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«Reply #60 on: February 09, 2010, 06:34:24 AM » |
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uske boufreind NE USKE MOBAIL PAR MSG DEKHAKE PUCHA TO USNE KANHA MERI BADI BAHAN KA KOI AMAR NAAM KA FREIND HE. MAGAR WO NHI MAANA KYUNKI USKI BADI BAHAN NE HI WO MSG USSE DEKHANE KO KAHA THA. FIR USNE MUJHE DEAR KE NOMBER SE CALL KIYA. MUJHE US TIME PATA NHI THA KI YE CALL USKA HAI. MAINE ATAIN KIYA TO MUJHE LADKE KI AAWAJ AAI MAI DAR GAYA KI KANHI USKE GHAR PAR YA USKE BHAI KO TO PATA NHI CHAL GAYA. MAINE CALL KAAT DIYA FIR AAYA TO MAINE SISTER KO MOB DEDIYA MAINE KAHA AGAR KOI HO TO BAAT KAR LENA OR MERA KEHNA MAI ABHI GHAR PAR NHI HU. CALL AAYA MERI SIS NE ATAIN KIYA. USNE MUJHE BATAYA USKE BHAI KA CALL HAI OR DEAR NE (SORRY MAI USKA NAAM NHI LIKH SAKTA ISSS LIYE DEAR HI USE KAR RAHA HU) BAAT KARNE KO KANHA HAI. MAINE JAISE HI USKA NAAM SUNA MAI SAMAJH GAYA KUCH TO HUA HAI MAINE USKI KHATIR CALL KIYA KYUNKI MUJHE LAG RAHA THA KI KANHI USKE SATH KOI KUCH KAR TO NHI RAHA. KABHI HO SAKTA HAI GHAR WAALE HATH UTHALE. MAINE CALL KIYA DEAR NE UTHAYA USNE HELLO KANHA WAISE HI KISINE MOB CHIN KAR MUJH SE KEHNE LAGA AMAR MUJHE TUMSE MILNA HAI MAINE KANHA MAI ABHI GHAR PAR HU TO WO BOULA MAI TUMHARE GHAR PAR AA JAAATA HU MAINE KANHA MAI KANHI NIKALANE WAALA HU TO BOULTA HAI KI TU JANHA JAA RAHEHO WANHA BATADO MAI MILLUNGA. MAINE PUCHA BHAIYA AAPKO KYA AAAGAYA TO BOLA BAS AISE HI MILNA THA THOUDA KAAM HAI. MAINE PUCHA AAP KANHA HAI USNE MUJHE BATAYA MAINE KAHA AAP 10MIN RUKO MAI KHUD AA RAHA HU. MUJHE LAGA AAJ ISKA BHAI JHAGDA KARE USKA BADA KHARAB THA WO POLICE MAI BHI HAI OR THOUDA NETURE KA BHI ACCHA NHI THA MUJHE LAGA KANHI USNE USKE SATHIO KO BULAYA HOUGA. MAGAR BAAT JAB DEAR PAR AARAHI THI KI WO BHI USKE SATH HAI OR MAI NHI JAOUNGA TO PATA NHI KYA HO JAAYEGA. MAINE SOCH LIYA JO BHI HOUGA DEKHA JAAYEGA MAI SAB GALATI APNE UPAR LELUNGA BOLUNGA KI MEHI INHE PARESHAN KARTA THA OR MAIHI PICHE PADA THA INHOUNE KITNI BAAR MANAA KIYA. MAI SOCH KE NIKALA THA JHAGADA TO HOUGA MAGAR MAI HATH NHI UTHAUNGA. JO HOUGA DEKHA JAYEGA MAI SAB ILJAAM APNE UPAR LELUNGA YE SOCHATE SOCHATE MAI UNKE PAAS PAHUNCH