No one is a perfect person,Until you fall in love with them.

by TOUCHY on August 22, 2005, 05:35:23 PM
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No one is a perfect person,
Until you fall in love with them.
From that very day
Come what may

You would die to see them
Cry if you don’t
Long to hear their voice
Each single breath you would note

You would have wonderful times
Thinking, “where have you been all my life”?
The love you would share
Would be one that’s rare

Precious and strong
Hoping it would last forever long
Through all the happiness
Time would quickly fly by,
Then one day
He would say goodbye,
He is no longer by your side.

He would have gone away
Why? Why? You would say
You would try to bring him back
Make a fool of yourself, anything as long as it helped,

Awake in the night
Asleep in the day
You will go crazy,
Think you were insane

You would still talk
Try to remain as friends
But the pain you both feel
No one can comprehend

He left not cause he wanted to
It was something he was forced to do
Some one would mean more to him
More than you do

But still you will love him
And you would tell him so
You will find it extremely hard
To admit you have to let him go.

He would not find it easy to see you in such pain,
But he would not admit to you that he feels the same
His heart still loves you
Just like you do
In his heart, there is nothing but rain
You don’t see the tears in his eyes
But you know he is crying from in side.

Then you would try to get back to the life
The one you lived before
But it would have become so empty
You would want more

You would want him back so badly
Everything else you would ignore,
Until you try to wake up to yourself
Putting back your heart that has become a melt.

You would try to be strong
Each day would slowly p*ss along
You would then try to hate him
Or not love him anymore,
But this is something impossible
You would end up loving him more.

By then your past has caught up with you
Try to avoid all circ*mstances you try to do
Hoping that one of these days
He would come back to you!

But meanwhile you are being stupid
The only fool is you
You would not even realize, what has become of you,
Until he himself asks you
“hey, whats up with you”?

You cannot tell him
Cause he is asking cause he cares
Break his heart, you would not dare
So he is left thinking the worst of you
Don’t blame him, what else could he do?

He keeps on singing the same song.
Hey darling what is wrong?
You still cannot tell him
Cause in your eyes you have commited a sin.

Yes, you would know you are no longer together
But you promised to love eachother forever
No words come out when opening your mouth
When really, all you want to do is shout!

Meanwhile his own conclusions
He is gathering in his head,
He would even think
That with someone else you have gone to bed

The thought of this hurts you
As you confirm that he doesn’t know you
About your character he has proved
Not to have a single clue.

If you do finally tell him
What in your eyes you did wrong
He would probably feel relieved
Better than thinking, he has been deceived.

He probably wont see it as
Something bad that you have done
But you don’t want him to think,
You did it just for fun.

Then you would say to yourself
How come you both still care
Is it something that’s over
Or is the love still there?

He shows you he is worried,
For your actions you feel sorry
You don’t ever want to hurt eachother
For the love you hold for one another
Is one that’s strong
And although you are not together
It will definitely last forever long.

In reality, the only sin you would have commited
Was one of loving him forever more
He can never be just an ordinary person
As he is a guy you adore

Before making any decisions
He would be in your head
You would even think of him
When you are lying in bed

No matter how hard you try
This special guy you can’t erase
He can never be replaced.
Continuously trying to do so
All your time you would waste
As he holds the only spark in your heart
It has been alight right from the very start!
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2005, 11:15:00 PM »
Finally........so long.....but i must say it was worth reading....good job!!!
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Suhas
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2005, 05:16:17 AM »
No one is a perfect person,
Until you fall in love with them.

100% true.....................:thumb:
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rajagrawal
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2005, 03:16:16 PM »
TOUCHY ...... ek ek line mein mannoo 100% sacchaye hai....
kya yeh bata sakoge ke aage kaa anjam kya hoga?

Aap ne iske ending nahi ke.......plz.....
waiting 4 endingssssssssssssssss..........



Quote from: "TOUCHY"
No one is a perfect person,
Until you fall in love with them.

It has been alight right from the very start!
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TOUCHY
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2005, 05:19:02 PM »
thank u so much Isha ji , Suhas Ji n Rajagarwal.............
raj soon u will se more abt dis just wait till then n once again THanx for ur Support n appriciation.
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rajagrawal
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2005, 08:55:21 PM »
Yes, I will wait.....Qayamat taak.....but jayada deer na lagana.....plz....

Quote from: "TOUCHY"
thank you so much Isha ji , Suhas Ji n Rajagarwal.............
raj soon you will se more abt dis just wait till then n once again THanx for ur Support n appriciation.
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TOUCHY
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2005, 06:21:57 AM »
Quote from: "rajagrawal"
Yes, I will wait.....Qayamat taak.....but jayada deer na lagana.....plz....

Quote from: "TOUCHY"
thank you so much Isha ji , Suhas Ji n Rajagarwal.............
raj soon you will se more abt dis just wait till then n once again THanx for ur Support n appriciation.


Thanx for  ur support n anticipation!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2009, 02:32:53 AM »
Wow ,sooooooooooooo good ,lovely and mindblowing creation Touchy ji.hats off to you. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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diya_barsat
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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2010, 01:34:15 AM »
Wow that was amazing.
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