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«Reply #30 on: April 06, 2012, 05:03:49 PM » |
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"beta aapke liye ek bahut hi accha rista aaya hai...
Kafi acche log hain...aap princess bn k rahengi wahaan..."
Mr. Singh use smjha rhe they.
"papa mai..."
wo aaj pehli baar sharmai thi.
"aapki maa hoti.n to is topic pe wo hi aapse baat krti.n mgar....
Wo thoda ruke they.
"koi jabardsti nhi hai...agar aapko koi psnd ho to is bare me mujhe khul k btayen"
wo dostana andaaz me uski marzi pooch rhe the.
"aisi koi baat nhi hai papa!"
wo turant hi na me sar hila gyi.
"to fir theek hai...mai haan keh deta hoon"
jugnu k gaalon ko thapthpa k wo bahar nikal gye.
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«Reply #31 on: April 06, 2012, 05:30:15 PM » |
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"SHADI HAI DILLI KA LADDU...
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LADDU YE HAR MAN ME PHOOTE...
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ISKA LGE HAR DANA BHLA..."
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Aadity chunri odhe naach rha tha...
Uski sokhiyaan shabaab pe thi.n.
Jugnu ruhaansi to thi hi...ab bakaayda jor jor se rone lgi.
"ye tumhe kya ho gya yaar?"
Aaditya naachna bnd krke uske paas aa gya.
"mai ye shadi nhi krna chaahti Aadi...!"
wo siski thi.
"kyo...virat k praposal ka intjaar hai??"
Aaditya chidhane se baaj nhi aaya.
"shut up...tum jada bkvaas na kia karo smjhe!!,
wo actually mene unhe dekha b nhi hai aur.....
"accha to dating krwa doon ek aadh baar...tum apna 'VIRATNAMA' apne hone wale 'un' ko b suna dena..."
wo jugnu ki baat kaat k bola tha.
"tumhe to mai!"
Jugnu ne papervet uski taraf uchala..mgar vo khud ko bcha gya.
"accha btao baat kya hai?"
ab wo seriously pooch rha tha.
"Aadi mai papa ko chorker utni door nhi jana chaahti"
wo imotional hui.
"ye lo! Tumhe to khush hona chahiye k tum Dilli ja rhi ho...'virat' k saher me"
wo muskurah chupa gya tha.
"uske ghar to nhi ja rhi na jo jashn mnau.n....pta nhi wo log mujhe aaraam se cricket dekhne denge ya nhi...aur fir mai ye apna room chorkar jana nhi chaahti."
Virat k posters pe njar daal k wo masumiyat se boli thi...
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«Reply #32 on: April 06, 2012, 05:48:58 PM » |
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"Accha..!! To asal baat ye hai...
Lekin tumhe kbhi na kbhi to yahaan se jana hi tha na!!"
wo bujurgon k andaaz me samjha rha tha.
"kyo jana tha??
Mene to soch rkha tha ki tumse shadi karungi...tumhare kmre me mai virat k posters lgati...aur fir tum mujhe hr match dikhane b to le jate.."
masumiyat ki inteha thi.
"ya Rab!..tune bacha lia..."
Aaditya ne dono hath dua k andaaj me utha liye.
"waise agar ye ijhaar-e-mohabbat pehle hi kr deti to accha rehta...ab to kuch nhi ho skta."
wo pareshaan hone ka dikhava kr rha tha.
"Aadi...!!"
"baraat le k aa jaao" yhi kehna chaahti ho na...?
Tauba! Jane kbse mere pe niyat kharaab thi tumhari.."
wo uski kha jane vali najron ko njarandaaz krke bola tha.
"mohabbat aur tumse!
Namumkin...shakl dekhi hai apni aaine me...bhoot lgte ho!"
halaaki vo kafi smart tha.
"accha..to is bhoot pe mar miti ho?"
wo lgataar use tpaye ja rha tha.
"dfa ho jao mere room se tum!"
Aaditya ko dhakka dekar usne darvaja bnd kr lia.
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«Reply #33 on: April 06, 2012, 05:58:58 PM » |
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car ek bde se bangle k saamne aa ke ruki thi.
Main gait se bngle k andar tk jane wala raasta poori tarah surkh gulaab ki pankhudiyon se pta hua tha...
Raaste k dono taraf lge pedon me raushaniyaan lapeti gyi thi.n...
"Aao Dulhan"
uski saas ne aarti utaarne k baad kaha tha...
Jugnu ne apne qadam laaunj ki traf bdha liye...
Lmba ghunghat hone ki vjah se use kuch dikh hi nhi rha tha..
Wo hlka sa ladkhadai thi...