GAYA. MAINE CALL KIYA TO USNE BATAYA IDHAR AAJAO MAI GAYA MAINE DEKHA TO WO USKA BHAI NHI BF THA. OR DEAR USKE PAAS KHADI THI. MAIN USSE PEHLE SE JANTA THA KYUNKI DEAR KI CHOUTI BAHAN NE MUJHE USSE DIKAHAYA THA OR SAB BATAYA BHI THA. MAI USSE MILA MAINE HATH MILLAYA KANHA KAISE HO USNE PUCHA TUM MUJHE JAANTE HO MAINE KANHA HA BOLTA DEAR KA OR MERA RISHTA KYA HAI TUMHE PATA HAI MAINE KAHA HA AAP ISSKE BF HO OR AAPNE 6 MONTH PEHLE HI SHAADI KI HAI BINA GHAR PAR BATAYE OR GHAR WAALO KO ABHI TAK PATA NHI HAI. MAINE JAISE YE KANHA DEAR MUJHE DEKHANE LAGI.KYUNKI USSE NHI PATA THA KI MUJHE SAB MAAALUM HAI,. USNE KAHA TUM ISSE MSG KARTE HO MAINE KAHA HA MAI TO SAB KO MSG KARTA HU CHOUTIWAALI KO BADIWAALI KO. BOULTA TUM KAISE PEHCHANTE HO ISSE MAINE KAHA MUJHE BADIWAALI NE MILWAAYA THA JAB MAI INKE GHAR GAYA THA. TAB WO BOLA TUM ISSE PYAR KARTE HO MAINE KANHA KAISI BAAT KAR RAHEHO YAAR JAB MAI KEH RAHA HU MUJHE PATA HAI AAPKI SHAADI HIOGAI HAI. OR SOCHANE WAALI BAAT YE HAIKI YE MUJHSE 2 SAAL BADI HAI MAI ISSE KAISE PYAR KAR SAKTA HU. FIR BOULA YE KAL TUMSE MILI THI.(KYUNKI US DIN HUM 4-5 GHANTE SATH MAI THE. OR YE BAAT USSKI BAHAN KO PATA CHAL GAI THI). MAINE MANA KAR DIYA MAINE KHA MAITO KAL SUBAH SE SHAAM TAK MERE OFFICE MAI THA CHAHO TO PAAS ME MERA OFFICE HAI CHAL KE PATAA KARLO. BOLTA MUJHE PATA CHALA HAI ISSLIYE PUCH RAHA HU. MAGAR AAGE SE DHIYAAN RAKHANA TUMHARA NATO CALL AANA CHAIYE NA MSG MAINE KAHA OK ITNE MAI MERI EK FREIND KA CALL AAGAYA SUMAN KA MAINE USSE KANHA AAP BOL RAHE HO NA MAI ISKE PICHE LAGA HU YAAR MERI TO ALLREADT GIRLFREIND HAI YE DEKHO USSKA CAAL BHI AA RAHA HAI MAI USSER HI MILNE JAA RAHA THA KI AAPKA CALL AA GAYA. FIR HUMARE BICH BAHUT SI BAATE HUE MAGAR MAINE DEAR PAR EK AANCH TAK NHI AANE DI SAB APNE UPAR DHOUL LIYA. HUMARI BAAT KAHAT HUE. WO CHALE GAYE FIR MAI BHI GHAR AAGAYA.
AAGE KAL BATAUNGA MUJHME HIMMAT NHI HOUTI EK SATH SAB LIKHANE KI BAAD MAI LIKHUNGA KYA KARU AANSU AAJAATE HAI
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«Reply #61 on: February 09, 2010, 11:52:47 PM » |
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Very sad amar ji aap ki kahani dekh kar sach me bohat dukh hua...lekin DEAR ne aisa q kiya?
