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by anjaansaya on November 22, 2008, 07:48:20 AM
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Hi Friends,
           Mein Aapko CHoti Si Story Sunata Hu Jiske Qst. Ka Ans. Plz Mujhe Jaroor Dena Kyonki Mein Ans. Ki Talash Kar Raha hu Lekin Abhi Tak Mujhe Sahi Jawab Nahi Mila Hai..!

Ek Sipahi Tha Jisko Mahal Ki Rajkumari Se Pyar Ho Gaya,
Lekin Rajkumari Ko Uske Pyar Par Vishwas Nahi Tha,
Aur Wo Sipahi Ke Pyar Ko Ignore Karne Lagi,
Fir Ek Din Sipahi Ne Rajkumari Se Kaha Ki ,
Aapko Mere Pyar Par Yakeen Nahi Hai ,
Isliye Aapko Yakeen Dilane Ke Liye,
Mein Mahal Ke Samne Pure 100 Din Bina Kuch Khaye-Piye Khada Rahunga,
Chahe Kaisa Hi Mausam Kyu Na Ho..!
Is Tarah Wah Apni Baat Kah Kar Ke Mahal Ke Gate Ke Bahar Ja Kar ke Khada Ho Gaya,
1 Din Bit Gaya....

10 Din Bit Gaye....

20 Din Bit Gaye....

50 Din Bit Gaye....

Sipahi Apni Jagah Se Nahi Hata..

Dheere-Dheere 75 Din Bit Gaye...

90 Din Bit Gaye...

Lekin Rajkumari Uske Paas Na Aayi...

99 Din Bit Gaye ...

Agle Din Rajkumari Ne Subah Ja Kar Dekha To Sipahi Apni Jagah par Nahi tha...

Plz mujhe Jawab Bataiye Ki Sipahi Waha Se Chala Kyu Gaya..?

Wo Waha Par Ruka Kyo Nahi..?

I Am Waiting Your Answer........

Thank's
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2008, 07:57:16 AM »
sipahi se direct jaa ke puch lo...yaar...fokat me tension nai lene ka re
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2008, 08:08:27 AM »
SIPAHI ISS LIYE CHALA GAYA,

KYUNKI USE EHSAAS HO GAYA THA KI RAJKUMARI NAHI
AAYEGI, PAR WO RAJKUMARI KE BEWAFA HONE KA GAMM NAHI
JHEL SAKTA THA, ISS LIYE WO KHUD EK DIN PEHLE CHALA
GAYA,TAAKI ZINDAGI ME JAB BHI WO RAJKUMARI KE BAARE
ME SOCHEGA TO USE YE MEHSOOS HOGA KI GALTI USKI HAI
AGAR WO EK DIN AUR RUKK JAATA TO SHAYAD RAJKUMARI
AA JAATI....

THIS IS TRUE LOVE

K.SHAEL (SHALLY)
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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2008, 03:47:03 PM »
hmmm great answer k.shael jee...yea thats tru love...however my opinion is kind of different...i think he left that place coz he had made it in his mind dat she wouldnt cum....he was impatient and probably couldnt last his word of 100 days...i feel i cn blame him that he dint love her rili coz love is trust and word based...wat u say is wat u do hence coz he dint stand his word and he realised dat she wuldnt fall for him...he left which means he dint rili love her...sowwie if anyone doesn't agree wid my opinion...sowwie
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2008, 01:10:02 PM »
kya khoobsurat answer diya hey K. sheel ji aapney.
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: November 24, 2008, 11:15:01 PM »
yah story maine fwd e-mail main parrihai.. shally ka jawab bilkul sahi hai... yahi karan tha ki wo sipahi chala gaya!!!
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pankshivam
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2008, 02:06:03 AM »
Hi Friends,
           Mein Aapko CHoti Si Story Sunata Hu Jiske Qst. Ka Ans. Plz Mujhe Jaroor Dena Kyonki Mein Ans. Ki Talash Kar Raha hu Lekin Abhi Tak Mujhe Sahi Jawab Nahi Mila Hai..!

Ek Sipahi Tha Jisko Mahal Ki Rajkumari Se Pyar Ho Gaya,
Lekin Rajkumari Ko Uske Pyar Par Vishwas Nahi Tha,
Aur Wo Sipahi Ke Pyar Ko Ignore Karne Lagi,
Fir Ek Din Sipahi Ne Rajkumari Se Kaha Ki ,
Aapko Mere Pyar Par Yakeen Nahi Hai ,
Isliye Aapko Yakeen Dilane Ke Liye,
Mein Mahal Ke Samne Pure 100 Din Bina Kuch Khaye-Piye Khada Rahunga,
Chahe Kaisa Hi Mausam Kyu Na Ho..!
Is Tarah Wah Apni Baat Kah Kar Ke Mahal Ke Gate Ke Bahar Ja Kar ke Khada Ho Gaya,
1 Din Bit Gaya....

10 Din Bit Gaye....

20 Din Bit Gaye....

50 Din Bit Gaye....

Sipahi Apni Jagah Se Nahi Hata..

Dheere-Dheere 75 Din Bit Gaye...

90 Din Bit Gaye...

Lekin Rajkumari Uske Paas Na Aayi...

99 Din Bit Gaye ...

Agle Din Rajkumari Ne Subah Ja Kar Dekha To Sipahi Apni Jagah par Nahi tha...

Plz mujhe Jawab Bataiye Ki Sipahi Waha Se Chala Kyu Gaya..?

Wo Waha Par Ruka Kyo Nahi..?

I Am Waiting Your Answer........

Thank's

sorry frnds mai aapki bato ke agree nahi hun,

mai pyar ke bare e kitna janta hun ye to pata nahi magar sachha pyar nahi dekha maine in lines me...

sipahi ka pyar agar sachha hota to uss subah tak uska intejar karta...
uski bavafayi ke darkar chala gaya ye sahi nahi...
agar 99 dino tak ummid thi thi to ek din me uski sari ummid kaise khatam ho gayi...
isliye sorry magar meri nazar me ye pyar nahi sirf ek jasba tha rajkumari ko pane ka aur kuch nahi...
aur rajkumari ko kitna pyar tha ye to isi baat se samjh aata hai ke usne 99 din ek insan ko tavajjo nahi di aur aakhiri den uski halat dekhne gayi...

chand lines kahna chahunga

"Pyar vo nahi jo bevafayi se darta hai,
Pyar vo hai jo sirf pyar karta hai...

Dikhayi deti hai har waqt sirf tasveer yaar ki,
Kat jati hai ki uski Ummid me har ghadi intezar ki...

Aaisa nahi ke Dard ka mausam nahi aata hai ,
Agar pyaar sachha ho to Has kar har gam seh jata hai..."



Sipahi kis pyar me tha jo aakhiri din bhag gaya...
Baki din kya nind me tha jo 99ve din jag gaya...

Galtiyo ke liye Maf kijiyega

Maine jaisa socha Vaisa kah diya
Ye sirf mera khayal tha isliye agar bura lage toh maff kar dijiyega
~Pank~
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dead heart
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2008, 08:13:35 PM »
hmmm i also said the same thing...i also think it wasnt tru love...he jst wanted the "rajkumari" and wen she neva came for 99 days that dude disappeared...
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: November 25, 2008, 08:32:07 PM »
nice reply pank... her kisi ki apni soch hai. apne apni soch ko bahoot ache tarike se pesh kiya hai!!
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dead heart
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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2008, 08:57:28 PM »
ohh yes well said pank...u have a rite to express wat u feel and ther is no need to ask for forgivenes...
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