Ek sache shakhs ki sachii kahani...

by brokenbyluv on January 24, 2010, 09:38:08 PM
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ehsaas chahat ka
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«Reply #15 on: January 25, 2010, 10:19:02 PM »
wow geet dear zarur aage bhi
likhe hame intezaar rahega
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #16 on: January 27, 2010, 10:07:03 AM »
GEET JI MUJE YE KAHANI BAHOT HI HEART TOUCHING LAGI HE OR IS ME JO NAI ANGLE AAI HE WO BAHOT AACHHI LAGI.... THANKU SO MUCH....
PLS AAGE JALDI LIKHIYEGA....
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«Reply #17 on: January 27, 2010, 04:34:02 PM »
thnx dosto merri kahani ka padhne k liye...chaliye aage ka safar bhi apke beech share karti hu...ummeed kartu hu apko pasand ayega...
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«Reply #18 on: January 27, 2010, 05:32:53 PM »
Ladke ne angel ko ph kiya aur janne ki koshish ki,ki akhir us ladki ko achank se ye kya ho gya hai,tou angel ne kaha ki vo use puchke bataegi ki akhir vo msg kisne kiye tha..vo phir bhi khush tha kyunki use laga ki hamesha ki tarah shayad ladki ka mood upset hai ya shayad koi aur baat hogi jo vo use bata nhi paa rahi hai,ladke ne phir se hamesha ki trh uska picha karna chup chup k use dekhna shuru kar diya,hamesha ki trh usne use blank calls karne shuru kar diye jab vo ph uthati tou vo kuch nhi kehta uski mom ya uski behen ph uthati tou vo unse baat karta aur ph rakh deta..ek din hamesha ki trh usne ph kiya uske ghar aur uski mom ne ph uthaya.usne unka haal pucha tou uski mom bahut gusse mein boli-DEKHO BETA BEHTAR YAHI HOGA KI TUM APNI ZINDGI JIYO AUR HAMEIN APNI ZINDGI JINE DO..AUR HAAN AAJ K BAAD YAHAN KOI PH MAT KARNA AUR NAA HI KOI BLANK CALL KARNA,WARNA TUMHE SUNDARNE K AUR BHI TARIKE HAME AATE HAI...ladka ek dum shock mein tha..phir bhi usne himmat karke unse pucha-AUNTY PLZZ USSE PUCH KAR ITNA TOU BATA DIJIYE KI MERRI GALATI KYA HAI..uski momm ne kaha-USKI ZARURT NHI HAI JO MAINE KAHA BUS WAHI KAFI HAI..ladske ne THIK HAI keh k ph rakh diya...

Vo bahut hi zyada tot gya tha us din..usne kisi se koi baat nhi ki kuch din...bus us ladki ki baate yad karta aur khud se puchta rehta ki akhir kahan aur kya galti thi uski,angel ne bhi use kaha-KI MAINE TUJHE PEHLE HI SMJHAYA THA,TU HI MANA..vo kehta-TU TENSION MAT LE AGAR MERRI MHBT SACHI HOGI TOU VO EK NA EK DIN MERRI ZARUR HOGI..angel phir bhi use smjhati per vo nhi maanta..yu hi din,mahine saal guzar gya vo uski yado mein jita raha...ek din vo kaafi bechain tha use us ladki ki bahu zyada yad arhi thi,usne uske yahan blank call kiya us ladki ki awaz sun kar vo reh nhi paya aur usne usse puch hi liya-KAISI HO??
ladki ka jawab aaya-THIK NHI HU TABIYAT KHARAB HAI.TEZ BUKHAR HAI...
ladka bola-TABHI MUJHE EK PAL CHAIN NHI THA JANE KYUN MERRE DIL MEIN AJEEB SE DARD HO RAHA THA AUR TUMHARI YAD AA RHI THI...
ladki boli-ACHA TUMHE KAISE PATA CHAL GYA???KABIR KO TOU NHI PATA CHALTA..
ladke ne pucha-KABIR KAUN??
vo anjaan ban kar boli-MERRA BOYFREND...
ladke ne kaha-KAB SE HAI..TUMNE MUJHE KABHI KUCH NHI KAHA...
ladki boli-EK SAAL HO GYA...(ek saal pehle hi us ladki ne achanak us ladke se dosti tod di thi)...ladke ko apne sawalo k jawab mil gye the..
ladke ne pucha-KYA VO TUMHE BAHUT CHAHTA HAI,KYA TUM USKE SATH KHUSH HO???
ladki boli-HAAN BAHUT KHUSH HU,AUR TUM FIKR MAT KARO MAIN TUMHE APNI SHAADI MEIN ZARUR BULAUNGI..
ladka chup raha..uska dil bhar aaya tha vo chahta tha ki ek baar us ladki se puchta ki akhir tumne merre sath aesa kyun kiya..per usne khud ko sameta aur us ladki ko kaha-MAIN HAMESHA APNI DUA MEIN TUMHARI KHUSHAIYA MANGTA HU AUR AAJ SE YE DUA BHI KARUNGA KI TUMHE TUMHARA PYAR MIL JAYE...
ladki kehti-THNX..ladke ne ph rakh diya..vo bahut udas tha vo bahut roya us din jitna dard uske dil mein tha uske ansuao se saaf zaahir ho raha tha...phir bhi usne himmat nhi hari aur ye sochke ki mhbt sirrf pane ka naam nhi hai usne apni life ko zindadili se jina shuru kar diya..vo sab ko jitna hota khush rakhne ki koshish karta apne dosto k sath khoob masti karta aur unhe khushiya dene ki koshish karta,jitna uske bas mein tha utna..
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«Reply #19 on: January 27, 2010, 06:40:28 PM »
Ab vo ladka uss ladki ki mutabik uski life se door tha...usne us ladki ko blank calls karne band kar diye the haan kabhi kabhi msg kar deta tha jab use uski yad tadpa deti thi,per us ladki ka reply hamesha rude hota tha..per vo tou ek diwana tha aur bhala diwano ne bhi kabhi kisi ki suni hai..