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«Reply #62 on: February 10, 2010, 02:49:14 AM » |
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ooh very sad indeed ... God bless you Amar
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #63 on: February 11, 2010, 06:29:58 AM » |
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BAAT KHATAM HOUNE KE BAAD MAI GHAR AAGAYA. FIR SHAAM KO DEAR KA MISS CALL AAYA MAINE CALL KIYA TO WO BOULI TUMHE YE KABSE MALUM THA KI MERI OR UNKI SHADI HO GAI HAI MENE TO TUMHE KABHI NHI BATAYA. MAINE KAHA JAAN MUJHE YE SAB 6MOUNTH PEHLE SE PATA THA. MAI SOCHATA THA AAJ NHI TO KAL TUM MUJHE BATAOUGI YE SOCH KAR ITNA TIME BIT GAYA. MAGAR TUMNE KABHI NHI BATAYA MAI TUMSE BAS YE PUCHANA CHAHATA HUKI TUMNE MERE SATH AISA KYU KIYA BAS MUJHE YE BATADO. TO WO HANS PADI BOLI YE SAB BAATE BAAD MAI KARENGE PEHLE TUMHA SUKHARIYA AADA KARNA CHAHATI HU KYUNKI AGAR TUMHARI JAGAH OR KOI HOTA TO YAATO WO AATA HI NHI OR AGAR AA BHI JAATA TO MERI GALATI BATATA MUJHE BURA BANATA OR MUJHE WO CHOUD DETE AAJ TAK TO MAINE TUMHE YUNHI ILU KAHA MAGAR AAJ SACHE DIL SE TUMHE ILU KEHNA CHAHATI HU. MAINE KAHA AB ISKA KYA FAYADA OR TUM AISA KAISE BOL SAKTI HO. WO BOLI YE SAB MAI NHI JAANTI MERA MAN KEHRAHA HAI ISLIYE. FIR MAINE KAHA TUM BATAO TUMNE AISA MERA AAKHIR KIYA KYU TO WO USNE MUJHSE KAHA KI TUMHE YAAD HAI MAINE TUMSE 6 MONTH PEHLE PUCHA THA KI TUM MUJHASE SHADI KAROGE KYA MUJHE BATAO MAGAR TUMNE HANSI MAI BAAT UDAA DI THI WO WAQT HI AISA THA KI MUJHE FAISLA LENA THA MAI KYA KARU MAI JAANTI HU TUM MUJHE JITNA PYAR KARTE HO UTNA KOI OR MUJHSE NHI KARSAKTA YANHA TAK MERA BF BHI MUJHSE ITNA PYAR NHI KARTA MAI KHUSKISMAT HU KI MUJHE TUM JAISA CHAHANE WAALA MILL MAGAR TUMHE SAMAJHANE MAI MUJHE DER HO GAI OR BAAKI TUM JAANTE HO OU WAQT BHI JAB MAI SHAADI KAR RAHI THI WO FAISLA ENA BHI MERE LIYE MUSKIL THA MAI TUMHE KAISE BATAU WO FAISLAA MAINE KAISE LIYA. MAINE KAHA TUM ABHI BHI JGHUT BOL RAHI HO TUM 6MONTH KI BAAT KAR RAHI HO MUJHE TO YE TAK PATA HAI KI JIS DIN TUM MUJHSE PEHLI BAAR MILI THI USS DIN BHI TUM USSI SE MILKE AA RAHI THI. OR RAHI BAAT SHAADI KI TO JAAN JAB TUM SHAADI KARNE JAA RAHI THI TABHI MUJHE PATA CHAL GAYA THA. MAGAR AFSOUS ISS BAAT KA HAI KI TUMNE APNI JINDAGI KA ITNA BADA FAISLA AKELE HI KAR LIYA MUJHE BATATI TO SAHI MAI KYA TUMHE MANA KARTA MAI KHUD TUMHARI SHAADI TUMHARE BF SE KARWATA OR TO OR GAWAH MAI BANTA YAAR MUJHE USS WAQT KHUSHI HOTI KI MERA PYAR APNE PYAR KO PAA RAHA HAI KYUNKI MAI TUMHE KHUSH DEKHANA CHAHATA THA BAS TU KHUSH RAHO OR KUCH NHI CHAHE TUM MERE SATH RAHO YA NA RAHO BAS KHUSH RAHO MAGAR TUMNE AIS AKUCH NHI KIYA BALKI AAJ BHI JAB SAB SAMNE AACHUKA HAI TAB BHI TUM MUJASHE JHUT BOL RAHI HO. KABHI KAHA TO HOUTA AKHIR MERE PYAR MAI KYA KAMI REHGAI YE TO MAI TUMSE PUCH BHI NHI SAKTA KYUNKI SHAYAD TUMNE MUJHASE KABHI PYAR KIYA HI NHI. TAB WO BOLI AISI BAAT NHI HAI MAI TUMHE KAISE BATAU KUCH SAMAJAH NHI AA RAHA HAI MUJHE PATA HAI TUM MUJHASE KITNA PYAR KARTE HO OR AAJ KE BAAD TO TUM MERE LIYE OR KHAS HO GAYE HO.
MAI BAAD MAI LIKHUNGA SAMJHA KRO DIL BHAR AATA HAI YAAR JAB USKI BAATE LIKHO TO MAGAR AB SHURU KIYA HAI TO PURI KARKE HI RAHUNGA.
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«Reply #64 on: February 12, 2010, 05:37:26 PM » |
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Kya kahu bbl ji.....sach mein...mujhe samajh nahi aa rha ki mai kya reaction du....aankhe nam hai aur labon par bhi muskurahat hai....kha milte hai aaj ki duniya mein Aman jaise insaan...jo bade se bade tufan ko bhi jhel jaate hai....