"sambhal ke"
uske sath chle shakhs ne kaha tha.
"ji mai theek hoon"
wo sharminda hui.
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«Reply #34 on: May 03, 2012, 09:06:32 AM » |
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Bda sa bedroom bahut khoobsoorti se sjaya gya tha...
Phoolon ki anginat ldiyaa.n bed k daaye.n-baaye.n jhool rhi thi.n...
Sara kmra mdhosh kr dene wale khushu me dooba hua tha..
Heart shape k baloon divaron pe chipkaye gye they...floating candles ki roshni ne kmre k mahaul ko romantic bna rkha tha...
Sb kuch Bahut hi khoobsurat tha...
Usne man hi man tareef kr dali.
"itne rayish logon ne mera rista kyo maanga?"
Bangla aur uski shaandaar sjavat se andaza ho rha tha k wo log kafi rayish they.
Usne to apne husband ki photo tk nhi dekhi thi...
"jane kaise honge?"
"bilkul munky lgta hai yaar!"
Aaditya ki sararat ekdam se kaano me goonji thi...
Wo inhi sb sochon me gum thi ki bedroom ka darvaja dhire se khula......
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«Reply #35 on: May 03, 2012, 09:32:05 AM » |
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"Ab jbki tum meri jindgi me shamil ho hi chuki ho to mai tumse kuch bhi chupana nhi chaahunga...
Tum meri marzi nhi ho..maine apni mama k kehne par tumhe apnaya hai...mai kisi aur se pyar krta hoon..jo ki mera sb kuch hai..wo meri ho to nhi ski mgar mai uski jgah kisi ko nhi de skta...kisi ko bhi nhi...!!
Tumhe is ghar me sb kuch hasil hoga...sivaye meri mohabbat k..."
Andar aaye hue shakhs k alfaaj Jugnu k armaanon ko raundte chle gye.
"ye lo...tumhari muh dikhai.."
usne ghoonghat utha k makhmali dibiya uske god me daal di.
Jugnu ne apni ghani palkon ko oopar uthaya...
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«Reply #36 on: May 03, 2012, 02:51:31 PM » |
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Aap!!!!!!!!
Saamne Virat khda tha..
Jugnu ki jaagti aankhon ka khwaab hqiqat bn k uske saamne tha...
Wo but bn k reh gyi...aankhon ki putaliyaan ekdam se thehar k reh gyi thi.n...
Virat tkiya utha k sath wale kmre
me ja chuka tha...bina uski taraf dekhe...agar dekh leta to sayad usi pl apna sb kuch haar baithta...
Jugnu ki aankhon me kya na tha!!
Mohabbat,hairat,gum,tadap,bebasi aur aansu...sb hi kuch to...
"Dil me aapse milne ki khwaish to thi mgar...maine khwaab me bhi kbi aapke sath ki tamanna nhi ki...kyoki mai jaanti thi ki ye mumkin nhi hai...mgar ab aap mere itne paas hoker b mere nhi hain..ye ehsaas mujhe tdpa rha hai..bilkul vaise hi jaise sehra me pyas se tdapte kisi shakhs k honthon tk pani la k gira diya jaye...
"MAI KISI AUR SE PYAR KRTA HOON"
...Aapne to bta diya...lekin mai aapse kitni mohabbat krti hoon iska jra bhi andaza nhi hai aapko..."
Aansu katra-katra gir ke uska daman bhigo rhe they.....
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«Reply #37 on: May 03, 2012, 03:12:13 PM » |
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Aadab sister...
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Aapki stories bahut achchi likhti h.
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M aapko ak rai dena chahta hu es pe gaur karna.
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Ak monthly djest aata h jiska naam h mahakta aanchal.
Wo puri India bahoot read kiya Jaata.
Aap apni stories waha bhej ke dekhe.
Waha pe aapki stories publish ho sakti h.
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To sister aap try karke dekhe Agar Allah ne Chaha to unhe Aap ki Story Bahoot Pasand Aayegi.
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Allah Hafeej
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«Reply #38 on: May 03, 2012, 03:44:03 PM » |
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Thanks bhai ji...
Mujhe lga k koi pdh hi nhi rha mery story...
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«Reply #39 on: May 04, 2012, 03:05:25 AM » |
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"Choti maalkin...maa ji ne bulaya hai aapko"
wo abhi-abhi nha k nikli hi thi ki mulajima use bulane aa gyi...
"theek hai mai jati hoon...
Aur suno ye tmaam phool mujhe lautne par yahaan njar nhi aane chahiye..."
bed pe pde phoolon ko usne nafrat se dekha..aur bahar nikal gyi.