Vo bus uske laut aane ki aas mein jita raha vo ladki apne sapne kisi aur k sath sanjoti rahi..aur yu hi 6 saal guzar gaye..

Ab us ladke k naye dost ban gye the..vo unke sath apna waqt bitata aur koshish karta ki jo lagav jo ehsas reh reh k uske dil mein us ladki k liye jaagte rehte hai vo use nazarandaaz kar sake...
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«Reply #20 on: January 27, 2010, 07:15:43 PM »
Ab uski life mein sab kuch badlne wala tha...vo nhi janta tha ki yu iss trh uski zindgi achank badal jayegi..sabhi jante the ki vo ek diwana tha...aur phir ek din uske zindgi mein ek nayi dost aayi..vo uski frend ki frend thi..bahut attractive,verry full of life,bindaas type uska naam tha ruhi..ruhi bahut hi pyari thi..un dono ki dosti ho gyi..lekin vo ruhi se hamesha door hi rehta tha kyunki vo dono ekdum alag the ruhi thi jo dil mein vo mu pe bolne walo mein se aur ye janab kuch na kehne walo mein se the...lekin phir bhi kam waqt mein dono ek dusre k ache dost ban gye the..ruhi use aksar call karti  thi...aur dono ghanto baate karte the..

Ek din ruhi ne akhir ladke se puch hi liya ki akhir uski kahani kya hai...usne ruhi ko apni kahani sunayi...tou ruhi ne uska sath dene ka wada kiya aur kaha ki jitna ho sakega vo uske liye karegi..ladke ne use kaha ki koi fayda nhi hai vo kisi aur se pyar karti hai..per ruhi ziddi thi vo nhi maani ladke ne kaha thik hai...per usne kabhi use us ladki ka ghar nhi dikhaya na hi kuch aur uske baare mein bataya..per ruhi hamesha use force karti ki vo us ladki ko ek baar dekhna chahti hai..

Phir ek din ruhi ne zidd kar k use kaha ki vo us ladki ko dkhna chahti hai tou ladke ne kaha-THIK HAI SHAAM KO HUM MKT CHALENGE VO MKT GHUMNE ZARUR JATI HAI SHAAM KO...ruhi ne kaha ok..vo shaam ko mkt mein ek skop pe jaa k baith gye aur snakes khane lage..ladke ko jane kaise per hamesha se hi feel ho jata tha ki vo ladki uske paas kahiin hai..achanak uski dhadkne badhne lagi per usne ruhi se kuch nhi kaha..vo sadak pe dekhta raha vo janta tha ki vo aane wali hai..aur achanak vo uske saamne agyi...ladke k chahre pe ajib si chamak agyi usne ruhi ko bataya bhi nhi thi ki ruhi ne uski ankhe padh li aur kaha-VO HI HAI NAA...ladke ne haan mein sir hila diya..ruhi ne kaha ki vo uske paas jayegi aur usse baat akregi..per ladke ne iss baar use gusse mein manna kar diya vo kisi kimat pe nhi chahta tha ki ruhi ko koi preshaani ho...usne ruhi ko ek kaam karne ko kaha,jisse ruhi ko usse milne ka mauka bhi mil jata aur uska kaam bhi ho jata...

