki ko dekh rhi thi.n...lagbhag aadhe ghante se.
Unka driver kuch saamaan lene gya tha...
Unki njar achanak hi us ldki pe pdi thi ...SITARA shopping moll k ground flor pe khdi wo ldki sayad kuch dekhne me mgan thi..bina kisi harkat ke wo ekdam sidhi khdi koi but lg rhi thi.
Aate jate log use hairat se dekhte aur hs k gujar jate..
White colour k suit me white hi dupatta sar pe dale wo bahut masoom lg rhi thi...
Car se utarkar unhone apne kadam us ladki ki taraf bdha liye..
Wo uske ekdam piche aa khdi hui.n...
Aur agle hi pal unke chehre pe gehri mukurahat fail gyi..
Unhone khde-khde hi ek faisla kr lia..
"Rajan..mujhe is ldki k bare me sari maalumaat chahiye.."
apne khaas aadmi ko hukm dekar wo gaadi me aa baithi thi.n.
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«Reply #26 on: March 30, 2012, 06:37:43 AM » |
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"tumhe aakhir chahiye kya yaar?"
Jugnu 5 dukaano me kpde dekhne k baad 6 ve shop me ghus rhi thi jb hi Aaditya ne toka tha.
"bs 5 minute..yahaan pakka mil jayega.."
jugnu ne use ykeen dilaya tha.
"Tumhare is 5 minute k chakkar me pichi wale shop k bahar mai ek ghante tk khda reh chuka hoon...
Aisa karo 'RITU BERI' se dosti kr lo..fir unhi se apne kpde design krvati rehna...meri nind kharaab kr di.."
Aaditya ko apni nind toot jane ka abhi tk afsos tha.
"chalo..."
aadhe ghante baad wo payment krke plti thi.
"thank God"
Aaditya ne chain ki saans li.
Wo dono moll se nikal hi rhe they ki Aaditya ki njar ek ajeeb se style k dress pe pdi.
"Jugnu ye pack krwa doon tumhare liye?"
wo sokhi se bola.
"no thanks!"
haan chaho to us Motalli k liye pack krwa lo jo tum jaise cartoon k palle bndhne wali hai."
Jugnu ne clte hue kaha tha.
"MOTALLI...!!
Wow!! Kya naam hai..!!
Pehli baar tumne apna shi misaal dia hai...really,
it's so romantic yaar"
Jugnu jal k reh gai.
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«Reply #27 on: March 31, 2012, 12:12:06 PM » |
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"mam uska naam Niharika Singh hai...uske father Mr. Uday Pratap Singh Lucknow k famous neurologist hain..uske maa ki death bchpan me hi ho gyi thi...is wqt wo L.U. me B.Com final year ki student hai..
Uske ab tk ka taleemi record bahut hi shaandaar rha hai..."
Rajan Mrs. Saroj ko details de rha tha.
"very gud,ab tum ja skte ho.."
"thank u mam"
Rajan uski photo table pe rkh k ja chuka tha.
Mrs. Saroj Lucknow me ek shadi attend krne aai thi.n mgar yahaan aakar unka ek bda problem solve ho gya tha..
Aur ab wo kafi pursukoon njar aa rhi.n thi.n...
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«Reply #28 on: April 06, 2012, 03:46:59 PM » |
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"Jugnu mere liye b koffee bna lena"
wo kitchen k darvaje pe khda usse keh rha tha.
"theek hai bna leti hoon..mgar pehle ye papa ko de aao"
jugnu ne use doodh ka gilaas thmaya tha.
Aaditya chaunk gya...Jugnu ki aankhon me aansu jhilmila rhe they aur chehra surkh ho rha tha.
"de aata hoon yaar...mgar tum ro kyo rhi ho??
Kahi.n Virat gujar to nhi gya!!!!!!!
He bhagwaan uski aatma ko shaanti dena..."
Aaditya ne rone ki acting krte hue aasmaan ki taraf dekha.
"Aadi kbi to acchi baaten kia karo...!
Bhagwaan meri umr b mere Virat ko lga dena"
Aaditya ko daantne k baad usne bhagwaan se kaha tha.
"mujhe jo lga wo mene keh dia...vaise tum ro kyo rhi thi?"
wo serious hua.
"iski vjah se"
jugnu ne kte hue pyaaz ka plate uske saamne kr dia.
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«Reply #29 on: April 06, 2012, 04:35:47 PM » |
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"kab mere aangan ki ye nanhi si kli muqammal phool bn gyi...mujhe to pta hi nhi chla!
Abhi kl hi ki baat lgti hai...jb pehli baar tumne toote-foote lafjon me mujhe 'pa..pa...ie' kaha tha...jb meri ungli pakad kr tumne chlna seekha tha...
"papa ichkool nhi jana mudhko" kehte hue tum meri godi me chadh jaya krti thi...
Uff...kitni muskil se mna k tumhe school bhejta tha mai...!!
Kbhi tumhe 'KATLEENA' wali dress chahiye hoti thi...to kbi 'AICHWALYA' wali sandle..."
Mr. Udit purani baaton ko yaad krke muskura rhe they.
"mai to bhool hi gya tha ki meri bitiya ko agle ghar b jana hai.."
unki muskurati aankhon me pani bhar aaya tha.
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