Pyaaar...........ek balidaan

HI FRNZZ..........NAMASKAAR
I AM anjali.........AND ITS MAH FIRST STORY ON YOINDIA.ITS A NICE FORUM FOR YOUNG READER AND WRITER.ITS STORY ABOUT LOVE,CARE,FRIENDSHIP AND SACRIFICE.ITS A FICTION BUT MANY POINT AND LINKEDSTORIES ARE REAL.







............bhagwan ke liye meri baat to suno ragini.yuvak buri tarah larkhara raha tha aur aansuo me duba hua tha.magar logo ne uski ek na suni aur use uthakar stairs se niche fek diyaa.voh yuvak rone laga aur kaanpne laga aur ek baar phir gidgidane laga.....bhagwan ke liye ragini....please meri ek baar to suno.
Ek moti aurat us par chilaate hue"roj roj aa jata hai meri gaahki kharab karne".abdul,salim.....ise utha kar bahar fek do.aur wo do mustande us yuvak ko uthakar bahar fek dete hai.vo yuvak sarak par girta hai........aur ragini,ragini chillate hue idhar udhar bhagne lagta hai.niche charo taraf log use dekh rahhe hai........ek dukaandaar ek aadmi ko batati hai......kabhi ye yuvak har kothe par hatho hath liya jata tha.......lekin aaj....bechara abaga kothe ki gandi galiyo me sacchi mohabbat dudhne chala hai....bechara.
Bechara yuvak chillata hua edhar udhar bhagta hai.......ragini,kahan to tum.please mujhse baat karo ragini.tabhi acchanak ek BMW uske saamne aa jati hai aur uske ankho ke aage andhera cha jata hai.Aur ek ladki ki awaj  sunai deti hai"dekh ke nahi chal sakta pagal aadmi,sharabi kahin ka........aur wo niche utar kar aati hai.

Are Atul babu aap..........ye aapko kya ho gya.us ladki ke tewar badal jate hai.aur wo atul ko apne bahon me sahara dekar uthati hai aur car ke pichle seet par lita kar darwaja band kar deti hai.aur car start karke drive karne lagti hai.Thodi der drive karne ke baad car ek apartment ke saamne rukti hai......aur wo gaurd ko bulati hai aur sahara dekar atul ko uthakar le jati hai.GAurd atul ko dekhkar kehta hai.......mam,aap kaun ho.Ye to roj aise hi nashe ki haalat me aate hai raat ko.........phir wo atul ko sahara dekar uske flat me le jate hai.lekin flat pehle se khula hota hai.Ladki hairaan ho jati hai andar dekhkar...........uska dil joro se dhadkane lagta hai.vo sochti hai ki turant vahan se chali jaye.Lekin atul ki haalat dekhkar uska dil use izzazat nahi deta.WO flat ke andar jati hai.Vahan ek aadmi baitha hota hai jo ladki ko dekhkar chauk jata hai,aur usse bolta hai....shayad maine tumhe kahin dekha hai.