Chaliye dosto aage ka laut kar lihkungi apke comments ka wait rehega mujhe...bataiyega abhi tak apko kya feel hua iss shakhs k aur iski zindgi ki baare mein...
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«Reply #21 on: January 27, 2010, 09:00:47 PM »
Mujhe lagta hai ke is ladke jaise log is dunia me bohat kam hote hoge lekin hote zarur hoge...sach me yehi hai sachi mohabbat bina kuch chaahe bina kuch maange sab kuch dena...geet tum agar is ladke aur ladki ka kuch naam rakh do to bohat acha hoga plzz kuch naam do naa inhe...
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«Reply #22 on: January 27, 2010, 09:31:55 PM »
thnx pariji,mujhe khushi hui ki apko merri kahani pasand arhi hai..thik hai jaisa apne kaha main inhe naam de dungi per abhi ijazat chahungi laut kar zarur naam de dungi...
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«Reply #23 on: January 27, 2010, 10:12:24 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 27, 2010, 09:31:55 PM
thnx pariji,mujhe khushi hui ki apko merri kahani pasand arhi hai..thik hai jaisa apne kaha main inhe naam de dungi per abhi ijazat chahungi laut kar zarur naam de dungi...

ur welcome dear mujhe intezaar rahega inke naam ka aur next part ka...
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #24 on: January 28, 2010, 10:16:29 AM »
geet ji aaj padhkar to meri aankhen naam ho gai....
aesa pyar jo bahot hi khusnasib hote he unhe hi milta he par jinko milta he wo kabhi samja nahi pate he....
aap ki aage ki story ka intezar rahega......
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«Reply #25 on: January 28, 2010, 01:47:00 PM »
bahu bahut bahut shukriya dosto...chaliye ab aage badhte hai...

Dosto ab se us ladke ka naam hai AMAN aur vo ladki jisse vo beinteha pyar karta hai uska naam hai TAMANNA..RUHI aur ANGEL ko tou aap jante hi hai...

Tamanna ki mom ek beauty parlour chalati thi tou aman ne ruhi se kaha ki vo uske parlour mein jaye aur tamanna ki ek photo use laa kar de iss bahane vo usse mil bhi legi aur aman ko uski ek photo bhi mil jayegi...ruhi ne kaha thik hai...ruhi tamanna k parlour mein gyi aman bahar uska intezaar karne laga..aman ne angel ko ph kar k kaha ki ruhi tamanna k parlour mein hai tou vo wahan jake dekh le ki kuch problem naa ho...itefaq se angel parlour mein hi thi..v bahar aayi aur usne aman ko daanta..aman ne kaha ki ruhi ne zidd ki tou vo use mannaa nhi kar paya..phir angel ander chali gyi..aur aman ruhi ka intezaar karne laga...

Kuch der baad ruhi bahar aayi..usne aman se kaha ki tamanna ghar pe nhi thi..(tamanna ka parlour unke ghar mein hi tha)..aman udas ho gya aur usne ruhi se kaha ki vo dobara uske ghar nhi jayegi..ruhi ne aman se kaha-VO GHAR PE NHI THI ISKA PHIR BHI MAIN KHAALI HATH NHI AAYI HU...aman kuch smjh nhi paya...ruhi ne muskura k aman ko apna ph dikhaya..aman ne dekha ki usme tamanna ki photo thi..(ruhi ne tamanna ki ek photo ki photo khinch li thi jo parlour mein lagi thi).us photo mein tamanna ne kaale rang ki saadi peheni thi..vo use dekhta raha aur bahut khush hua..usne ruhi ko gale se laga liya aur use dil se shukriya kiya...
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«Reply #26 on: January 28, 2010, 02:56:13 PM »
Ruhi bahut khush hui aman ko khush dekhkar...usne aman se kaha ki vo use hamesha yu hi khush dekhna chahti hai...aman ne kaha ki uski muskaan tamanna mein hai..per vo janta tha ki uski tamanaa ki tamanna kabhi poori nhi ho sakti thi..bus yu hi din bitte gye.ruhi aur aman ki dosti kaafi gehri ho gyi thi vo har baat ruhi se share karne laga tha..vo log apas mein chaar dost the..ek aman tha,ruhi,ruhi ki ek dost jiska naam tha sanaa n aman's frend jihab..they were a rocking group...aman n jihad was childhood frends..they were more like brothers...n ruhi n sanaa were best frends..ruhi aur jihad mein hamesha anban rehti thi ur aman aur sanaa mein hamesha 36 ka ankda rehta tha..itne alag hone k bawjud bhi vo ek dusre se bahut pyar karte the aur jab bhi sath hote the tou har pal ko poori trh se njoy karte...