Saamne se whi dushman-e-jaa chla aa rha tha jisne raat use khoob rulaya tha...
Wo use ignore krke aage bdh gyi...
Gulabi colour ki shaari me wo khud bhi ek gulaab si lg rhi thi...
Virat ko uska rootha-rootha sa chehra bahut dilkash lga...
...Dil me kuch-kuch hua tha...
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«Reply #40 on: May 04, 2012, 06:26:56 AM » |
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"ji mummy ji...aapne bulaya hme?"
wo drvaje pe khdi pooch rhi thi.
"haan dulhan...aao baitho.."
Mrs. Saroj ne use apne saamne baitha liya..aur ab use dhyaan se dekh rhi thi.n.
"tum mere bete se bahut pyar krti ho na?"
unhone muskura k poocha tha.
"ji mai !!..."
Jugnu se baat muqammal krna mushkil ho gya...wo njren jhuka gai.
"pta hai jb mene pehli baar tumko dekha tha to us wqt tum mere bete ki photo dekhne me mgan thi...safed kpdon me khoi khoi si tum itni hseen lg rhi thi ki mene usi wqt tumhe apni bahu bnane ka irada kr lia tha..."
Jugnu hairat se unki baaton ko sun rhi thi...
"mujhe apne bete k liye aisi hi ldki chahiye thi jo usko dil-o-jaan se chaahe...use bepanaah mohabbat de...kyoki mera beta ishq me toota hua hai...
Wo ik ldki se pyar krta tha jiski shadi kisi aur se ho chuki hai...mgar mera beta aaj bhi uski yaadon me jeeta hai...wo aaj b whi.n hai jahaan wo use chor k gyi thi..ab se 4 saal pehle.."
unki aawaaj me dard ghul gya tha.
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«Reply #41 on: May 04, 2012, 02:53:39 PM » |
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"Inhone us ldki se shadi kyo nhi ki?"
Jugnu ne khud pe jabt krte hue poocha tha.
"tb hamara talluk middle class se tha na...hum unke itna ryish nhi they...
"MAI APNI BETI KA HATH AISE LADKE K HATH ME NHI DE SKTA JISKO BDE-BDE SAPNE DEKHNE K SIVA KUCH NHI AATA...
AREY AISE GLI-GLI CRICKET KHELNE WALA HR LDKA TENDULKAR TO NHI BN JATA NA..."
Uske father ne saaf inkaar kr dia tha...
"aur wo ladki...??"
Jugnu ne jaanna chaha.
"MAI APNE PAPA K KHILAAF JAKAR TUMSE SHADI NHI KR SKTI VIRAT!"
ye uska jawaab tha.
Mrs. Saroj talkhi se muskurayi.n...
"kmeeni !! Mohabbat kar rhi thi ya time paas"
Jugnu ne jal k socha tha mgar kaha nhi.
"bahu..wada karo..k tum mere bete ko hmesha khush rkhogi...wo thoda jiddi hai..mgar dil ka bura nhi..."
unhone Jugnu ko apne sine se lga lia...
"mai vada krti hoon mummy ji"
wo puraitmadi se boli thi...
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«Reply #42 on: May 05, 2012, 02:32:24 AM » |
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Aaj reseption tha...
Dark mehroon aur golden combination k fish cut lehange me wo aasmaan se utri koi apsara lg rhi thi...
Sare mehmaan use tareefi najron se dekh rhe they...press aur media walon ki kafi bheed thi...
Cameron ki chakachaundh lgataar uske chehre pr pd rhi thi...
Kisi ristedaar ki baaton pe hlke se muskurati wo Virat ko sidhe apne dil me utarti hui si mehsoos hui...
Wo uski taraf se najren hta gya...
"kaho beta...surprize kaisa lga?"
wo apne papa ko dekhkar unki traf aai thi jb hi unhone usse poocha tha...
"Papa...!!"
wo unke sine se lag kr ro di.
"ye khushi k aansu hain ya gum k? Agar khushi k hain to jaao...wo jo black three peace me gajab dha rhe hain unke gle se lg kr ro lo...ji behal jayega tumhara..."
Aaditya ne mashvra dia.
"tum bhi shamil they is shajish me?"
aansu poch k usne Aaditya ko ghoora.
"bilkul...101%
bcoz, tumhari khusi hi mere liye sb kuch hai.."
wo pyar se bola tha.
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«Reply #43 on: May 05, 2012, 03:02:46 AM » |
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Is there a Love triangle.
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«Reply #44 on: May 05, 2012, 03:04:01 AM » |
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Is there a Love triangle.
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on eTI community..