Ladki ki iccha hoti hai.Ki wo vahan se bhaag jaye aur uski aankho me aasu aa jate hai.....haan, aap mujhe jaante hai,mera naam JULIA hai.......us aadmi ke gusse ki koi seema nahi rahti......aur wo julia ko do thappad marta hai aur niche gira deta hai.Julia ke sar se halka sa khoon aa jata hai lekin uski ankho me aansu nahi aate.Vo aadmi chhilata hai......bhag ja chudial,tune mera jeevan barbaad kar diya.......tune meri chandni ko mujhse cheen liya aur uski aankhein gusse se lal ho jati hai.
Julia hath jodkar uske kadmo me gir jati hai aur rone lagti hai...........ab mai badal gayi hu suraj babu,bhagwaan ne mujhe bhut saza di.Mere apno ne mujhe barbaad kar diyaa.......please suraj babu,ab mai pehle vahi julia nahi hu.Suraj ka gussa thoda sa bhi kam nahi hota.........aur wo bolta hai,agar tumne hamare atul ko na bachaya hota.......to mai turant tumhari gardan tod deta.
julia roti rahti hai........aur acchanak se apna top phad deti hai aur uski puri peeth nagn ho jati hai..........suraj dekhta hai,uski peeth par kaale kaale nishan pad pad gaye hai aur lothde ajjeb se nazar aa rahe hai.ab suraj ka gussa halka sa shant hota hai.Julia roti rehti hai aur batati hai.......maine wo sab chodd diya,ab mai cabre dancer nahi hu.jinka maine sath diya tha unhi kamino ne mera ye haal kiya.Jab hum us din tumhari bacchi ko chura na sake aur jaan bachakar bhag nikle............tabhi jagga ko police ne pakad liyaa aur thane le gayi........jaaga ko shak hua ki maine police ki mukhbiri ki hai aur usne mere upar TEJAB fikwa diyaa.........bhagwaan ki daya se mera chehra to bach gaya lekin aur pura jism ................itna kehkar julia fafak fafak kar rone lagti hai.suraj use sahara dekar uthta hai aur kehta hai...........chahe kuch ho jaye,tum meri nazaro me hamesha gunahgaar rahogi,bhagwaan ne tumhe tumhare kiye ki saza de di hai.lekin mai tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta.
Suraj julia se puchta hai......jagga ka kya hua
Wo jel me hai........aur maine apni bachi sampatti se ek kapde ki ghate me chal rahi company kharid li.wo company aajkal accha chal rahi hai.....aur mai export ka bussiness karti hu.....aur din raat bhagwaan se prayer karti hu.....ki wo vo mere gunaho ke liye mujhe maaf kare.Itna kahte kahte julia ki ankhein nam ho jati hai aur wo phir se rone lagti hai.suraj usse vahan se chale jane ko bolta hai......aur julia rote rote vahan se chali jati hai.

FRENZzz.......kaise lagi mei story ki suruwaat.yeh ek lambi kahani hai aur  kuch bhut acchi love,emotion aur dosti ki batein.ITS my first story ......please response me,jis se mai aage continious kar saku.......

Thxxxx for compliment...........

Julia ke chale jaane ke baad suraj baithkar sochta rehta hai.Subah jab atul ki ankhein khulti hai hai to woh suraj ko saamne baitha hua pata hai.
Atul: aap kab aaye suraj bhai.......
Suraj use coffie ka cup dete hue bolta hai bas samjah lo,jab tum uthe tabhi mai aa gaya.......vaise mai kal raat ko aaya tha.Atul last night ke bare me sochne lagta hai,use yaad aata hai ki wo road par gir pada tha aur uska accident ho gaya tha aur ek ladki ne uski jaan bachai thi aur use uthakar ghar tak laayi thi.....
Suraj: sasur ji apni akhiri saanse gin rahe hai aur din raat aapko yaad karte rahte hai.unka aapse koi gila sikwa nahi hai.aap unse chal kar ek baar mil kyun nahi lete......
Atul:mere paas itni himmat nahi hai ki mai us devta tulya aadmi ka saamna kar saku.mai nahi jaa sakta .......mai unki beti ka gunahgaar hu.mere karan us bhale vyakti ko na jane kaise kaise din dekhne pade......mai unka saamna nahi kar sakta..
Suraj samjha samjha kar aakhir haar maan leta hai aur use paiso ka ek packet dekar gaun chala jata hai....
Atul apne purane din ko yaad karne lagta hai.kitni haseen zindgi thi uski.........ragini use kitna chahti thi.usne us bichari ke sath itna bura kyun kiyaa.atul khud ko ragini ki maut ka jimmedaar maanta tha...