Aman kaafi khush tha ki uski zindgi mein itne ache dost hai...vo  hamesha jihad se kehta ki use ruhi jaisi dost paa kar bahut acha lagta hai,vo khud ko bahut khushnasib maanta tha...dekhte dekhte aman k janam din ka din aagya..sab ne aman k liye party rakhi thi aman ne jaane se pehle socha ki kyun naa tamanna ko ek baar yad dila de ki aaj uska janam din hai aur shayd tamanna use ek arse baad hi sahi pyar se do lafzz hi keh de...usne isi ummeed mein tamanna ko msg kiya ki aaj uska janamdin hai au vo ye din sirrf isi liye celebrate karta hai kyunki isi din vo paida hua aur aaj use tamanna jaisi ladki se pyar karne ka mauka mila...vo intezaar mein tha ki kab tamanna ka reply aaye..aur kuch hi der mein tamanna ka msg aaya..aur jaise hi aman ne msg padha tou uske hosh udd gya vo ekdum sunn hogya tha tamanna k alfazo ko padhkar...us msg mein likha tha...KAASH AAJ TUMAHRA JANADIN NHI MARANDIN HOTA..JAB SE TUM MERRI LIFE MEIN AAYE HO MERRI LIFE MEIN PARESHANIYA HI PARESHANIYA HAI..AUR HAAN AAJ K BAAD MUJHE TUMSE KUCH MATLAB NHI HAI,JIYO YA MARO...aman ne us msg ko padh kar kisi trh khud ko smjhaya aur muskurate hue use reply kar diya..TAMANNA MAIN DUA KARUNGA KI TUMHARI HAR KHUAISH POORI HO...vo party wali jgh pahucha wahan ruhi,sanaa aur jihad uska wait kar rahe the...unhone use wish kiya..phie jihad aur sanaa chale gye snacks laane...tou ruhi ne pucha-KYA HUA KYUN ITNA KHOYA KHOYA LAG RAHA HAI..aman ne use tamanna ka msg dikhaya,ruhi ki ankh bhar aayi..aman ne use smjhaya ki usme na hi tamanna ka dosh hai na hi kisi aur kaa sara kasur tou aman ka hai jisne tamanna se pyar karne ki jurrat ki...ruhi ne aman se wada liya ki kabhi bhi vo tamanna se baat nhi karega na hi msg karega na hi kisi kism ka contact karega..aman ne ruhi se wada kiya ki vo aage se kabhi tamanna ko contact nhi karega...per usne apne dil ki majburi k baare mein ruhi ko smjhaya ki chahe vo chahe na chahe jab jabhi tamanna kisi musibat mein hoti hai tou use uska abhas ho jata haia tou ruhi ne kaha ki vo use kabhi akela nhi chhodegi taaki use tamanna k kisi bhi ehsas ko mehsus karne ka waqt hi nhi milega...aman khush tha..usko phir se pyar hone laga tha..use ek rishta mil gya tha ek aesa rishta jo sirrf uske liye tha..jise vo sirrf apna keh sakta tha...sanaa aur jihad is baat se anjaan the,kyunki ruhi aur aman nhi chahte the ki unki dosti mein kisi kism ki doori ho...vo bahut khush the aman ne dhire dhire tamanna k dard se ubharna shuru kar diya...
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ehsaas chahat ka
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«Reply #27 on: January 28, 2010, 03:02:43 PM »
geet dear aur kab tak intezaar karna padehga,,,,,,,,
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #28 on: January 29, 2010, 09:57:03 AM »
bahot khub geet di..aage ki story ka intezar rahega....
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #29 on: January 29, 2010, 02:08:47 PM »
Dear geet tumne jo naam diye hai AMAN aur TAMANNA its really very nice.. Clapping Smiley
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