Aman ek prerna hai hamare liye.....mai dil se dua karti hu Aman k liye.....
usse uska saccha pyar jarur milega....
bahut bahut shukriya bbl ji.....thanx a million.....
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«Reply #65 on: February 12, 2010, 05:40:30 PM » |
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thnx alot pooja ji..apne apna waqt merri kahani ko diya...apke views iss kahani k liye aur aman k liye bahut mayine rakhte hai...tahe dil se shukriya merre har dost ka...
amar ji apki kahani main abhi padh nhi paa rhi waqt ki kami ki wajah se per padh k zarur reply karungi...
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«Reply #66 on: February 15, 2010, 02:02:49 PM » |
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jab usne mujhse aisa kha tab maine kaha ab tum mujhase ye sab kyu keh rahi ho jaan tumne ek baar to bataya houta kya tumko mujh par bharousa nhi tha kya mai tumhare faisale mai sath nhi deta tab wo bouli mai tumhara dil dukhana nhi chahati thi mujhe malum hai tumhe kitana dard hota. maine kaha kya ab kam ho raha hai nhi balki ab to dard bhi apni had paar kar chuka hai yaar mujhe ye batao jab tumhe aisa karana tha yaani tumhare bf se shaadi karni thi to tumne mujhe dhoukhe mai kyu rakha jab hum mile the tab tumne mujh bataya kyu nhi. ab jab 3 saal beet gaye tab tumhe lag raha hai ki tumse galati ho gai koiapni jaan se jaaaraha hai kisi ki jindagi ko tumne kis moud par laakar kahada kiya hai kuch pata hai tumhe. tab wo boli uske liye mai sorryu boul to rahi hu or kya karu ab tum batao tumkaho to mai tumse shaadi karlu. maine kanha kya tum wakai chahati ho mujhse shaadi karana tab wo bolli mai to sirf tumhari khushi ke liye ye sab karne ko keh rahighu. mene kaha iska matlab tum khus nhi ho are yaaar yahi to tumse galati ho gai tum mujhe samajh hi nhi paai tumhe pata hai meri khushi to tumse juddi hai mai tumhe khush dekhana chahata tha or chahata hu agar aisa nhi houta to jab mujhe tumhari shaadi ka pata chal gaya tha tabhi mai tumhare bf ko bata deta ya fir jab jab hum ghumne gaye tab use bhi wanhi bulakar dikha deta. yaar magar mai tumhare jaisa nhi hu ki kisika dil dukhao agar mai aisa karta to wo tumse kab ka rishta khatam kar deta. or tumhara dil tut jaata magar jaan amar ne humesha dil joudna sikha hai toudnaa nhi. aaj tak maine bhule se bhi kisi ka dil nhi dukhaya na kisi ke dilko thes pahuchai hai. magar us khuda ko pata nhi kya manjur tha jo usne mere sath aisa kiya. tab wo boulli unka call aaraha hai apan baat mai baat karte hai.
or call discounect kar diya ......................
baad mai kya hua jarur bataunga
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«Reply #67 on: February 15, 2010, 04:05:13 PM » |
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mujhe baat poori hone ka intezar hai amar ji....
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #68 on: February 15, 2010, 04:22:45 PM » |
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mai jarur puri karunga mai kabhi kuch adhura nhi choudata
kyunki kehte hai baat ho yaa jakham kabhi adhure nhi choudnaa chaiye warna nasure ho jaate hai
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«Reply #69 on: February 15, 2010, 05:20:31 PM » |
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k ji...
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«Reply #70 on: February 27, 2010, 07:19:06 AM » |
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bohat khoob ji....i like ur style to write a story...goood
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«Reply #71 on: February 27, 2010, 10:00:08 AM » |
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«Reply #72 on: February 27, 2010, 09:53:08 PM » |
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thnx fairy ji..
madhu ji thnx alot for reading my story..aap sahi kehte ho ab aman k liye kisi k pyar pe wishwas karna bahut hi mushkil hai...
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«Reply #73 on: May 26, 2010, 05:11:32 AM » |
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BBL ji aap nay toe bohout hi achi story likhi hai.. aap nay toe hume apni STORY yaad dila di VERY NICE STORY bohout hi khoob I LIKE IT  |
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«Reply #74 on: May 27, 2010, 10:47:03 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya sky ji...
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on eTI community..
