Mera naam "K@HIN@@R" kyo rkha gya....? A story.. -Panna 5:General Stories

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«Reply #60 on: February 05, 2012, 09:54:25 AM »

kohinoor ji ...

sach me padhte padhte aankhon me aansoo aa gaye... tearyeyed


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Re: Mera naam "K@HIN@@R" kyo rkha gya....? A story..

«Reply #61 on: February 05, 2012, 09:55:32 AM »

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Gujarte dino k sath mai KOHINOOR ko bhooli nhi thi...mai jaanti thi ki wo b mujhe bahut shiddat se yaad krti hogi...
1 saal gujar gya tb jakar KOHINOOR ne mujhe call kia...
Aawaaj me whi purani khilkhilahat aur apne lehje me sokhiyaan smete wo mujhse pooch rhi thi...
"...MUJHE PEHCHANA ANSHU..?"
...Aur mai to ye aawaaj lakhon kh bheed me b pehchaan skti thi...
Uske lehje ki sokhi ne mujhe chauka dia tha mgar mai ye soch k khus thi ki sayad usne SHAJARF JI ko bhula dia...
...ab hm aksar baten krte they...jane kyo ab wo jarurat se jada hi khush rehne lgi thi...meri aam si baton me b hsne ka bahana dhoondh kr bahut der tk hsa krti thi.
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""...AUR MAI YE KBHI NHI MEHSOOS KAR PAI KI MERI PYARI DOST K KEHKAHON ME KITNA KHOKHLAPAN THA...""


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Kohinoor

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«Reply #62 on: February 05, 2012, 10:10:34 AM »

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After 4 years.....
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27,DECEMBER,2006
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Whi tareekh...whi mahina...aur utni hi sardi,,,jitni aaj se 5 saal pehle thi...!!
Subah k 6:00 bj rhe the...mai apne bister pe aankhen bnd kiye purane dino'n ki yadon me khoi hui thi...ki
achanak mera mobile bjta hai...
KOHINOOR ki call aa rhi thi...mai call receive krke boli,"NOOR, itni subah subah kyo yaad kia mujhe? Koi jroori kaam hai kya?"
mgar KOHINOOR ki bjaye uski mummy ki aawaj speaker me goonjti hai...
"...BETA...HMARI NOOR AB IS DUNIA ME NHI RHI...!! USE BRAIN HAMARAGE HUA THA AUR WO....."
Uski mummy aur b na jane kya kya keh rhi thi'n mgar mere kaan sunn ho chuke they...
Mujhe aisa lga ki jaise mere sar pe kisi ne bomb phoda ho...!!
Abhi 4 din pehle hi to meri baat hui thi usse...aur ab achanak hi....


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Re: Mera naam "K@HIN@@R" kyo rkha gya....? A story..

«Reply #63 on: February 05, 2012, 10:19:50 AM »

ye kya..??


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«Reply #64 on: February 05, 2012, 10:24:48 AM »

is baar year galat daal diya hai..sahi kar do..

quite surprising? Brain H..at this age..

anyway continue..


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«Reply #65 on: February 05, 2012, 10:35:32 AM »

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""".....KB KHWAHISHON K KAANTO'N ME JINDGI KA AANCHAL ULAJH JATA HAI KHABAR HI NHI HOTI...
AUR KB SHAJISHEN UN KHWAHISHON KA PICHA KRTI HUI DILO'N KI DUNIA TABAAH KR DETI HAIN ,,JINDGI KO EHSAAS HI NHI HOTA...
KHABAR HOTI BHI HAI TO KB...JB JAJBAATO'N K SMANDAR ME UTHNE WALA TUFAAN INSAAN KO KUCH SMAJHNE KA MAUKA HI NHI DETA...
FIR DHIRE-DHIRE YE SARI SHAJISHEN ,,TMAAM KHWAHISHO'N KA PICHA CHORKR KISI AUR TARAF CHALI JATI HAIN...
NAKAAM KHWAHISHEN APNI VIRANI,,APNI TBAHI PR AANSU BAHATI REH JATI HAIN LEKIN....
PALAT K DEKHNE KI FURSAT KISI KO NHI HOTI....."""
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....aaj maine 5 saal baad KOHINOOR k kmre me kadam rkha hai...
Ye whi kamra hai jahaa'n hmne na jane kitna wqt sath-sath bitaya hai...
Saamne ki divaar pr usi ldki ki tsveer lgi hai jiske dm se kbhi raunake'n bikharti thi'n...
Wo ldki,,,
Jo hsti to yun lgta ki jaise shishe ki mej pr dher sari kaanch ki chudiyaa'n girkr bj uthi ho'n...
wo ldki,,,jiske hr andaaz me jindadili ka ehsaas hota tha...
Whi,,, jiska naam bachpan me 'KOHINOOR' rkha gya tha....isliye ki uski jindgi me kbhi andhera na aane paye....
...aaj wo bahut ghane andhero'n me gum ho chuki hai...
Apne hosh-o-hwaash se to wo na jane kbka bekhabar ho chuki thi...mgar aaj usne jindgi se bhi apna daman bahut chupke se chuda liya...!!
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....ye diary mujhe wahaa'n mili jahaa'n kbhi hm cricketers ki photos chupaya krte they...
Aur ab
...jbki maine is diary ka aakhiri panna plta hai to is pr faqat itna hi likha hai ki..,,,
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""...MERA NAAM KOHINOOR KYO RKHA GYA...??
SAYAD ISLIYE KI...........""
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~~~~THE END~~~~