Ragini apne papa ki laadli beti thi.Seth bhagwaan das ka unke gaun me bhut naam tha.wo bhut bhale aadmi the.lagataar mehnat ne unhe ilaake ka sabse ameer aadmi bana diyaa tha aur unke acche vyavhaar aur insaniyat ne unhe gaun me pujya bana diya tha.kitna hasta khelta pariwaar tha unka.ragini,uski choti bahen chandni aur ek god liya hua beta suraj.Suraj gaun ka ek aanath ladka tha jise bhagwaan das ne sahara diya tha............ragini ki ma unhe bachpan me hi chodkar chali gayi thi.ragini sahar me rahkar higher education ki study kar rahi thi aur apne gaun bhut hi kam jaati thi.uske pita ko hamesha uski yaad satati rahti thi.........is beech ragini ke relation atul ke sath ho gaye.atul ek berojgaar ladka tha jisne amir bankar,logo se udhari le lekar showoff karke ragini se dosti kari thi.Bechari maasoom ragini atul ke jhanse me fas gayi thi jo ragini ke ameer baap se paisa vasoolna chahta tha.Is tarah atul ragini ka relation chalne lagta hai.jab bhi ragini ke parents use ghar bulate the wo koi na koi bahana karke hamesha taal deti thi.aur seth ji chintit ho jate the ki kahin unki beti galat sangat me na pad jaye..........acchanak ragini ke ma ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi aur unki akhiri saanse chal rahi thi....unki akhiri wish apne ragini ko dekhne ki thi lekin ragini kaise ghar jaye........usne to padhai chod di thi aur atul ke sath ek flat lekar rahne lagi thi.seth ji ke bachpan ke bhut acche dost the........dr. Shadashiv,jo unhi ke sath rehte the apni beti anusha ke sath.....anusha ne medical ki study puri ki thi aur apne papa dr. Shadashiv ke sath gaun me public welfare ka kaam kar rahi thi.jab ragini ki ma ki tabiyat kharab thi tab dr. Shadashiv aur anusha din raat unki sheva karte the aur seth ji ki haveli me hi rahte the.Suraj aur anusha ek dusre ko dilo ja se chahte the.anusha ek bhut hi acchi ladki thi aur hamesha chanchalta uski chehre pe chahkti rehti thi.......anusha aur chandni bachpan ki frnds thi aur hamesha se ek dusre pe jaan chidkti thi...............kahani ka ek aur pahlu ye tha ki chandni bhi suraj se pyar karti lekin ektarfa.Usne suraj se kabhi izhaar nahi kiyaa tha.bas use dilo ja se chahti thi aur kuch na kehti thi......bas yu hi din beette rahte hai ki acchanak ragini ki ma ki death ho jati hai.ab ragini ko majburan sahar se aana padta hai,atul bhi uske sath aata hai.Ghar me udasini ka maahaul rehta hai,isliye koi ragini ki taraf dhyan nahi deta tha.Ki acchanak ek din ragini ki tabiyat kharab ho jati hai aur wo behosh ho jati hai........dr. Shadashiv jo seth ji ke family dr. Hi the,wo ragini ko dekhte hai aur seth ji ko batate hai ki unki beti ragini pregnent hai,ye sunkar seth ji ke pairo tale jamin khisak jati hai........patni ko khokar vaise bhi unka bura haal tha ki ek unhe ki aur sadma aa lagta hai........vo bhut pareshan ho jate hai.unhe samjh me nahi aata ki vo kya kare.vo apni beti ragini ko bhi bhut chahte the isliye koi faisla nahi le pa rahe the.unki haalat buri ho jati hai aur unhe dil ka daura pad jata hai.haalat bad se badtar hote ja rahe the tabhi dr. Shadashiv unke ek upay batate hai ki suraj aur chandni ki shadi kara dete hai.shadi hone ke kuch mahine baad suraj aur chandni bahar ghumne ke bahane se bahar jayenge aur ve atul aur ragini ke bacche ko le aayenge.is tarah pariwaar ki izzat bhi bach jayegi aur ragini ke bacche ko jeevan bhi......uske kuch baad jab sab kuch normal ho jayega to phir hum ragini aur atul ki bhi shadi kara denge.is tarah sab kuch normal ho jayega.seth ji ko ye upay accha lagta hai aur ve shadi ki tayari karne lagte hai.chandni bhi is shadi ko razi ho jati kyun vo to suraj ko chahti hi thi.seth ju suraj se kahte hai ki pariwaar ki izzat bachane ka yahi rasta hai.suraj par seth ji itne ahsaan the ki wo mana nahi kar pata aur use majburan haan kehna padta hai.Is tarah haveli me vivah ki tayariya hone lagti hai.bechari anusha na to kuch keh paati hai aur na hi ro pati hai.Haveli ki izzat ke khatir vo apne pyaar ka balidaan de deti hai aur apne hi hatho apni jaan se pyari saheli aur apne pyar suraj ke shadi ki tayariya karne lagti hai.Is tarah suraj aur chandni ki shadi ho jati hai aur atul ragini ke sath vapas sahar aa jata hai.apni shadi ki pahli raat ko chandni ko suraj se pata chalta hai ki