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mkv

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«Reply #66 on: February 05, 2012, 10:50:43 AM »

Vaah Noor
outstanding story...
good theme..
excellent style of presentation..what a talent.
lot of efforts...appreciable..
unique..suspenseful..DRAMATIC end

Paisa Vasool.. Applause

(taught me many things) thanks
salute ur devotion..


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«Reply #67 on: February 05, 2012, 10:57:26 AM »

Quote from: mkv on February 05, 2012, 10:50:43 AM

Vaah Noor
outstanding story...
good theme..
excellent style of presentation..what a talent.
lot of efforts...appreciable..
unique..suspenseful..DRAMATIC end

Paisa Vasool.. Applause

(taught me many things) thanks
salute ur devotion..

thanks mkv ji!!
Sara credit aapko jata hai.!
Agar aapne support na kia hota to sayad mai ye kahani post hi nhi krti..!
Thanks again.


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«Reply #68 on: February 05, 2012, 11:04:15 AM »

Quote from: Kohinoor on February 05, 2012, 10:57:26 AM

thanks mkv ji!!
Sara credit aapko jata hai.!
Agar aapne support na kia hota to sayad mai ye kahani post hi nhi krti..!
Thanks again.

it's ur generosity.
i've already mentioned ur extra ordinary/inherent talent. just preserve & use it.


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Re: Mera naam "K@HIN@@R" kyo rkha gya....? A story..

«Reply #69 on: February 05, 2012, 11:05:22 AM »

wow..!! amazing.. n touchy.. superb..

itna hi keh paunga...

nice story...... tearyeyed


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«Reply #70 on: February 05, 2012, 11:19:24 AM »

ufffff!!!!! pehli Baar Aisa Kuch padhne Ko Mila Hai Yoindia mein..Kohinoor Ji...Aapki lekhni, Aapki Kahaani Mein bahut Dard Hai. Sach kahoon To maine Shukar Manaya Apne Rabb Ka Ke yeh Sirf Ek Kahani Hai Koi Haqeeqat Nahi..Par Itna dard Aakhir Kyon Inn Lafzon Mein..Jo Aap beeti nahi par Aap Beeti Jaise Lagti Hai???

Kahani Ke Saath-Saath Aapki Sher-O-Shayari Aur Kuch Khaas Lafz Jaise Aapne Ek Sentence kaha Tha...........

"Mera Maana Hai Ki Jo Cheez Humari Hai Woh Khokar Bhi Mil Jaayegi..Magar Jo Humare Liye nahi Hai Usse Milkar Bhi Kho Jaana Hai..Ek Baar Bas Ek Baar Mujhe Yeh pata Chal Jaaye Ke Aap Khokar Kabhi Miloge Yaa Kho jaane Ke Liye Mile The..

Bahut Hi Gehrai Hai Inn Lafzon mein...Aapse Meri Guzaarish Hai Ke Yuhi Likhte Rahiyega...


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«Reply #71 on: February 05, 2012, 01:07:08 PM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on February 05, 2012, 11:05:22 AM

wow..!! amazing.. n touchy.. superb..

itna hi keh paunga...

nice story...... tearyeyed

aapne pdha aur comment dia...
Mujhe bahut accha lga.
Shukriya MT.


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«Reply #72 on: February 05, 2012, 01:15:00 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 05, 2012, 11:19:24 AM

KHWAHIS JI...aaj aapne pehli baar mere kisi post pe comment dia hai....wo b itni tareefon k sath.
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Bahut bahut bahut shukriya...


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«Reply #73 on: February 08, 2012, 05:49:15 AM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on February 04, 2012, 05:36:09 PM

panna dhund rahi ho ya unn pannon mein apni zindagi dhoondh rahi h aap.......
aage ki kahani likhne k liye diary k panne ki zarurat ho aapko...aisa lagta nahi h...hum sab intzaar kar rahe hai...likh dijiye wo sab jo iss waqt aapke dil-o-dimag mein hai...likh dijiye Usual Smile

NIKHAAR JI
ab to aap jaan gai hongi ki ye sacchi story nhi thi...


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«Reply #74 on: February 08, 2012, 06:33:30 AM »

I have no words to describe how good this story was. Kya baat hai. Aisi story aj tak zindagi main kabhi read nahi ki.

Thank you much for sharing this with us. What a great talent you are. Usual Smile


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